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Bunny story writing is slow, but I have a few new lines
5 years ago
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Hey guys and girls!
Just to info, I didn't abandon Bunny's story, I'm just slow, didn't have much time and I still miss a lot of plot points to complete the next part. I don't want to release just a handful of pages.
I feel bad to that I cannot deliver you new content faster, BUT I have at least a few new lines from the beginning of the next part (5). Enjoy the quick reading and pardon my language skills!😁
She seems to be lucky about her outfit. He had to admit that she looks very adorable in it. For a huge reptile, he thought.
Strange enough that she worries about how others perceive her, let alone that it is important to her to be attractive. For whom? Why? Redum didn't think something like her can develop a feeling for it at all. Obviously a result of human genes or whatever Red Leaf had mixed up in their labs.
Her self-awareness is definitely above an animalistic level. Without knowing and seeing her, you might think dealing with a human, albeit a rather strange one. And that's where the problems start. Her behavior is difficult to assess. It doesn't fit into any scheme.
If you had to explain her behavior to an outsider, you could compare it to a shipwrecked man with amnesia. Doesn't know much about himself, but knows and understands the environment. Then there is this typical animalistic, pragmatic behavior.
At least it's very predictable. Keep her busy, in line, do not give her the feeling of being locked, and everything will be fine. Besides that, be always on the look-out. Don't get lulled by her soft voice and big eyes. Never be inattentive. Shortly after she woke up in the cage, she immediately inspected the cage and security for weak spots.
Heavy and Nergal saw this too and weren't surprised when she tried
to grab the Doc of all people when he brought her water. She has observed every detail beforehand. She knew that Heavy and Nergal are dangerous, hard targets. Not the Doc and he had the key to the cage. What would be her next step...? It doesn't matter. The situation had shown that she's ready to attack everyone that's between her and her objectives. Redum must find out how far her loyalty for them goes. Completely lost in his thoughts, still staring at Bunny, who tilts her head to one side.
"Alani?"
"Oh, sorry. I was just thinking about something. Common, turn around. Let's see how you look."
She slowly begins to turn on the spot, trying not to knock over things with her tail again.
Redum cannot avoid admiring her elegance, she's healing very quick. Her muscles are as good as restored, if not better, and she's no longer as emaciated as when they first met.
"You looking great in that outfit" Redum said with a smile.
Bunny's face lights up.
"Do you really like it?" She asked, a bit insecure.
"Absolutely! Haven't seen a prettier predator yet." Redum jokes.
Bunny still looking at him with big dreamy eyes.
OK, time for sleep. Tomorrow will be an interesting day. You have a date at with the Doc first, after that you go to the training with us. Bunny looks toward her sleeping corner with a pile of folded blankets, then at Redum.
"I want to sleep in the bed, too." Bunny claims.
"I'm afraid that's not possible." Redum replies amused.
"Why?"
Redum moans.
"Be glad that you are allowed to be here and not locked up somewhere. You have more luxury here than many others. Besides that, I need my sleep too. Where should I go? I'm not going to sleep on the floor, lady."
Bunny looks disappointed at the mattress in her corner.
"But I don't want..."
"Hey, come on. You've been living in the jungle for... I don't know how long, and now you refuse such a nice soft nest? I'm exhausted. Please do me a favor and lie down now."
Without saying anything, Bunny moves to the sleeping corner and lies down on her side without covering herself.
Redum, just shakes his head as he strips down to his shorts and lies down on the bed.
"Sleep well, Bunny."
No answer. Let her pout. While Redum turns off the light and crawls under the covers, he review the day. A rustling sound came from Bunny's corner.
Redum has to think about the loyalty thing again. It won't be easy. You have to offer something to motivates her. Releasing her somewhere into the wild is no option. She's too expensive and who knows what others would do with her. She doesn't get along with other animals either. That's what she said, and he also cannot imagine how she would fit into a raptor pack. That won't work at all. If it does, should they put her in a zoo? What a terrible thought.
Maybe the answer is much simpler. A job and a home. A recon for Charly? High risk, but she would be taken care of, employed, and will serve her intended purpose, field study ca be expanded.
"But who will take care of you?" Redum asks himself. He can't be there all the time either, taking her on every mandate. Does she even want to? How old can she get anyway?
Just as he is about to drift off into sleep, he hears rustling behind him again.
"Alani?"
Sleepily, he registers Bunny's whispering voice.
"Alani?"
"What's up?" He asks tiredly without moving.
"I don't want to lie in the corner anymore."
"...I...I don't care.... Let me sleep..." He answers tiredly.
Suddenly movement behind him.
"She's not going to..." he thinks to himself. He can't finish his thought, because Bunny has already squeezed herself onto the narrow bed.
"What the fuck?! Bunny, are you crazy?!" he asks, confused and frightened.
Bunny doesn't care. She pushes herself further onto the bed and, to his amazement, under the covers.
"Bunny, what the hell are you doing?!" Panic. One wrong move, and she could seriously hurt him with her claws.
"Your bed is much better."
