If you need ideas to your patreon you could go look on others patreon se what they do.
Thats how i got mine started up. Feel free to ask me if you see anything you want help with on patreon i have got learned it all pretty fast.

But a few tips to yours.
I will say post more to your patreon, it seems pretty dead each month when i can see when the post are made.
Then i can see you have a lot of public post that may make your patreons feel unnessesary, like its not only for them.
Patreon in my opinion should be a place where you show more of yourself give exclusive content etc.

You about section are good but you could write some more on it to make people pledge?

You are free to go to my profile and take a look on how i have choosen to make mine.

This was just to try to help! ♥

I really appreciate this!! Thank you so much <3

I will work to improve it!!

No problem!
Feel free to ask for help if you need any with patreon ^w^