Oh man, my request is the worse? I'm sorry, I didn't know I was asking for so much *Rubs the back of his head*

Not the worst, just the hardest to get started. What with me living with family and whatnot. Also it's a complex pose, so I was doing a bunch of roughs, one that I actually finished.

Oh, okay. I really appreciate your effort by the way.

Here, I just finished a cruddy rough yesterday, sorry it's taking so long, it's not very fair of me.
I'm gonna redraw this thing and colour it, but how's it look so far?

Well, you got the only tree toes right, which surprises me. But, I don't have any hair or anything like that, I'm not even sure where you got that...or eyebrows either, and I have horns. Also, my nose isn't like a dog nose, it's just nostrils. Lastly, I'd like my muzzle to be a bit longer, it's a bit too short, just lengthen it a little, and my tail should be much, much thicker. I'm a reptile, we have very thick tails, and mine is actually especially so. It should be like, you go down along my stomach, past my crotch, in between my legs, and then from there it goes straight to my tail. Not a lot of people know that about reptiles, I could give you an example if you need one. I understand this is your first dragon, so I understand there will be problems. But more than just having an accurate request, I want to tell you these things to help refine your basic model for reptiles in all, expanding you capabilities as an artist. Akhera's great though. I think he looks perfect so far.

:P Its funny I should get this comment now, because I just looked at your pics for reference and updated all that stuff.
CEPT for the tail damn.

AND YOUS A JERK FO' TELLIN' ME WHAT TO DRAW.


Nah dude, thanks alot for the critique, hows the updated one look? (I'll fix the tail in the final, I forgot about that)

Also I did this updated WIP before reading this post.

Ok, short fact. Three toes, four fingers(Including the thumb). Secondly, I don't have any hair, not even eyebrows. Maybe you should draw my eye shut, you already know the tail thing, so I guess that's it on me. I think you drew the wings in...One problem I had with Akhera though, his expression is a little...bland. He seems unhappy to fuck me in my opinion. Maybe just make him smile, or something. I dunno, minor problem, but just doesn't feel like him to me.

Sure! What sorta expression would you like?
Tounge out too? panting? Maybe like, grinning with his teeth? Should he look really dominant?
Also I'll fix up your eye, and tail. It's your request, lemme hear what he should look like! :D

Hmmm...not sure. Maybe, his maw parted just slightly. But I think he would think the more dominant you make him look the better.

alright well how about this? (uploads again)

OH man that's great. The tail is great, positioned right. Man, that's great. Thanks man. *Hugs* Can't wait for the final.

Im also working on a little diddy for me and Husk3h, from our trip to my cottage during my break. So there's your shot and this that I have to work on when I get back from work tonight.

OH, I don't have nipples either. Not a mammal.

Oo, just saw wip 2. Lemme look and reevaluate my thoughts.

don't kill yourself now...

I got a motherfuckin ant problem.

damn bees havea good time... did you forget my request? sorry if that sounds a little naggy

Nope. I remember it.