Give your actual rates under commission info.
It would be more viewer-friendly if you removed the monster on the left on the artwork pages and ran the thumbs several across.
Add info about the art. If it's worth putting up there, it's worth talking about.

ya i mean to work a lot more on the commission info page, its kinda hard cuz i dont have set prices for everything yet lol..but i guess ill need to make some.

The main background image is sick <3 but if possible, it might make it abit more dynamic to have an image for each page. Also mabey a little sorta mission statement at on the "home" page.

A small gallery of your favorite works would also help showcase your talents to newcomers, and provide examples for the commissions page as well :3

And derp X3 I just realized you had the gallery already up.

But yhea, it looks really nice so far, thumbnails *may* be an easier way to navigate the galleries, though thats just me thinking out loud. I still think the background image is a nice touch as it keeps people focused on what makes your style stand out from others ;3

Mabey a shinier banner :3?