I've got to do some thinking on chapter eleven. Theres at least one scene with the bad guys I'm going to delete for sure. But the other scenes probably all need complete make overs. Its kinda frustrating that I've had to rewrite the whole book again, but at least its a pheonix from the flames. I'm practically completely certain that I will not be making my deadline of October 31st either. There is just so much that I need to change, and one month is just too much. Unless I quit my job, but that doesn't seem like a good idea. I'm pretty sure now though, that I'm going to tell them to give me fewer hours so that I can wrte. Oh my boss is going to love to hear that, especially since she wants me to be a manager and work fourty hours. My parents also aren't going to be happy with the hours either. Tough, deal with it I say!

Thanks for listening to the update.