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MNYX AND WHIPLASH (PT 8)
5 years ago
Mnyx: *looking at Whiplash from behind the door* WAKE UP WHIPLASH!!!
Whiplash: Already up! *gets from under the covers*
Mnyx: You excited?
Whiplash: Of course I am! I'm yelling at 8:00 in the morning!
Mnyx: You always yell in the morning
Whiplash: I know,but never with this much enthusiasm
Mnyx: True,and I made breakfast
Whiplash: What is it?
Mnyx: Pancakes with syrup and warm milk
Whiplash: *gasp* My breakfast fave! *dashes to the kitchen*
Mnyx: *enters the kitchen* I made it as a celebration dish,for you singing in your first concert last night
Whiplash: Thanks sooo much!
Mnyx: We're also going to the Nova Nexus amusement park!
Whiplash: *eating* Awesome!
Mnyx: Jacky and Tsunami of course are joining in too,they said they saw you perform and that you were sensational
Whiplash:*still eating* I'm so happy! It feels like my birthday!
Mnyx: Well let's party B-Day style!
They eat,wash up,dress up and leave towards the Nova Nexus amusement park.
HOURS LATER (Nova Nexus Amusement Park 🎡)
The car comes to a stop in the huge parking lot of the amusement park.
Whiplash:*dashes out of the car*
Mnyx:....She's really excited, it wasn't going to be that long turning off the ignition*takes the key out of the ignition and steps out*
Whiplash: *with Jacky and Tsunami waving at Mnyx from a distance*
Mnyx: She's over there already? *runs over to them*
Tsunami: What's up Mnyx?
Mnyx: Oh nothing, just about to go in the greatest amusement park in Cyber-City
Tsunami: That's awkward,so am I
Jacky: Quit the blabbering,we ave' some roller coasters to ride!
Whiplash: Yeah,let's go!
(Once Inside)
Whiplash: I wanna ride the Tailspin!
Mnyx: I wanna ride the Circuit Cycle!
Tsunami: I wanna ride the Corkscrew!
Jacky: Any of you got a stomach for the Power Surge?
Mnyx: The new ride? We'll save that for last
Jacky: Ok,then
Whiplash: Tailspin!
Mnyx: Alright, c'mon guys
Jacky and Tsunami: *follow them*
They arrive at the Tailspin with a medium-sized line to wait in.
Tsunami: Honestly,I believe that this ride is a puke master with all those loops and twists
Jacky: I've never puked on a ride once,not in me whole life
Mnyx: That's some record, or is it a lie?
Jacky: Minxie,I'd never lie about anythin' and that Power Surge ride won't be any different
Tsunami: Hey Jak's how long can you hold your lunch, if the ride is the fastest one here?
Jacky: Doesn't matter how fast it is,I just don't puke period
Whiplash: Time to get on guys!
All: *walk to the coaster cars and strap in: Mnyx-Whiplash•Tsunami-Jacky*
Ride Announcer: WELCOME TO THE RIDE OF TWISTS AND TURNS! GET READY FOR THE TAILSPIN!*starts the ride* HAVE A GREAT TIME!
Mnyx: Here we go!
The coaster went slowly up the high incline.
Whiplash: *shaking slightly* Here it comes!
The coaster continues to click as they escalate to the top.
Tsunami: I'm so ready
It reaches the top of the track and slowly runs over it, to travel at high speed downwards and right into two corkscrews.
All: WOOOOOO!!!!
They turn right and into a full loop, then immediately into another corkscrew.
Whiplash: *slightly dizzy* AHHHHHHH!!
Mnyx: Here comes the quad loop!
They reach the famous quad-loop, going through 4 consecutive loops.
Tsunami: I'm gonna hurl!
Jacky: Don't you dare!
The coaster roars down the track and comes to a stop in the entrance area.
Ride Announcer: EVERY RIDER OUT OF YOUR SEATS, AND EXIT THE CARS SAFELY, RETRIEVE ANY BELONGINGS YOU HAVE LEFT IN THE SHELVES!
Jacky: I'm gobsmacked!
Mnyx: So am I!...whatever that means
Whiplash: That was awesome!
Tsunami: Spinning around and around and around was fantastic!
Mnyx: Now it's time for the Circuit Cycle!
All:*travel towards the Circuit Cycle and get in the line*
Riptide: How long will it take to get on this stupid ride!?!
