A question for my watchers
6 years ago
If you have ever read one of my stories id love to know why. What did you like, what could have been changed, what should i improve on? A writer thrives or fades away based on the feedback they receive and i don't seem to get much at all. Its discouraging, i wont lie, and recently I've been thinking seriously about stopping entirely and just posting commissioned art from time to time. So i figured before i make a decision one way or the other i should at least make an attempt to find out what, if anything, people see in my writing.
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Nasty business was great. Nicole Benson sounds like a one off character you've introduced. Her current fate seems like it would only send her to the background never be heard of again. Yeah she's still part of the company but you'd never want to meet her.
loved Sibada and the Forty thieves. It made me feel a lot of things. Hatred and then pity for Sibada. Felt bad for some of the thieves. I'm both happy for and afraid of Varkude and how he turned out. He's a crafty monster hope he doesn't stay that way.
A Contagious Christmas was really funny to me. The idea of some bloated Llama belching infectious festive green alien glitter on the party kills me.
Being Neighborly, Nasty Business and Contagious Christmas are stories I am really proud of, but your right, they all suffer from some spelling and typo issues which frustrate me because i try to obsessively proofread my work before posting it. If that is the only constructive criticism you have i guess i'm not doing too bad then ^^
Nicole may not be a main character but her story is far from over, i hope you will like what i have planned for her.
It was supposed to be part of a series but sadly the rest never got written. Maybe someday.