Just thinking and rambling out loud here
8 years ago
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It's weird how I'm going back to extensively clean up my first submission with Vaporeon. Yet... the second one with Aromatisse has -nothing- I can do to clean it up or amend. Both stories play out exactly how I want them, and both seem to sit upon perfection; can't think of anything to add or change about it even though I come back and read them frequently. I do adore them both, making sense why they're the first two items I put up here.
It's just that the Aromatisse one seems to have hit the perfection mark when I finished writing it and submitted it and where I can't think of anything else to compose about it. While the Vaporeon one, though much longer, is going through such a rehaul to get to the point of perfection where no further updates are necessary for it like Aromatisse. Only thing I can think of is an entirely new story, but even that doesn't seem to mold with me that well with what I already have.
Okay, small lie. I did go back and write a better description for the Aromatisse's offspring and a few grammar clean ups. I should probably uploaded the topped-off version after I'm done writing this. Yeah. For sure.
But barring that, there's nothing else I can see about it that needs rework. Similar to the other ones, to be honest. Contrary to the Vaporeon one undergoing the remastering I've talked about. Yadda yadda. I'll stop now.
Okay never mind, seemed to have gone through. Now I'll really stop editing this damn entry.
Have a very spectacular way of dealing with yellow jackets now as a thank you for reading this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ka6Bz1cq2N4
It's just that the Aromatisse one seems to have hit the perfection mark when I finished writing it and submitted it and where I can't think of anything else to compose about it. While the Vaporeon one, though much longer, is going through such a rehaul to get to the point of perfection where no further updates are necessary for it like Aromatisse. Only thing I can think of is an entirely new story, but even that doesn't seem to mold with me that well with what I already have.
Okay, small lie. I did go back and write a better description for the Aromatisse's offspring and a few grammar clean ups. I should probably uploaded the topped-off version after I'm done writing this. Yeah. For sure.
But barring that, there's nothing else I can see about it that needs rework. Similar to the other ones, to be honest. Contrary to the Vaporeon one undergoing the remastering I've talked about. Yadda yadda. I'll stop now.
Okay never mind, seemed to have gone through. Now I'll really stop editing this damn entry.
Have a very spectacular way of dealing with yellow jackets now as a thank you for reading this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ka6Bz1cq2N4
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Now, Aromatisse pregnancy, however...