So after a very eye opening workshop, I've realized that Turbo's stories aren't very....interesting, attention grabbing, or I guess have a believable story line. SO with that in mind I've decided to rewrite a few chapters so that it'll be more like the above. On that point, when I've rewritten them, I'll delete the earlier version and upload the new version, and yes I'll even label them so others won't be confused. It's better I do this now so I don't have to rewrite the whole series, THAT would be a time consumer XD