UPDATE

So after talking to someone they recommended I cut the animation from 6 min to 3. Issue with that is I’ve started adding more story to it, so I can’t cut anything. But maybe I’m thinking about this wrong. Because of that I decided to change it from an animation to an animatic.

That’ll free up a LOT more time....I hope. I’ve also altered the story a bit.



New summery.

“Revvi and her boyfriend Matthew, are shown to be very close as well as a great match. One day Revvi is requested at the Citadel Presidium. She is greeted by an older female turian named Julicar Vrol (who is a high ranking political/military figure for the turians). Vrol request that Revvi hand in her omni-disk to the turian military.

Of course Revvi refuses but as the conversation continues Vrol makes mention that her gangster daughter was killed at the hands of a very specific bounty hunter. Exclaiming that she isn’t one for revenge Vrol does make mention of ‘poetic justice’.

Having enough of military people for one day and leaves. As she heads back home she notices and update to the bounty bored: Three Million credits for a human boy named Matthew, Revvi’s boyfriend!

Will Revvi and Mathew be able to escape the Citadel with every bounty hunter and C-Sec officer after them?”



I feel this this is a more interesting plot than the ‘I will find you, and I will kill you” Taken plot. Now there will only be about 4 maybe 5 characters. That’s my limit. This project has to be doable before the Release date of Mass Effect Andromeda.

There might be more changes while developing it at work. But until then...



...what are your thought?