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5 years ago
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A LOOOOONG WHILE AGO in a universe far far but not too far away, I made a pilot chapter, or a prologue or whatever the hell you call it to a post apocalyptic zombie survival story.
It involved my main Sona, Sifferen, and his little cat sister Mirai shoved into a decaying world full of walking dead.
So like, My Avid readers; You guys wanna see more of that shit?
I have several chapters written already. Though they might need to be revamped a little bit.
I definitely want criticism on this because, I don't wanna come out with some generic Zombie novel. I want variation, I want absurdities, I want subtle Incestuous but not really incestuous actions because in reality Sifferen and Mirai are half siblings.
Here's the link to the prolouge / first chapter btw. Please tell me what y'all wanna see or what I can improve on!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
OH btw Commissions will be opening really soon!
It involved my main Sona, Sifferen, and his little cat sister Mirai shoved into a decaying world full of walking dead.
So like, My Avid readers; You guys wanna see more of that shit?
I have several chapters written already. Though they might need to be revamped a little bit.
I definitely want criticism on this because, I don't wanna come out with some generic Zombie novel. I want variation, I want absurdities, I want subtle Incestuous but not really incestuous actions because in reality Sifferen and Mirai are half siblings.
Here's the link to the prolouge / first chapter btw. Please tell me what y'all wanna see or what I can improve on!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32002415/
OH btw Commissions will be opening really soon!
