Hey, before I go to bed I wanted to ask what are your guys thoughts on this. I wanted to try and write one of my smallest stories out in written form. I was gonna write floofys adventure, and I made a super tiny example. This is the last 10 seconds of the cutscene of when Floofy and sulfur finally complete the ship, and fly back to the dragon planet, but get shot down by hunters, and then they get captured and sulfur is taken to a volcano area to be studied on, and Floofy is taken to a factory to be killed. Before they do, the ship downloaded a map of the area and shot it in paper form at Floofy, and he later realizes it and goes to find and save his friend. So yeah, here’s the small example I wrote


Floofy woke up in a cold like area, except this wasn’t what he was used to feeling. Not the cold of the fluffy snow, but a hard metallic draining feeling, draining every last piece of hope he had left. “SULFUR!!” He cried, “SULFUR WERE ARE YOU?!” he started to cry, he couldn’t help himself, but tears started flooding through his eyes. He never knew what to do on his own, he knew sulfur was his best friend, and he would never leave him. Everything felt like it was getting colder, the walls seemed like they where closing in. The bars on the cage felt like they where getting smaller and smaller. Floofy screamed for sulfur, but heard nothing. All he heard was the clanging of the machines, tearing apart innocent lives. “I’m sorry, sulfur, I tried to help you” he cried, barely able to get the words out, cause the amount of despair that was in his body wouldn’t let him think. He grabbed the bars and desperately tries to escape. “HEY, THAT FOX IS MAKING NOISE AGAIN” someone yelled. “IF HE KEEPS IT UP, WILL HAVE TO PUT HIM OUT NOW!” Floofy didn’t like the sound of that. It was hopeless. He lost his friend, and the ship. All because he wasn’t able to wake up sulfur in time, from his paralyzed fear from when the hunters found them. “If I could of just figured out the ship, like he knows, he would still be here” Floofy thought. “Now he’s gone, and who knows what there doing to him. I wonder if he even rememberes me.” Floofy stopped trying to escape, and he gave up. It was over. He curled into a ball and tried to get some sleep. As he dosed off, he felt something on his fur. He checked it out, and there was a piece of paper stuck on him. He took it off, and tried to unwrap it. When he finished, what he saw shocked him. He started to feel powerful again, like the dragon berries, his blood felt hope and power burning in it. When he looked at it, he noticed it was a map leading out of the factory! “The ship must of downloaded the layout of the area before we lost it!” Floofy thought. He was still curios to why the ship was even sent in the first place, or who sent it. But none of that mattered now, he knew what he had to do. It wasn’t gonna be easy. “I’m gonna get him back no matter what, he’s my best friend, and he’ll always be” the factory was huge, and had lots of hunters scattered around it. “This is very dangerous, but sulfur will always be my friend, and I’m going to save him no matter what it takes” Floofy waited for the hunters to leave, and he ran towards the cage bars as fast as he could. Over and over, he charged until he was squeezed between the bars. He ran with all his might, the determination of seeing his friend again flowing through his blood, he squeezed through, and began his journey to find his friend. What seemed like an end to a long and painful adventure, is just the beginning of a whole new one.

So there it is, if it’s good let me know, I want to write the entire thing, it’s my first time writing something and I hope I did good. It’s one of my smallest stories. Inspired from fox and the hound and Kirby’s return to dreamland, but the story is mostly original. I hope it looks good, I might try to write my bigger stories in the future.