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It has occured to me...
16 years ago
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That i should do something about a problem that has been impeding my march forth with pen in hand. Some of my "poems" are meant to spoke by two or more people and to solve this problem i have come up with this:
A Key!
[M] Maoku
[F] Father
[S] Son
[D] Death
and thats about all. more will come when the.... "work" arises
A Key!
[M] Maoku
[F] Father
[S] Son
[D] Death
and thats about all. more will come when the.... "work" arises
But im dense i don't get much owo
If you don't know "Eve of Fourth Dawn" goes like this
Is Maoku there?
Is Maoku there?
Maoku here. who makes the call?
The stalwart father. who takes the call?
The stalwart son. how far past midnight?
Four past midnight. on the eve of what dawn?
The Eve of Fourth Dawn
well its supposed to be read like this:
[F] {Father} Is Maoku there?
[F] {Father} Is Maoku there?
[S] {Son} Maoku here who makes the call?
[F] {Father} The Stalwart Father. who takes the call?
[S] {Son} The Stalwart Son. How far past midnight?
[F] {Father} Four past midnight. on the eve of what dawn?
[S] {Son} The Eve of Fourth Dawn
Do you understand now?
nice poem tho.