One or two people have evilly put this thought into my head that I should try to publish the story. Odds are if I were to try that, what I have posted is what you'd get, the rest would be part of the publishing of the whole book, along with error improvements, grammatical tweaks. Possible additions to the earlier chapters, and maybe a few other things. (stand alone story of a victim or two?)

Anyway, thoughts if I should even try this, and if I should, suggestions of who I should poke?
Mick is auto approved on sergals from the get go.
Mizu approves.
Kiru approves.
Sheza pending

What's your thoughts on this matter? I'm on the fence.