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New Story! (Sort Of!)
10 years ago
YIP YIP YAP
Hey guys! Just wanted to letcha know that I just finished writing a story for 
spykr, featuring his character SpaceRemmy having some playfully destructive fun with some suburban houses! I haven't finished fully editing it yet, but you can read it by clickin' the link below!
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"Okay, new story! Cool! Why not just post it straight to FA?" Good question! The answer is that I'm waiting for some illustrations to be finished up first, so for now it'll be on hold for posting until those are done!
In the meanwhile, feel free to read away and tell me what you think! Critique is always welcome, as I could always use more tips and pieces of advice in the writing department! 'TIs the only way I can grow as a writer, in more ways than one!
spykr
I'll reread it in the morning with fresh eyes and give you a critique. I liked what I've seen, but I think there are some areas that need to be addressed.
ScavengerFox
~scavengerfox
OP
Fair enough! I look forward to hearing what you have to say!
Sylox
~sylox
Reread your story and will Note you tonight when I get home from work.
ScavengerFox
~scavengerfox
OP
Sounds good, dude! Thanks for readin'! :D
i'll read it in the morning and tell you what i think after school (2:15 is when school ends, bus ride drops me off at 2:40-50, so a bit after that i'll reread it and say my thoughts about it) hopefully the new updates that you'll add will be great, just saying.
Haruau
~haruau
It's pretty good, got detailed destruction of objects, sexy butt action, and growth. It's a pretty great story.
ScavengerFox
~scavengerfox
OP
Thanks! Glad you like!
Haruau
~haruau
It's one out of like 2 stories (including this one in the number) of spaceremmy in destructive action. Need more of it!
ScavengerFox
~scavengerfox
OP
Knowing the nature of spacemonsters, I'm sure more will come in time!
Haruau
~haruau
If so, then YAY!
ScavengerFox
~scavengerfox
OP
Heheheh! Good, good! Glad you enjoyed it, man. It sure was a blast to write, I'll tell ya that!
