I was looking over chapter 10, and as much as I liked what I did, it was lacking a critical amount of detail concerning the Aviseryl. This makes the latter chapters a bit confusing, especially concerning Arith and Selena. Once I post chapter 14: Revelation, I'll be reduxing 10 and posting it next. Hopefully things will be a bit more clear and concise with the Aviseryl culture from here on out.