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Notes about Enter Belia (english)
9 years ago
Well I want to take this time to write a little about the notes I had on the history of Belia, things I did not do and details that you may not notice, seem irrelevant or that I feel that not get clarify well
If you have not yet read the story here is if you want to take a look first
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19156742/
•The name of the orphanage where Belia grew up is St. Jerome, is the name of the patron saint of the homeless
children
• you notice that Sister Mary mentions special children? San Jeronimo is one of the few orphanages that accept gifted individuals with super powers, part of the Tutor project, orphanages of Tutor project identify and recruit individuals with special powers, and when the time comes they are channeled to groups such as ADM, Society of Heroes,The mystics defenders and of course the order of Light
• I did not know what species would be Sister Mary and I do not know why I finally decided she was pig
• Ida also comes from an orphanage, but she grew in the typical "orphanage of fear" which generated a very distant personality
• Belia an Ida see themself something like sisters but the disagree on who is supposed to be the "oldest"
• Usually I define the species of a characters, if I dont specific the species, as in the case of the general, I usually take them as they are human, but the reader is free to imagine the species that you like
• Helena cohen and / or Eliot Rivera would have a small cameo in the militar checkpoint
• In addition to extrasensory perception and telekinesis Ida has psychometry (ability to obtain relevant information of an object or person just by touching it) which is whatShe use to find the demon only to the land of the town
• In the canon of my story Helion is the lowest type of demon, they are to demons equivalent of common plants and animals
• Originally during the fight with the demon Belia would have it harder and in her desperation come in the state of white flame, this mode occurs when she is hig stressed or if is sufficiently concentrated (think like the avatar state) in this form her light attacks change to a white flame. Her strength increases especially against demons and dark beings, however I wanted the character to be established as capable of winning fights without resorting to this resource, using his strength and wit (she is a fox after all) I prefer to reserve her withe flame for very extreme situations rather than use it each time having problems ... in addition the flame burning her clothes unless bring along a special fabric that is hard to get so sometimes leaves her in an uncomfortable situation
• Yes low-level demons are very foul-mouthed, a little inspiration from The exorcist, the arch-demons and demon lords on the other hand speak in a more aristocratic manner
• Originally parallel to the story would be a scene where Zachary Ligthfox and Isabel the inquisitor talking about Belia, I decided to cut this part because first would be a bit confusing and lengthened the history and secondly because the conversation put Zachary and Isabel and under very bad light, and believe Me that Isabel is not someone particularly pleasant to begin with. It also would be a small cameo of Sasha, belia's older sister
• Selena´s species (dove) was chosen literally minutes before publishing the story, Selena have the power of healing and regeneration, also she can revive someone who is less than 5 minutes dead except for certain situations
• Isabel mentions the second race this is a reference to the Islamic tradition there are 3 races, angels, mankind and djins in the canon of my story this three races are the sons of the creation (angels, demons and creatures of chaos) the mortal (human ,animals both antopomorfic and ferals , goblins, elves mermen etc ...) and immortals (elementals, mythical animals (dragosn unicorns, phoenixes sphinxes etc.), dryads and other vegetables beings and mortals who ascend to immortality), the question is if Isabel is not from the second race then what is she ... cough... coughalicorn...cough
And since they are all my notes about the story, tell me what you think, You like the story, the story change something with this information, which iformation pice seemed more interesting
Well these two weeks have been rather heavy so I have not made progress in giving Sean O 'Grady their well-deserved awards to win both votes but fear not soon I will have the time
If you have not yet read the story here is if you want to take a look first
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19156742/
•The name of the orphanage where Belia grew up is St. Jerome, is the name of the patron saint of the homeless
children
• you notice that Sister Mary mentions special children? San Jeronimo is one of the few orphanages that accept gifted individuals with super powers, part of the Tutor project, orphanages of Tutor project identify and recruit individuals with special powers, and when the time comes they are channeled to groups such as ADM, Society of Heroes,The mystics defenders and of course the order of Light
• I did not know what species would be Sister Mary and I do not know why I finally decided she was pig
• Ida also comes from an orphanage, but she grew in the typical "orphanage of fear" which generated a very distant personality
• Belia an Ida see themself something like sisters but the disagree on who is supposed to be the "oldest"
• Usually I define the species of a characters, if I dont specific the species, as in the case of the general, I usually take them as they are human, but the reader is free to imagine the species that you like
• Helena cohen and / or Eliot Rivera would have a small cameo in the militar checkpoint
• In addition to extrasensory perception and telekinesis Ida has psychometry (ability to obtain relevant information of an object or person just by touching it) which is whatShe use to find the demon only to the land of the town
• In the canon of my story Helion is the lowest type of demon, they are to demons equivalent of common plants and animals
• Originally during the fight with the demon Belia would have it harder and in her desperation come in the state of white flame, this mode occurs when she is hig stressed or if is sufficiently concentrated (think like the avatar state) in this form her light attacks change to a white flame. Her strength increases especially against demons and dark beings, however I wanted the character to be established as capable of winning fights without resorting to this resource, using his strength and wit (she is a fox after all) I prefer to reserve her withe flame for very extreme situations rather than use it each time having problems ... in addition the flame burning her clothes unless bring along a special fabric that is hard to get so sometimes leaves her in an uncomfortable situation
• Yes low-level demons are very foul-mouthed, a little inspiration from The exorcist, the arch-demons and demon lords on the other hand speak in a more aristocratic manner
• Originally parallel to the story would be a scene where Zachary Ligthfox and Isabel the inquisitor talking about Belia, I decided to cut this part because first would be a bit confusing and lengthened the history and secondly because the conversation put Zachary and Isabel and under very bad light, and believe Me that Isabel is not someone particularly pleasant to begin with. It also would be a small cameo of Sasha, belia's older sister
• Selena´s species (dove) was chosen literally minutes before publishing the story, Selena have the power of healing and regeneration, also she can revive someone who is less than 5 minutes dead except for certain situations
• Isabel mentions the second race this is a reference to the Islamic tradition there are 3 races, angels, mankind and djins in the canon of my story this three races are the sons of the creation (angels, demons and creatures of chaos) the mortal (human ,animals both antopomorfic and ferals , goblins, elves mermen etc ...) and immortals (elementals, mythical animals (dragosn unicorns, phoenixes sphinxes etc.), dryads and other vegetables beings and mortals who ascend to immortality), the question is if Isabel is not from the second race then what is she ... cough... coughalicorn...cough
And since they are all my notes about the story, tell me what you think, You like the story, the story change something with this information, which iformation pice seemed more interesting
Well these two weeks have been rather heavy so I have not made progress in giving Sean O 'Grady their well-deserved awards to win both votes but fear not soon I will have the time