Tomahawk: Y'know you don't have to ride this if you don't want to
Riptide: I wanna ride it's just..it's taking too long
Tomahawk: *looks behind them* Look who it is
Riptide: *turns and looks* Ugh, it's Mnyx and her other stupid friends
Tomahawk: What do you have against Mnyx anyway?
Riptide: What? It's...it's nothing, shut up about it!
Tomahawk: Ok, geez
*they all strap in: Mnyx-Jacky•Whiplash-Tsunami*
Ride Announcer: GET READY TO RIDE THE ELECTRIC CURRENT!*starts the ride* IN THE CIRCUIT CYCLE! HAVE A GREAT RIDE!
Mnyx: You ready Jak's?
Jacky: I'm ready for anythin' Minxie
Tsunami: Having a good time Whippy?
Whiplash: Yeah, the best ever!
Tsunami: Surprised you didn't blow chunks already
Whiplash: My stomach is stronger than you think, and roller coasters are awesome
The coaster seats lift and raise up to an overhead track(like the Superman roller coaster) and rollout facing the ground.
Tsunami: Oh man, I don't know about this, I hate heights
Mnyx: Don't worry, we're going into that light tube ahead
*they journey into a huge tube with multi-colored neon lights*
Whiplash: That is!--
Jacky: Awesome?
Whiplash: Yeah!
They all rock their heads back and forth in the seats, imagining that they were at a rave party.
Tsunami: This isn't much of a ride,more like a party
Mnyx: I know it's DUBTASTIC!
The ride finally reaches the end, halting and unlatching from the track.
Ride Announcer: EVERY RIDER UP AND OUT, RETRIEVE YOUR BELONGINGS BEFORE YOU LEAVE!
The night fell and lights lit the rides and attractions.
Jacky:*stomach grumbles* Oy, I'm starvin' I wouldn't mind havin' some ribs on the barbie right about now
Tsunami: Me either, let's eat
Mnyx: Well let's go to the steakhouse just across here
Whiplash:*licks her lips* Sounds delicious!
RUGGED STEAKHOUSE
*they sit at a booth near the entrance*
Waitress:(kangaroo) G'day mates, my name is Kylie and I'll be your server for the night
Mnyx: What's up Kylie?
Whiplash: Hi, Kylie
Tsunami: Hey, Kyle's
Jacky: Ay, it's an Aussie sister! Noice to meet ya
Kylie: Noice to meet you too,I'll let you all order now, and come back later*goes to another table*
Mnyx: So anyone for some steak?
Whiplash: I'd love some
Jacky: I'll need more than a sanger right now, so I'll get some ribs
Tsunami: I'll get some ribs too, and steak some other time
Kylie: I'm back, got some orders picked out yet?
Mnyx: Yep, I'll have the Aussie Steak and so will she*points to Whiplash*
Kylie: Ace, and you two will ave...?
Jacky: Baby back ribs on the barbie, please
Tsunami: I'll have the same thing
Kylie: Those are some bloody good choices, I'll have those ready in a minute
A FEW MINUTES LATER
Kylie: *lays down a big tray on the table* There you are,two plates of Aussie steak and two plates of ribs, just call if you need anything else*goes to another table*
Whiplash: *immediately grabs her plate of food and takes a bite from it* Mmm,so good
Mnyx: *grabs her plate* You must've been hungry Whiplash
Whiplash: *chewing and swallows* Mm, yeah and so is Jacky
Jacky: *devouring her ribs* Mmh, it's true, and I don't mind dog eating when I'm hungry
Whiplash: What?
Jacky: It means messy eating,not..whatever your thinking
Mnyx: Or does it? *eating*
Jacky: Minxie,you've been my cobber long enough to know how I speak *continues eating*
Mnyx: I know Jak's, it's just fun to mess with you sometimes
AFTER THE MEAL
Mnyx: That was *URRRRP* great
Tsunami: Sure was!
Jacky: *URRRRRRRP* Crikey, I ate like a brumby!
Kylie: *returns* Well you all look full,here's your docket*drops the bill on the table*
Mnyx: Were all contributing half payment to the bill, ok?
All: Alright
They pay the bill, give a tip to Kylie, and leave the restaurant.
Park Announcer: ALL RIDERS! THE PARK CLOSES IN A HALF HOUR! GET YOUR LAST RIDES!
Whiplash:*gasp* TO THE POWER SURGE!
All: *rush to the ride*
They arrived before the rest of the crowds that heard the announcement came in. They lock themselves in the 4 side by side seats and prepare to ride.
