GAH! Chapter 1 is almost finished!

If anyone has any thoughts or feedback on the comic so far, I'd love to hear them! Otherwise I'ma just keep drawing. AIMLESSLY. Well, not really, the story is already planned out for the next several years, but it isn't too late to make tweaks or improvements to it if anything has come across as confusing or unclear.

Particularly in regards to the text and dialogue... do my characters talk too much? Do they not talk enough? Would you like to see more setting or more expression? Is the pace of the comic too slow, too fast? Is it too dark, or perhaps the characters take things too lightly considering the stakes? How do you feel about the overall plot? Is there tension? Is there NO tension?

Is the text too big? Too small? Is the font crisp or is it fuzzy? Do the word bubbles stand out too much? Are they lost against the background?

Are the characters relatable? Do they seem emotional or are they shallow? Do their motivations make sense?

You know what? I'ma make a poll for y'all. Here you go. Some comments or questions or thoughts or suggestions are also really appreciated!
https://goo.gl/forms/io3SHhOKhAbyIHDm2