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LSW The Battle of Traaly (Upcoming short stories)
7 years ago
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Hello everyone. This is a sample of the story that's going to go along with the current Tales of the Argo story arch. While the comic will focus more on the personal issues Gomoo and his friends will face, the text story will focus on the military conflict, since I haven't quite mastered drawing battles yet and the comics tend to take a bit to create. This is the prolog before to story starts, which is shortly after Gomoo, Tammy, and Hunter had their fun. It's unedited so don't be surprised if there are a few more misspelling than normal, but feel free to let me know where they are.
As always feel free to suggest characters you would like to see in my stories, comics, or other projects.
-Sample Starts Here-
On the planet of Traaly a massive battle was taking place, both in space and on the ground. In the air above Traaly a rebel force was trying to punch through a U.N.S. fleet with a minor about of success. They were able to take several of the orbiting star fortresses but the progress was slow. Every time they tried to advance, they would meet another U.N.S. fleet trying to counter charge them. The U.N.S. force would be easily swept aside only for the rebels to run into yet another U.N.S. fleet. The same went for the ground battle. Every time the rebels started their march onto the next city or town, they would run into another U.N.S. force and sweep them aside with ease.
Normally the rebels would be so worried, giving that they have won almost every single battle presented to them, however, the slow travel on the desert region of the planet was starting to take its toll. Soldiers were dehydrating or overheating, their equipment was getting bogged down by sand, and the piling bodies were starting to corrupt the land. Two of the rebel generals along with one fleet admiral wanted to find some way to speed their advance, however, the only solution any of them could come up with was to bombard the cities from orbit, something that they had strict orders not to do due to the high civilian population. So, for the moment they decided to try and drudge on as is. That changed when they finally hit a roadblock.
The rebels had just taken the western coastline of their target content and were about to take a major island settlement in the north when the U.N.S. launched a massive counterattack by land, sea, and air. In space the rebels came across a large star fortress, the largest they had ever seen. It was positioned above the island province and was blasting both air and naval ships trying to cross the ocean. On the ground, a massive U.N.S. force landed on the island and was preventing the rebels from advancing further. To make matters worse a large aquatic fleet was seen bypassing their armies, making their way towards rebel-held cities, and another ground force was seen preparing to cross the mountains in the east.
General Roh’tek of the Tyrusien assault force and Admiral Ruby Davis of the Human second fleet, felt that things had gotten desperate enough to where they had to act against orders and bombard the planet. Moving her ships over the mountain cities to the east, Admiral Davis opened fire. As U.N.S. forces were getting ready to cross the mountains, they were stopped by a hail of orbital artillery fire. Davis was able to completely arillate two of the mountain cities but before she could move onto the third the admiralty found out what she was doing and ordered her to stop.
In the end, the bombardment didn’t work. Most of the U.N.S. army hadn’t made their crossing yet, so they were largely still intact. If anything they made the situation even worse as the first thing the U.N.S. army did once they reached the bombed out cities helped the civilians. The rebels tried to do the same, using the lack of defenses to move in their forces before trying to provide aid to the civilians, but often times found themselves fighting the very people they were trying the help.
With the invasion of Traaly going south very quickly, Amaral Terrance Medina called the Star Warriors for help. Thus, the Argo was sent.
As always feel free to suggest characters you would like to see in my stories, comics, or other projects.
-Sample Starts Here-
On the planet of Traaly a massive battle was taking place, both in space and on the ground. In the air above Traaly a rebel force was trying to punch through a U.N.S. fleet with a minor about of success. They were able to take several of the orbiting star fortresses but the progress was slow. Every time they tried to advance, they would meet another U.N.S. fleet trying to counter charge them. The U.N.S. force would be easily swept aside only for the rebels to run into yet another U.N.S. fleet. The same went for the ground battle. Every time the rebels started their march onto the next city or town, they would run into another U.N.S. force and sweep them aside with ease.
Normally the rebels would be so worried, giving that they have won almost every single battle presented to them, however, the slow travel on the desert region of the planet was starting to take its toll. Soldiers were dehydrating or overheating, their equipment was getting bogged down by sand, and the piling bodies were starting to corrupt the land. Two of the rebel generals along with one fleet admiral wanted to find some way to speed their advance, however, the only solution any of them could come up with was to bombard the cities from orbit, something that they had strict orders not to do due to the high civilian population. So, for the moment they decided to try and drudge on as is. That changed when they finally hit a roadblock.
The rebels had just taken the western coastline of their target content and were about to take a major island settlement in the north when the U.N.S. launched a massive counterattack by land, sea, and air. In space the rebels came across a large star fortress, the largest they had ever seen. It was positioned above the island province and was blasting both air and naval ships trying to cross the ocean. On the ground, a massive U.N.S. force landed on the island and was preventing the rebels from advancing further. To make matters worse a large aquatic fleet was seen bypassing their armies, making their way towards rebel-held cities, and another ground force was seen preparing to cross the mountains in the east.
General Roh’tek of the Tyrusien assault force and Admiral Ruby Davis of the Human second fleet, felt that things had gotten desperate enough to where they had to act against orders and bombard the planet. Moving her ships over the mountain cities to the east, Admiral Davis opened fire. As U.N.S. forces were getting ready to cross the mountains, they were stopped by a hail of orbital artillery fire. Davis was able to completely arillate two of the mountain cities but before she could move onto the third the admiralty found out what she was doing and ordered her to stop.
In the end, the bombardment didn’t work. Most of the U.N.S. army hadn’t made their crossing yet, so they were largely still intact. If anything they made the situation even worse as the first thing the U.N.S. army did once they reached the bombed out cities helped the civilians. The rebels tried to do the same, using the lack of defenses to move in their forces before trying to provide aid to the civilians, but often times found themselves fighting the very people they were trying the help.
With the invasion of Traaly going south very quickly, Amaral Terrance Medina called the Star Warriors for help. Thus, the Argo was sent.
