Hello everyone.
Strange topic for my first journal, but I've done what I feel is a fairly major edit to Kamh'sen's dialogue in part five of Glamorous Alien Rock & Roll.
In the original cut, she implied that proxies were already in use. But Wyldsyde's 'Subjugation' (where the concept originated) implies that they were only seeing widespread use ten years post-integration, so this is impossible.

I've edited it down to reflect where I believe the technology could reasonably be at this point in the timeline:
Prototypes and news stories about the technology exist, but the proxies themselves aren't being used outside of a few field tests, and I've made edits to reflect that.

The edit is already up on the SoFurry version, and should follow on FA not long after.
I want this piece of work to remain as internally consistent with other UTOverse works as possible, so re-editing this bit of the story was pretty important to me.

Sorry for the hassle.

-Metaphon.