So I re watched Zootopia today and I realized something. Zootopia is an amazing movie. This is probably not news to anyone reading this, but Nick and Judy are amazing and nuanced characters, and that is the problem. They are too good for me to possibly be able to do justice to. People say I capture characters well, and I do, but they are usually anime characters, much less deep than characters from zootopia, and the fact they are subtitled makes it easy to capture them. If not that, then I just make up the characters entirely, like Syrup and Elecmon, using only appearances. So if I write something with Zootopia, I should do it with minor characters, like that Finnick and Gideon fic, expanding two characters that are only in the movie for five minutes each, that is the way to go. So anyway, here is something I wrote about Nick and Judy that I don't want to finish because I don't feel qualified to handle the characters, though if anyone wants to turn it into a little RP to try and continue it please leave a comment and maybe I will write a post in response. It will probably never be edited into something good, but who knows. The story is missing a beginning but Nick is driving Judy home from work. I am also not looking for vague critique, I know there are typos, no buildup, and I misrepresented Nick's personality. If you want to critique, please be in depth and specific.

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Edit:No longer displaying the wip here as I plan to actually finish it. Look out for it in the near future.