So I posted the first chapter of my story and am anxious to hear the responds. I am expecting a lot of criticism and some harsh comments, but that's completely Ok. I know that all writers get several bad reviews no matter how good or bad their work is. But that is how one improves, is to listen to the comments of others.

The first chapter was lengthy and a bit boring, introducing some of the characters, going on and on about how the project was building up, and other such tedious things. But I was sure to include some saucy bits in chapter 2, and chapter three is where they find out that they had developed some unusual anomalies.

Gonna wait till I get more feed back on Chapter 1 before posting Chapter 2. I'm not gonna be posting everything, I may stop after chapter 3 as I hope to have this story published. Just looking for simple feed back and comments that'll help me improve my skills.

I want to thank all my friends who are helping me with this. Your help is truly appreciated.

And a thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read and comment on my progress so far, good or bad. Your input is truly helpful to improving this story.

Ethanial :3