How can I improve this? (Nsfw)
4 years ago
★★★★★| Commission Que |Tumblr | Bsky | Commissions | Patreon |★★★★★ So I did a sketch of some naida/Patelliday here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42003028/
But I'm wondering how I can improve this if I wanted to make it more complete later?
I'm open to any suggestions, references and red lining welcome!
But I'm wondering how I can improve this if I wanted to make it more complete later?
I'm open to any suggestions, references and red lining welcome!
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could try breaking up parts of the overall silhouette a little more too, make it more intimate between them as a pair and put in some additional actions of how their physical affection, so different ways they hold onto each other, if they nuzzle/kiss each other in different ways.
Pretty much play more with what goes with their character, theres no real set way to do it
is this any better? im not exactly the most confident when it comes to nsfw and posing in general dfkgjhdlakjfhlkadfhpiu;
Only other thing i could suggest is playing with head placement to show a little more of Naida's face, not sure the best way to say it, id do some sketches if i wasnt in a drawing rut ;w;
Could try with Naida's muzzle more towards the top of pats head or her head tilted back and facing up a little more and her back arched a little more