400 Watchers: Raffling Off A Story (CLOSED)
7 years ago
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Just noticed I hit 400 followers either last night or today, thank you so much! In honor of that milestone, I'm going to be raffling off a 1,500-word story. This will be a roughly 3-4 page story for the winner, it'll be your character inserted into a weight gain scenario that has something to do with the number 400. I'll hash out details with the winner!
I'd like to get some feedback from y'all, so here's the rules: to enter, leave a comment where you either a) name your two favorite stories of mine and tell me why you like them, or b) give suggestions of what kind of things you'd like to see in my content in the future. One comment per person, and if the comment doesn't follow those rules, I reserve the right to disqualify your entry.
I'll leave this open for 48 hours, so the offer closes at 7:08 p.m. EST on Tuesday, Sept. 25.
Thanks so much for your support, I really mean it!
I'd like to get some feedback from y'all, so here's the rules: to enter, leave a comment where you either a) name your two favorite stories of mine and tell me why you like them, or b) give suggestions of what kind of things you'd like to see in my content in the future. One comment per person, and if the comment doesn't follow those rules, I reserve the right to disqualify your entry.
I'll leave this open for 48 hours, so the offer closes at 7:08 p.m. EST on Tuesday, Sept. 25.
Thanks so much for your support, I really mean it!
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I’d love to see more of JT and Gemie in the future! They’re always so fun! Especially when one or both of them end up immobile (which is also like to see!). I could say my favorite two stories, but I can’t choose between any of the ones you’ve done for me! And I love them for obvious reasons XD you always capture my characters so well!
My two favorite stories from you are Zatfig City Pt. 1 and A Full-Fill-Ing Career! All of your stories are written incredibly well, but these two in particular stood out to me. With Zatfig Pt. 1, I was first won over by how well you portrayed the dream "city of fatfurs" that i'm sure many a fur has more than likely dreamt up before. I love how real thought and time was put into why the city was the way that it was instead of just going straight into fatty happy times. It just makes Pt. 1 feel so much more real and worth the read. Not only that, I praise part 1 because of how Mason knows that he can't just show up out of the blue, he's gotta make himself bigger and do his research of the culture before he can truly experience and interact with the city. (I adore the bit about their own television station, hehe.) Your added coat of semi realism makes it an extremely satisfying read. Full-Filling is favorite weight gain story bar none. It's such a roller-coater of emotions from beginning to end. You don't really expect to feel a strong emotional connection or root for TJ in the kind of story he's in, but by god, you pulled it off! You made him feel like such a real person with strengths and flaws. I was blown away from how much I could take away from it too. Not only is it just a great wg story with plenty of twists and turns, but it's also inspirational. I know i've had to live with sucky situations before, so Full-Filling only made it feel so much more down to earth and relatable to me.
With that, I wish you to keep writing my man, I look forward to each of your uploads when they come in my submissions box. You've got a real talent for this kinda thing. Good luck and happy writing!!
I want to see more instant weight gain stories from you. You do a great job of summarizing a story, but I want to see you more on describing the here and now, like how you did the fox and wolf weight gain story :3
As for feedback, I think that mise en scene is really good for stories, getting more of a feel for the surroundings to better immerse ourselves in the stories and the characters, to see the rooms and homes of the people, and how small they get as said people start to gain~
Personally I want to see more of JT and Gemie, more than that I honestly want to see their relationship explored deeper. Whether it be a deep friendship or a heart felt romance I’ll leave that to you, since you know them far better than I ever will. Anyway I wish nothing but the best and here’s for your next 400 watchers, cheers 🥂
You do well in... well, bigger stories.
What I'd want to see from you...
Hmm...
Maybe seeing characters that are already fat, and just seeing what their life is like, what they think about their life and their fat, and why. I guess?
I don't know. I just kinda like that stuff in general, and I'd love to see it from you.
So I am quite the fan of the series you've titled Zaftig and those with in its theme. Always been in love with a place thats not only fat positive but enjoys expanding new comers and regulars alike. And playing on both the good and not so good ends of gaining more than you can handle.
But I also enjoyed Massive Magic and its playful but tantalizing expansion and growth of character interaction. And how the two have grown more comfortable with each other over the series.
I'd enjoy seeing a scifi setting, Perhaps something along the lines of a Ai specialist who has been hired by a company in another galaxy and wants him to patch their archaic Ai to last an even longer time past the expiration date rather than buying a new AI. Going off the silly idea that the more complicated an Ai is customized and left running for extended periods of time will sooner or later experience mental breakdown... Techie lore from several places blah.
I could see it fitting Gemie and JT setting, with him working on a "Brand new" build of the old AI and finding out in the old specs its a leopard female Avatar. His long flight to the other galaxy being 400 days, and due to some "malfunction' in his sleep pod, he ends up spending the entire 400 days in basically one small room with his VR Net Gear and the AI, whom manages to ensure he's able to have unlimited 'food paste' due to the company he's headed to work for is a Food delivery service. And the Space ship he's on is one gigantic 'delivery space truck" perhaps getting to explore the place with her help being able to 'pretend to be the current AI' of the company because she's the original build. All thanks to both the way the original program was written by a mysterious genius/genie? Do... they have fork lifts in the space future... *winks* I hope so
Bit biased on this, but wouldn’t mind seeing some more transformation (minus the one story you’ve done, liked the idea of it) plus weight gain stories from ya. Just adds to the already, “omg I gained 800 pounds and also completely changed species”, sorta panick or surprise already going on. Give ya a bit more room to play with some other ideas/trickeries in some stories, least in my opinion.
That and wouldn’t mind seeing some more slob stuff from ya! Always been a favorite of mine. :3