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All that Jiggles ending change
4 years ago
The wolf ain't funny but he can't do shit.
Heyo, Just a quick journal to say that I've gone back and changed the ending scene for the story All that Jiggles is gold which can be found here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36769713/
The original ending was alright, but I felt it needed a bit of a change. I didn't like how Raleigh just lost all that weight. Felt like there was no consequence to what happened. So I changed it. Hopefully people will like the change. Plus, it gives Ruby a chance to go out and do her own thing someday. Lemme know what you think!
The original ending was alright, but I felt it needed a bit of a change. I didn't like how Raleigh just lost all that weight. Felt like there was no consequence to what happened. So I changed it. Hopefully people will like the change. Plus, it gives Ruby a chance to go out and do her own thing someday. Lemme know what you think!
(Must be an amazing coincidence that you posted this right after I finished the original story!) I didn't mind the original ending, but do think this is a bit better. Raleigh earned her happy ending, but it should cost something. And it's not like she doesn't have hope of recovering, eventually. Plus it's more rewarding for Ruby, who's certainly earned her reward too.
Almeric
~almeric
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Thanks. That's pretty much how I felt. I always wanted to go back and redo it.
That does fit a bit better. :)
