It could use some work, perhaps a change of instruments. It's a little grating in its current state. However, I think it could pass for Dragon Quest 11 music.

Yeah, I struggle with music. Sometimes I wonder if I have a talent for it and just need more practice and work, or if I just WANT to have a talent for it. =/
Don't even know how to play an instrument. But really, I suck at all traditional art- digital is where I have a remote chance of making something decent XD

I was actually lying in bed thinking that same thing. I've never really been any good at making music. I wanted to be. I thought I could be, but it's all kinda terrible.