Mnyx: A new ride!
Whiplash: Why did we have to be in the front?
Tsunami: I'm edgy about this a little bit
Jacky: She'll be right Nami, that'll be a ripper of a ride!
Ride Announcer: MAKE SURE RESTRAINTS ARE TIGHT AND LOCKED! THIS RIDE MAY BE NEW BUT IT HAS SOME FAULTY WIRING! BE WARNED YOU MIGHT BE CAUGHT IN A POWER SURGE! *starts the ride* HAVE A GREAT RIDE!
The ride travels out and straight down some feet, meeting a curve and slowly going up an incline.
Whiplash: *panting*
Tsunami: You really don't like the front
The coaster continues to go up for 5 minutes.
Jacky: Crikey, I'm gobsmacked on how high we've gone, it's a beaut of a view though
Mnyx: Not for long
They finally reach the high top of the incline, and slowly bowl over the other side going at high speed downwards.
Mnyx: WOAH!
Whiplash: *eyes tightly closed, tears being ripped from them*
They go up another incline, this one facing straight up to the sky.
Whiplash: *slowly opens her eyes*
The coaster reaches the top of the track and stops, remaining still
Ride Announcer: POWER SURGE!
The coaster makes some clanking, and rapidly plummets down the track in reverse, taking many by surprise
All: AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
They go speedily up the other hill backward, and right into the other plummet
Tsunami: This is crazy!
Whiplash: 😣
Jacky: This is a bonzer ride if I ever saw one!
The coaster stops and retraces it's steps, this time finishing the drop into 3 downward corkscrews, and leading into a huge loop for a finish.
All: WOOO! AWESOME! GREAT!
Ride Announcer: EVERYONE EXIT SAFELY AND RETRIEVE BELONGINGS BEFORE YOU GO!
PARKING LOT
Mnyx: That is how you end a day of roller coaster rides!
Tsunami: Wish we could've done my ride but, eh you don't get another chance for the Power Surge
Mnyx: Well that was some real fun, bye guys
Tsunami: Bye!
Jacky: See ya around, Minxie!
They all endure the long drive back to their homes.
MNYX AND WHIPLASH'S HOUSE
Mnyx: *speedily takes her clothes off and falls in bed*
Whiplash:*does the same*
TO BE CONTINUED.....
Whiplash: Already up! *gets from under the covers*
Mnyx: You excited?
Whiplash: Of course I am! I'm yelling at 8:00 in the morning!
Mnyx: You always yell in the morning
Whiplash: I know,but never with this much enthusiasm
Mnyx: True,and I made breakfast
Whiplash: What is it?
Mnyx: Pancakes with syrup and warm milk
Whiplash: *gasp* My breakfast fave! *dashes to the kitchen*
Mnyx: *enters the kitchen* I made it as a celebration dish,for you singing in your first concert last night
Whiplash: Thanks sooo much!
Mnyx: We're also going to the Nova Nexus amusement park!
Whiplash: *eating* Awesome!
Mnyx: Jacky and Tsunami of course are joining in too,they said they saw you perform and that you were sensational
Whiplash:*still eating* I'm so happy! It feels like my birthday!
Mnyx: Well let's party B-Day style!
They eat,wash up,dress up and leave towards the Nova Nexus amusement park.
HOURS LATER (Nova Nexus Amusement Park 🎡)
The car comes to a stop in the huge parking lot of the amusement park.
Whiplash:*dashes out of the car*
Mnyx:....She's really excited, it wasn't going to be that long turning off the ignition*takes the key out of the ignition and steps out*
Whiplash: *with Jacky and Tsunami waving at Mnyx from a distance*
Mnyx: She's over there already? *runs over to them*
Tsunami: What's up Mnyx?
Mnyx: Oh nothing, just about to go in the greatest amusement park in Cyber-City
Tsunami: That's awkward,so am I
Jacky: Quit the blabbering,we ave' some roller coasters to ride!
Whiplash: Yeah,let's go!
(Once Inside)
Whiplash: I wanna ride the Tailspin!
Mnyx: I wanna ride the Circuit Cycle!
Tsunami: I wanna ride the Corkscrew!
Jacky: Any of you got a stomach for the Power Surge?
Mnyx: The new ride? We'll save that for last
Jacky: Ok,then
Whiplash: Tailspin!
Mnyx: Alright, c'mon guys
Jacky and Tsunami: *follow them*
They arrive at the Tailspin with a medium-sized line to wait in.
