So I lied. About everything.
8 years ago
Well, not everything. I said that my next story would be mostly simple TF pr0n to cut my teeth. But I have come up with a plot that I really, really like. I spent a few days writing out the outline, and it comes to 7 pages (all simple plot summaries, but 7 complete pages). Each sentence is probably a paragraph, so this is going to be a short series. There are a lot of plot twists and dramatic reveals that I wanted to make sure I got completely right. Part of the criticism about my last story was that people couldn't tell the difference between the parts I intended to leave open ended and the parts that weren't flushed out enough (a criticism I strongly agree with). So this time I knew that I couldn't make up stuff on the fly and had to plot out exactly when things would be foreshadowed, when they would be intentionally vague, and when they would be eventually revealed. I hope I do a good job with this, I really do. Because of all the pre-planning, I think I'm going to be able to release it in chunks. There are four acts, but each act will be rather long and I'll probably break those acts down into individual releases on this page.
So, to make a long story short, I'm very much looking forward to introducing you to Lura's world. Or at least what's left of it after I'm finished. Coming soon: The Broken World: Desire.
So, to make a long story short, I'm very much looking forward to introducing you to Lura's world. Or at least what's left of it after I'm finished. Coming soon: The Broken World: Desire.
Osprey Hawk
~osprey
I'm available to proof read if you'd like.
dorintf
~dorintf
OP
Sure. I used to proofread a lot of stuff back in the day, but it's always good to have another set of eyes.
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