Here there be werewolves
8 years ago
Not that I don't have more than enough to work on already, but there's this script for a gay werewolf story I have been sitting on for a relatively long while now, and I haven't done anything with it so far. And yes, I'd really love to pull it out of the world of abstract pencil sketches and bring it into full existence, but I'm not quite sure if the script is as strong as it could be. I'm pleased with the first two thirds of it, but it's the final act that is bugging me - and effectively fully going forward with this project. I feel that the ending drags and goes on for far too long, but I can't quite decide what to cut from it... or if I just shouldn't even cut it from the story altogether. And this is, I guess, where I need other people's opinion.
Is anyone of you interested in taking a look at and tell me what you think? In its current incarnation it's 42 pages, written in pencil, accompanied with aforementioned pencil blobs that are sometimes more, sometimes less elaborate. But always elaborate enough to know what's going on.
Is anyone of you interested in taking a look at and tell me what you think? In its current incarnation it's 42 pages, written in pencil, accompanied with aforementioned pencil blobs that are sometimes more, sometimes less elaborate. But always elaborate enough to know what's going on.

blob-of-death
~blob-of-death
I can look over it, I have history with writing and presentation.

Vawkis
~vawkis
I'm an avid reader. I'd be more then happy to look at what you have.

Kiluke
~kiluke
I've taken some college courses so I could look at it if you want another set of eyes.

Jimonjitou
~jimonjitou
Gay werewolves sign me the fuck up send it to me or my twitter iamjoshiamhere

Sot
~sot
I would like to do it, but I think it's best if you type it out first.

TheZizamie
~thezizamie
As long as your handwriting is legible, sure!