Aww, cute character development. Do you have any other art for that gnoll character? I love the tiny cactus in his paws <3

Nah, just the one picture of Cilantro right now. But I'm very likely going to have to give him some more expressions, or maybe redraw him without the cactus.

It's a nice setup and knowing a little about Anizhar I will be looking forward to see if you continue but I think you need a good hook
Either better explanation of what to expect while playing this game. Like is this all story or will this be the kind of thing where players go looking for "bad ends"
Or better yet building it up a bit more so that there is a hook to catch players in your demon, something exciting like an aforementioned bad end.
Again looking forward to seeing what you come up with

There could certainly be bad ends. But I was more intending it to be a dating sim.

My current idea is that you'll entertain guests, which will involve you listening to them, or paying attention to their body language, and choosing the right action to make sure they leave happy, which may or may not involve sexual encounters.

Then between guests you'll have free time to chat with the various villa staff, get to know them, and maybe date them. Or just fuck them, who knows. The villa is pretty liberal about that sort of thing.

Ok that's good. I think the best thing to do then would be to get the game to a point where you can show the interaction with a guest even if it's a simple one so people have a good idea what the game will be about

Yeah.
The thing that's stopping me is what engine I want to do it in.

I kinda don't hate Ren'py, but it requires, like... coding.

And I kinda want a walkable hub, which I know I could do in RPGmaker, but probably not in Ren'py very easily.

Ooh! I just saw this but I’m heading to bed- I’ll check it out tomorrow! <3

I know it's short, but let me know what you think if you get a chance to look at it.

Oh this seem,s neat.

Thanks! Hopefully I get back to it.

Oh man, I've given this a look and it looks very, very promising! If you want any level of help with writing I would be more than honored to help you bring this to life! I see what you're doing and it is definitely going to work, so, best of luck!

I could use some help, I guess. I don't really know how to... write... something that branches.