okay ich denke ich bin da raus XD

Aza du weißt das ich deine Werke sehr mag und auch gerne Commissions bei dir aufgebe weshalb mir da nicht wirklich ein Punkt einfällt den ich kritisieren kann. Das einzige was mir aufgefallen ist das manche meinen du würdest versuchen Miles nach zu machen, vielleicht würde es sich deshalb lohnen mit dem Shading noch etwas zu experimentieren oder so.

Tut mir leid falls das nicht weiter hilft :(

und genau solche objektiven kommis brauche ich :) danke fuer den ersten !
ich werd ja eh bald vom monitor verschwinden weil ich kein internet haben werde und die zeit werd ich nutzen um am shading zu feilen und von dem stil wegzukommen.
danke nochmal fuer die kritik!

I went through some of your backlog to check, and once I got past that "holy crap you're really good at this" point, I did notice that some of your work, the characters have really angular knees, elbows, and occasionally snouts, to the point that some of the knees look more like there's a large skipping stone holding their legs together at the bend. It shows a lot in these:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19844488/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19211116/

Besides that, in this one (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19570854/), the human woman's feet seem really off, with one not really having much distinction from the leg and the other looking like it's inflating a bit.

In this one (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19195725/), Sky has a bit of the anime face going on, where it looks like the scowl is on the side of his face instead of being an actual mouth.

It feels like I'm being really nitpicky >.<

On the good side of things, you're fantastic with hair and lighting and I can only see that getting better

Thank you! Very much!
Nitpicking is great so i can see what actually bothers you guys the best! Really. That helps me a lot :)

I will try to get better especially with the knees and the ankles wich you are right about.
human feet... mmmmeh... dont really have much practice with that, so i agree with you again!

Cheers for the critique <3

Zuerst das Freundliche: Werde weiterhin bestellen, da ich deinen Stil allgemein mag und auch immer mal wieder sehe, dass in der Lage bist zu variieren (außerdem mit meinen Vorstellungen übereinstimmst und entsprechend als Bild herausbringst)

Das weniger Freundliche: Habe mich jetzt auch mal durch die ganzen Bilder durchgeklickt und gemerkt, dass zum Einen die Farben bei dir sehr grell sind und entsprechend ein wenig "kindisch" wirken. Zum Anderen habe ich auch gemerkt, dass es kaum Mut gibt in die Richtung Düster zu gehen, also sagen wir mal jetzt wo es richtig ernst mit allem ist und entsprechend auch die Farbhaltung.

ich wuerde gern ernstere bilder zeichnen! das hab ich deffinitiv fuer die zukunft vor :) danke!

I'll go from least recent to most recent, and I'll pick out 4 or five pieces.

Remember this, I personally don't like portraits, I find them boring so I'll avoid that critique and focus on composition, rhythm, and flow.

1)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19521710/
Personally I find it boring. There's some good rhythm happening with the tree and the tail, but I feel like the characters are too centered on the image as a whole and take up too much space. I'd personally like it more if we zoom out out from the pair of characters, or we zoomed in to have them encompass a lot more of the image.

2)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19552316/
I really like the flow of this. Your eye goes to her face and down her back, curling over the tail to your stamp in the bottom left corner. The character looks incredibly flat, especially her thighs. Colors are good. Maybe add a bit more "interest" to make it more appealing as a whole.

3)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19571105/
I like this one a lot mostly because of contrast and color. As for composition, the light is balanced well with the dark, but the window doesn't look like it belongs in the image. The scene outside the window is very flat. Further, the slice of pizza doesn't seem to belong either. I think adding a second light source from the bottom left to exentuate her pussy/butt/thighs would greatly improve it. And just deleting the pizza. (Even though pizza is awesome)

4)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19687297/
This is pretty good too, the contrast is incredibly good and the silhouette really makes this image great. There is clear compositional improvement through your images. The repetition of green and grey as a theme could use some variation. Try different colors. Otherwise this piece is really good (faved lol).

5)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19813626/
There is something, just "off" about their eyes. I'm not sure if there's not enough white or the chape is wrong, but there's something not quite right. The two tails we can see are very flat, and could use some more shading for definition. The cheetah's upper torso anatomy (shoulder and chest) is off as well. The right shoulder seems way too big. I know I wasn't going to critique anatomy, but it just tears my eyes away from anything else when I see it. The color variation is really nice to see, but the flattness of the tails and anatomy weirdness of the cheetah stops it from being a really good image.

6)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19813660/
Holy crap that red in the British flag panties. Wow, I can't look at anything else in the image. If that was the center point of the image, it works great, but there's some really good detail that most people will miss because of that color.

7)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19844488/
She looks like she's floating above the concrete, not standing on it. Again, that tail is incredibly flat and doesn't look like a 3D image. Further, the background doesn't seem to be in the same universe as the character. There's a really empty space in the upper left corner and with the tail glowing the way it is I'd expect to have something of importance in that corner. There's a lot of emphasis on the knees. Not sure if that was intended? But the knees bother me.

As a whole, they're all good, but you could see some incredible improvement if you focus on placement of everything on the image. Look up rule of thirds, rhythm, and try to incorporate larger symbols and shapes in to the orientation of the characters and background. Like the letter "A" being used in a lot of posters.

Let me know if you think this critique is fair and we can talk about it.
^_^

the critique is more then fair and incredibly detailed! Thank you very much! Will deffinitely work on what you pinpointed out!

^_^

Here are my critiques

-Lips, its your style and you've been developing them more, but personally I don't like the full lips or maybe lips at all pulls me out of the furry illusion as most animals lack the human lips. My favorite lips in com: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16109493/

-Shading, your shading style has been changing since I've started commissioning as it seems your trying to strike a balance between highlights and shadows and you've been improving a lot on your highlights. I like the shiny but I think if it could be better if somehow combined with better shadowing. My favorite shading in com: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16912265/

-Anatomy, your anatomy is always improving but sometimes portion or position just feels off or a back leg, arm or tail goes missing. It happens to best artist though and I often don't notice until looking at it much later. Head seems to small to me in this one: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19813660/ Thought Bubble leg cuts off and bottom background leg seems like it could be partially visible here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19835365/

I still love your work and commissioning you especially since your always improving

thank you for the comment <3 very very much as well! Love it when people are pointing out stuff on my past work so i can work from there! Cheers for that!