Critique. Good, Bad, Improvement
6 years ago
You can tell me if I'm using too much shading, lighting, or not doing it right with the lines or coloring methods.
Even style or suggest a better way to draw the lines, dialogue, speech or correcting grammar.
Plot ideas or the mood and attitude the characters give out or react with each other. Body shape and such too. But rule is. Don't be a douchebag about it. Cause we're adults here, not children.
Thank you.
Even style or suggest a better way to draw the lines, dialogue, speech or correcting grammar.
Plot ideas or the mood and attitude the characters give out or react with each other. Body shape and such too. But rule is. Don't be a douchebag about it. Cause we're adults here, not children.
Thank you.
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As for your English, there are some places where you could use some improvement in your comics. Some sentences don't quite have the proper flow structurally/grammatically, though the intent is still very clear in them, and I have noticed that the English has improved from when you first started the series. If you need some help proofreading the dialogue/thought bubbles, you can send it to me over PM. I'm a copy editor and proofreader, and I've worked with multiple manuscripts, so a few panels' worth of sentences can be done in probably about five to ten minutes, depending. Possibly less. And I don't mind doing it for free, since I am enjoying the direction of the comic and want to see it keep moving forward.
Contact me via PM, if you're interested.