Tsunami: Honestly,I believe that this ride is a puke master with all those loops and twists
Jacky: I've never puked on a ride once,not in me whole life
Mnyx: That's some record, or is it a lie?
Jacky: Minxie,I'd never lie about anythin' and that Power Surge ride won't be any different
Tsunami: Hey Jak's how long can you hold your lunch, if the ride is the fastest one here?
Jacky: Doesn't matter how fast it is,I just don't puke period
Whiplash: Time to get on guys!
All: *walk to the coaster cars and strap in: Mnyx-Whiplash•Tsunami-Jacky*
Ride Announcer: WELCOME TO THE RIDE OF TWISTS AND TURNS! GET READY FOR THE TAILSPIN!*starts the ride* HAVE A GREAT TIME!
Mnyx: Here we go!
The coaster went slowly up the high incline.
Whiplash: *shaking slightly* Here it comes!
The coaster continues to click as they escalate to the top.
Tsunami: I'm so ready
It reaches the top of the track and slowly runs over it, to travel at high speed downwards and right into two corkscrews.
All: WOOOOOO!!!!
They turn right and into a full loop, then immediately into another corkscrew.
Whiplash: *slightly dizzy* AHHHHHHH!!
Mnyx: Here comes the quad loop!
They reach the famous quad-loop, going through 4 consecutive loops.
Tsunami: I'm gonna hurl!
Jacky: Don't you dare!
The coaster roars down the track and comes to a stop in the entrance area.
Ride Announcer: EVERY RIDER OUT OF YOUR SEATS, AND EXIT THE CARS SAFELY, RETRIEVE ANY BELONGINGS YOU HAVE LEFT IN THE SHELVES!
Jacky: I'm gobsmacked!
Mnyx: So am I!...whatever that means
Whiplash: That was awesome!
Tsunami: Spinning around and around and around was fantastic!
Mnyx: Now it's time for the Circuit Cycle!
All:*travel towards the Circuit Cycle and get in the line*
Riptide: How long will it take to get on this stupid ride!?!
Tomahawk: Y'know you don't have to ride this if you don't want to
Riptide: I wanna ride it's just..it's taking too long
Tomahawk: *looks behind them* Look who it is
Riptide: *turns and looks* Ugh, it's Mnyx and her other stupid friends
Tomahawk: What do you have against Mnyx anyway?
Riptide: What? It's...it's nothing, shut up about it!
Tomahawk: Ok, geez
*they all strap in: Mnyx-Jacky•Whiplash-Tsunami*
Ride Announcer: GET READY TO RIDE THE ELECTRIC CURRENT!*starts the ride* IN THE CIRCUIT CYCLE! HAVE A GREAT RIDE!
Mnyx: You ready Jak's?
Jacky: I'm ready for anythin' Minxie
Tsunami: Having a good time Whippy?
Whiplash: Yeah, the best ever!
Tsunami: Surprised you didn't blow chunks already
Whiplash: My stomach is stronger than you think, and roller coasters are awesome
The coaster seats lift and raise up to an overhead track(like the Superman roller coaster) and rollout facing the ground.
Tsunami: Oh man, I don't know about this, I hate heights
Mnyx: Don't worry, we're going into that light tube ahead
*they journey into a huge tube with multi-colored neon lights*
Whiplash: That is!--
Jacky: Awesome?
Whiplash: Yeah!
They all rock their heads back and forth in the seats, imagining that they were at a rave party.
Tsunami: This isn't much of a ride,more like a party
Mnyx: I know it's DUBTASTIC!
The ride finally reaches the end, halting and unlatching from the track.
Ride Announcer: EVERY RIDER UP AND OUT, RETRIEVE YOUR BELONGINGS BEFORE YOU LEAVE!
The night fell and lights lit the rides and attractions.
Jacky:*stomach grumbles* Oy, I'm starvin' I wouldn't mind havin' some ribs on the barbie right about now
Tsunami: Me either, let's eat
Mnyx: Well let's go to the steakhouse just across here
Whiplash:*licks her lips* Sounds delicious!
RUGGED STEAKHOUSE
*they sit at a booth near the entrance*
Waitress:(kangaroo) G'day mates, my name is Kylie and I'll be your server for the night
Mnyx: What's up Kylie?
Whiplash: Hi, Kylie
Tsunami: Hey, Kyle's
Jacky: Ay, it's an Aussie sister! Noice to meet ya
Kylie: Noice to meet you too,I'll let you all order now, and come back later*goes to another table*
Mnyx: So anyone for some steak?
