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10 years ago
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creating fictional work is hard(duh!)
i'm no writer. writing really not working for me because I tend to change things along the way. And I'm too unorganized lol
I do write things down occasionally but it's very simplified, just as a reference and to keep me not forgetting it.
But I do love to tell a story. It's not the most original or most well written story, I never claimed that.
Making comic is one of my passion, since middle school actually.
I have to abandoned my dream to become comic artist once I know how hard it would be for mainstream publishing(I'm not good enough)
but thanks for internet and fem muscle admirer community, Magic Muscle is my breakthrough work.
Although you might think MM as my magnum opus, I dont like it. I understand MM for what it is, a fetish comic and it does its job pretty well.
but the writer in me(even though he's not good at all LOL) cries every time reading MM.
now, let make it clear that I'm NOT bashing those who like MM. I know it's a stupid fun little comic.
But as a creator, you would strife for something more.
does that sound pretentious coming from someone who make porn comic and fetish art for a living?
for me, I believe that all medium can invoke feeling regardless of theme or original intend.
Why can't porn have a good story along with awesome sex?
I might sound pretentious but that's what I'm strife for.
I don't claiming that FF has a good story(it's not) but I want FF to have some story.
Don't get me wrong, FF always is a porn comic, i'm not trying to make it into a "fictional masterpiece".
so if you're worried that I might stay away from porn route, don't worry, I'm not ;) as I'm always a perverse, porn is part of my life and I'm not gonna throw it away.
i'm no writer. writing really not working for me because I tend to change things along the way. And I'm too unorganized lol
I do write things down occasionally but it's very simplified, just as a reference and to keep me not forgetting it.
But I do love to tell a story. It's not the most original or most well written story, I never claimed that.
Making comic is one of my passion, since middle school actually.
I have to abandoned my dream to become comic artist once I know how hard it would be for mainstream publishing(I'm not good enough)
but thanks for internet and fem muscle admirer community, Magic Muscle is my breakthrough work.
Although you might think MM as my magnum opus, I dont like it. I understand MM for what it is, a fetish comic and it does its job pretty well.
but the writer in me(even though he's not good at all LOL) cries every time reading MM.
now, let make it clear that I'm NOT bashing those who like MM. I know it's a stupid fun little comic.
But as a creator, you would strife for something more.
does that sound pretentious coming from someone who make porn comic and fetish art for a living?
for me, I believe that all medium can invoke feeling regardless of theme or original intend.
Why can't porn have a good story along with awesome sex?
I might sound pretentious but that's what I'm strife for.
I don't claiming that FF has a good story(it's not) but I want FF to have some story.
Don't get me wrong, FF always is a porn comic, i'm not trying to make it into a "fictional masterpiece".
so if you're worried that I might stay away from porn route, don't worry, I'm not ;) as I'm always a perverse, porn is part of my life and I'm not gonna throw it away.
My stories are all growth related, and in many of them there are hardcore porn scenes, so you can say they are porn for macrophiles (like myself). But I always try to write a good story as well, with plot twists, character development, tension, and so on, so they become a full story on their own, and not just a mindless porn.
Personally I have to have some semblance of a story going on when I write porn (not that I write it every often, but still) or it just ends up looking very forced to me.
There should be a story in comics, even if it's a porn fetish.
Tell me about it. Glad to see there are others that try to do the same!
I try to also build a story around the 'kink' rather than just jump into the fetish and sex.
It makes the story have more substance despite it being 'porn' and makes it much more memorable.
And it can appeal to many, despite having that if the story is good enough.
Hence the term, Porn with a plot. It really boils down the writer and of course the audience.
Do they like just the porn or in it for the story as well, anxious to see what happens next?
It does not have to be mindless porn or sex comic story, it can be something much more. We just have to try!
I think porn is an area in desperate need of good stories. If you want to find ways to write better stories or just write better, let me know. I'm not the best, but I have some resources that may help out.
although that's not a story development in itself and more of an ideas and suggestion but I do integrate some of suggested ideas
into FF such as Wild west theme and tattoos that give magic power.
but yeah I think dialog could be better.
So don't think what you do is by any means inferior just because of the themes it covers. The story in Magic Muscle may be simple, but the artwork is amazing.
As for Forbidden Frontiers, it has a special place in my Heart. I was one of the people who helped come up with the title and there are a lot of things I love about it, specially the world you have created for the characters to inhabit. Their care-free attitude about sex is an ideal to aspire to, a dream of a utopia to which we all would love to escape. Xiv Deoradhan is a true hero who loves and respects nature. The opening pages took my breath away. This world was every bit as promising as the fantastic realms created by Tolkien, Lovecraft or Moebius.
But by all means, don't let my praise take away your dissatisfaction. It's not a bad thing to always aspire to something better! If you love what you do, you're 99% there and have conquered the most difficult challenge. The acceptance will come in time.
I hope this made sense.
Cheers and chance bless, my friend.
Story, for the sake of the story, with porn where it makes sense. Not porn with a story for the sake of the porn. I think that is what we crave.