Thick story audio script draft 1
8 years ago
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I'm planning on doing an audio version of the story Thick by GTSreviewer.
Here's the script of what I have for now: (this will be updated) Also the times can be changed, I'm just doing this so I can have a frequency of the events in the story)
By the way, there are no screaming sound effects anywhere in this. Since the story didn't say so, I'm not gonna add any. (Especially since the more common ones get really annoying to listen to when they've been used so much!)
(The character is a voluptuous female anthro ninetales)
0:00 rain then stops at 5 seconds
0:10 booming footsteps (they do approach and get louder.)
0:20 snapping of trees
0:40 house crunch
0:45 second crunch
0:50 more crushing
1:00 stomping increases, she gets excited and starts to unleash a stompage fury upon the mountain community
1:15 stomping slows then ends
1:20 she glances teasingly over shoulder making sure she didn’t miss anything
1:25 footsteps resume, house crush, and small car crush, plus trees smashing
1:35 more crush, highway
1:50 small community of buildings
2:15 return to highway
2:25 gas station (repeat frequent, 8 seconds apart from each, 3 stations)
3:00 8 lane freeway
3:30 footsteps wander to homes
3:50 return to freeway
4:10 overpass kicked, then more stomping
4:20 another overpass, stomped
4:30 overpass stomp
4:45 overpass
5:00 she reaches larger buildings, strip malls, and 5 story offices
5:05 stomping stops
5:15 she taps her foot while over looking everything
5:18 full car park goes off in alarms
5:22 she stomps the car park
5:25 alarms stop
5:27 she grinds her foot
5:32 she then flattens strip malls by sliding her feet over them
5:40 offices stomped
6:00 condos, offices and malls smushed
6:50 windows rattle as she giggles when a parking garage's top levels get on her toes after she plows her foot through it
7:05 Condo stomped
7:15 building kicked through while she aims at an office high rise, while the debre causes a fire in a car park below
7:25 massive explosive stomp as she stomps on the building, snuffing the car fire and causing all the windows in uptown to shatter
7:40 she makes her way into downtown, demolishing everything in her stride
8:00 hip bumps unstompable buildings, then smashes them with her tails, while smushing smaller buildings with her paws, and her wedges demolish the streets and subway below
9:05 with downtown ruined, she stops in a park where she traces over her swath of destruction to the distant horizon.
9:15 she signs, satisfied
9:20 she then stomps her way to the other side of the park where she sees a wall of highriser hotels.
9:25 she quickly kicks, stomps and tramples them into rubble before laying down
9:50 she says: Break time.
9:55 she removes her wedges and inspects the debris they collected
10:15 she then lowers them over a parking lot, flicking the no vacancy sign with her finger first, then lets them fall with an explosive crash
10:25 ends
And that's it, that's the whole story in script form.
If someone wants to make this into an actual video, contact me through the comments and I'll give you permission to do it.
Here's the script of what I have for now: (this will be updated) Also the times can be changed, I'm just doing this so I can have a frequency of the events in the story)
By the way, there are no screaming sound effects anywhere in this. Since the story didn't say so, I'm not gonna add any. (Especially since the more common ones get really annoying to listen to when they've been used so much!)
(The character is a voluptuous female anthro ninetales)
0:00 rain then stops at 5 seconds
0:10 booming footsteps (they do approach and get louder.)
0:20 snapping of trees
0:40 house crunch
0:45 second crunch
0:50 more crushing
1:00 stomping increases, she gets excited and starts to unleash a stompage fury upon the mountain community
1:15 stomping slows then ends
1:20 she glances teasingly over shoulder making sure she didn’t miss anything
1:25 footsteps resume, house crush, and small car crush, plus trees smashing
1:35 more crush, highway
1:50 small community of buildings
2:15 return to highway
2:25 gas station (repeat frequent, 8 seconds apart from each, 3 stations)
3:00 8 lane freeway
3:30 footsteps wander to homes
3:50 return to freeway
4:10 overpass kicked, then more stomping
4:20 another overpass, stomped
4:30 overpass stomp
4:45 overpass
5:00 she reaches larger buildings, strip malls, and 5 story offices
5:05 stomping stops
5:15 she taps her foot while over looking everything
5:18 full car park goes off in alarms
5:22 she stomps the car park
5:25 alarms stop
5:27 she grinds her foot
5:32 she then flattens strip malls by sliding her feet over them
5:40 offices stomped
6:00 condos, offices and malls smushed
6:50 windows rattle as she giggles when a parking garage's top levels get on her toes after she plows her foot through it
7:05 Condo stomped
7:15 building kicked through while she aims at an office high rise, while the debre causes a fire in a car park below
7:25 massive explosive stomp as she stomps on the building, snuffing the car fire and causing all the windows in uptown to shatter
7:40 she makes her way into downtown, demolishing everything in her stride
8:00 hip bumps unstompable buildings, then smashes them with her tails, while smushing smaller buildings with her paws, and her wedges demolish the streets and subway below
9:05 with downtown ruined, she stops in a park where she traces over her swath of destruction to the distant horizon.
9:15 she signs, satisfied
9:20 she then stomps her way to the other side of the park where she sees a wall of highriser hotels.
9:25 she quickly kicks, stomps and tramples them into rubble before laying down
9:50 she says: Break time.
9:55 she removes her wedges and inspects the debris they collected
10:15 she then lowers them over a parking lot, flicking the no vacancy sign with her finger first, then lets them fall with an explosive crash
10:25 ends
And that's it, that's the whole story in script form.
If someone wants to make this into an actual video, contact me through the comments and I'll give you permission to do it.
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