I just wanted to announce that I've updated "Servant in Place of Truth". It's the second overall chapter in Tyson and Trace's story, and it's experienced a much needed revision. A lot of work went into making Tyson's parents, his father and stepmother, seem more warm and affectionate. In hindsight, the two of them may have come across as colder than envisioned, and I'm thinking this should rectify that. I also altered the confrontation at the end to potentially avoid a plothole.

My friend  gragor helped with the editing process, and for his help, I'm truly thankful. ^^

If you'd like to read the revision, feel free to check it out here:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16991419/

Also, if the chapter still needs revising, I will tweak at it in the coming days. ^_^