Whiplash: I'd love some
Jacky: I'll need more than a sanger right now, so I'll get some ribs
Tsunami: I'll get some ribs too, and steak some other time
Kylie: I'm back, got some orders picked out yet?
Mnyx: Yep, I'll have the Aussie Steak and so will she*points to Whiplash*
Kylie: Ace, and you two will ave...?
Jacky: Baby back ribs on the barbie, please
Tsunami: I'll have the same thing
Kylie: Those are some bloody good choices, I'll have those ready in a minute
A FEW MINUTES LATER
Kylie: *lays down a big tray on the table* There you are,two plates of Aussie steak and two plates of ribs, just call if you need anything else*goes to another table*
Whiplash: *immediately grabs her plate of food and takes a bite from it* Mmm,so good
Mnyx: *grabs her plate* You must've been hungry Whiplash
Whiplash: *chewing and swallows* Mm, yeah and so is Jacky
Jacky: *devouring her ribs* Mmh, it's true, and I don't mind dog eating when I'm hungry
Whiplash: What?
Jacky: It means messy eating,not..whatever your thinking
Mnyx: Or does it? *eating*
Jacky: Minxie,you've been my cobber long enough to know how I speak *continues eating*
Mnyx: I know Jak's, it's just fun to mess with you sometimes
AFTER THE MEAL
Mnyx: That was *URRRRP* great
Tsunami: Sure was!
Jacky: *URRRRRRRP* Crikey, I ate like a brumby!
Kylie: *returns* Well you all look full,here's your docket*drops the bill on the table*
Mnyx: Were all contributing half payment to the bill, ok?
All: Alright
They pay the bill, give a tip to Kylie, and leave the restaurant.
Park Announcer: ALL RIDERS! THE PARK CLOSES IN A HALF HOUR! GET YOUR LAST RIDES!
Whiplash:*gasp* TO THE POWER SURGE!
All: *rush to the ride*
They arrived before the rest of the crowds that heard the announcement came in. They lock themselves in the 4 side by side seats and prepare to ride.
Mnyx: A new ride!
Whiplash: Why did we have to be in the front?
Tsunami: I'm edgy about this a little bit
Jacky: She'll be right Nami, that'll be a ripper of a ride!
Ride Announcer: MAKE SURE RESTRAINTS ARE TIGHT AND LOCKED! THIS RIDE MAY BE NEW BUT IT HAS SOME FAULTY WIRING! BE WARNED YOU MIGHT BE CAUGHT IN A POWER SURGE! *starts the ride* HAVE A GREAT RIDE!
The ride travels out and straight down some feet, meeting a curve and slowly going up an incline.
Whiplash: *panting*
Tsunami: You really don't like the front
The coaster continues to go up for 5 minutes.
Jacky: Crikey, I'm gobsmacked on how high we've gone, it's a beaut of a view though
Mnyx: Not for long
They finally reach the high top of the incline, and slowly bowl over the other side going at high speed downwards.
Mnyx: WOAH!
Whiplash: *eyes tightly closed, tears being ripped from them*
They go up another incline, this one facing straight up to the sky.
Whiplash: *slowly opens her eyes*
The coaster reaches the top of the track and stops, remaining still
Ride Announcer: POWER SURGE!
The coaster makes some clanking, and rapidly plummets down the track in reverse, taking many by surprise
All: AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
They go speedily up the other hill backward, and right into the other plummet
Tsunami: This is crazy!
Whiplash: 😣
Jacky: This is a bonzer ride if I ever saw one!
The coaster stops and retraces it's steps, this time finishing the drop into 3 downward corkscrews, and leading into a huge loop for a finish.
All: WOOO! AWESOME! GREAT!
Ride Announcer: EVERYONE EXIT SAFELY AND RETRIEVE BELONGINGS BEFORE YOU GO!
PARKING LOT
Mnyx: That is how you end a day of roller coaster rides!
Tsunami: Wish we could've done my ride but, eh you don't get another chance for the Power Surge
Mnyx: Well that was some real fun, bye guys
Tsunami: Bye!
Jacky: See ya around, Minxie!
They all endure the long drive back to their homes.
MNYX AND WHIPLASH'S HOUSE
Mnyx: *speedily takes her clothes off and falls in bed*
Whiplash:*does the same*
TO BE CONTINUED.....
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