So, a friend of mine finished a huge mlp fanfic that he's been writing over a year! Wew, that's a lot of time, but i'm glad he did it!
I helped him a little bit with the questions he had, he doesn't know much about the mlp universe but he wanted to give it a shot!
So, go and check it out and tell him what you think! He'll appreciate all kinds of feedback!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29050634/
Story contains a few vore elements and big ponies! Nothing explicit tho!