Need feedback.
16 years ago
I'm working up Resumes and Artist Statements for a class at school, and I need some feedback...
What do you think about my work? What comes to mind? What do you find in it? Flaws? Exceptions? Successes? How does it make you feel? Why? How?
Give me whatever you can.
What do you think about my work? What comes to mind? What do you find in it? Flaws? Exceptions? Successes? How does it make you feel? Why? How?
Give me whatever you can.
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As for emotion, I think your expressions tell so much about a piece. This one is far harder to convey in quantitative terms, but frankly...I think you just get it right. Looking at your last couple of pieces for example, the hollow look in the eyes of Gorath really hits home just how shocked, yet uncaring he is about the crime he just committed. And in the muddy one you did for me, the expression just screams joy and bliss. Even the smallest line in the smirk seems to have been carefully thought out for maximum impact.
From an improvement standpoint, I think your strength in organic shapes is also your weakness in geometric ones. I see this sort of thing a lot in artists, and there seems to be a large divide from a technical grasp. So while a character or a curtain (something with flowing lines and structure) will see to pop off the page, other things such as a table or lamp (something with straight lines or perfectly geometric curved ones) may seem flatter and less real. This is not by any means saying that you don't do geometric shapes well, in fact the more detailed pieces you've done such as http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1832210/ are incredible. I just think that as far as the next level in your development goes, that is an area you could work on to bring from great to excellent.
Hope that helps!