I would appreciate some story critique from someone who is a current or former law enforcement officer.
Currently I'm working on a script for a furry movie that has a scene set in a Sherriff Station. So it doesn't end up looking like Mayberry RFD or CSI it would be nice to have someone who knows point out how the setting and procedures can be accurately portrayed.
I don't need the whole script gone over (though that could be arranged) just a few pertinent pages.
If you are qualified and would like to help or know someone who could please let me know.