"No! Fuck...! It's too narrow! You could hurt me! Damn, if someone sees us like this..."
She's not a dog sleeping at the foot of the bed, Redum thought.
Bunny says nothing. Instead, she snuggles against his back and puts her arm around his chest.
"Bunny, what are you doing?" Redum ask nervously.
Her shirt is off. She clings tighter. He can't kick her out now. Boxer is still outside the door. Should he call him for help? The situation would not only be embarrassing, but also dangerous for everyone.
She puts her leg over his. Now he definitely can't leave. "I hope she don't gut me out" he thought, still trying to cope with the situation. Her panties seem to be off as well. What a strange situation. He can feel her demanding but soulful embrace, her firm silky skin, the tension of her muscles, and her strange warmth.
"Why are you doing this?"
"I want to be with you." Bunny whispers.
Just to info, I didn't abandon Bunny's story, I'm just slow, didn't have much time and I still miss a lot of plot points to complete the next part. I don't want to release just a handful of pages.
I feel bad to that I cannot deliver you new content faster, BUT I have at least a few new lines from the beginning of the next part (5). Enjoy the quick reading and pardon my language skills!😁
🦖💞⚤
. . .She seems to be lucky about her outfit. He had to admit that she looks very adorable in it. For a huge reptile, he thought.
Strange enough that she worries about how others perceive her, let alone that it is important to her to be attractive. For whom? Why? Redum didn't think something like her can develop a feeling for it at all. Obviously a result of human genes or whatever Red Leaf had mixed up in their labs.
Her self-awareness is definitely above an animalistic level. Without knowing and seeing her, you might think dealing with a human, albeit a rather strange one. And that's where the problems start. Her behavior is difficult to assess. It doesn't fit into any scheme.
If you had to explain her behavior to an outsider, you could compare it to a shipwrecked man with amnesia. Doesn't know much about himself, but knows and understands the environment. Then there is this typical animalistic, pragmatic behavior.
At least it's very predictable. Keep her busy, in line, do not give her the feeling of being locked, and everything will be fine. Besides that, be always on the look-out. Don't get lulled by her soft voice and big eyes. Never be inattentive. Shortly after she woke up in the cage, she immediately inspected the cage and security for weak spots.
Heavy and Nergal saw this too and weren't surprised when she tried
to grab the Doc of all people when he brought her water. She has observed every detail beforehand. She knew that Heavy and Nergal are dangerous, hard targets. Not the Doc and he had the key to the cage. What would be her next step...? It doesn't matter. The situation had shown that she's ready to attack everyone that's between her and her objectives. Redum must find out how far her loyalty for them goes. Completely lost in his thoughts, still staring at Bunny, who tilts her head to one side.
"Alani?"
"Oh, sorry. I was just thinking about something. Common, turn around. Let's see how you look."
She slowly begins to turn on the spot, trying not to knock over things with her tail again.
Redum cannot avoid admiring her elegance, she's healing very quick. Her muscles are as good as restored, if not better, and she's no longer as emaciated as when they first met.
"You looking great in that outfit" Redum said with a smile.
Bunny's face lights up.
"Do you really like it?" She asked, a bit insecure.
"Absolutely! Haven't seen a prettier predator yet." Redum jokes.
Bunny still looking at him with big dreamy eyes.
OK, time for sleep. Tomorrow will be an interesting day. You have a date at with the Doc first, after that you go to the training with us. Bunny looks toward her sleeping corner with a pile of folded blankets, then at Redum.
"I want to sleep in the bed, too." Bunny claims.
"I'm afraid that's not possible." Redum replies amused.
"Why?"
Redum moans.
"Be glad that you are allowed to be here and not locked up somewhere. You have more luxury here than many others. Besides that, I need my sleep too. Where should I go? I'm not going to sleep on the floor, lady."
Bunny looks disappointed at the mattress in her corner.
"But I don't want..."
"Hey, come on. You've been living in the jungle for... I don't know how long, and now you refuse such a nice soft nest? I'm exhausted. Please do me a favor and lie down now."
Without saying anything, Bunny moves to the sleeping corner and lies down on her side without covering herself.
Redum, just shakes his head as he strips down to his shorts and lies down on the bed.
"Sleep well, Bunny."
No answer. Let her pout. While Redum turns off the light and crawls under the covers, he review the day. A rustling sound came from Bunny's corner.
Redum has to think about the loyalty thing again. It won't be easy. You have to offer something to motivates her. Releasing her somewhere into the wild is no option. She's too expensive and who knows what others would do with her. She doesn't get along with other animals either. That's what she said, and he also cannot imagine how she would fit into a raptor pack. That won't work at all. If it does, should they put her in a zoo? What a terrible thought.
Maybe the answer is much simpler. A job and a home. A recon for Charly? High risk, but she would be taken care of, employed, and will serve her intended purpose, field study ca be expanded.
"But who will take care of you?" Redum asks himself. He can't be there all the time either, taking her on every mandate. Does she even want to? How old can she get anyway?
Just as he is about to drift off into sleep, he hears rustling behind him again.
"Alani?"
Sleepily, he registers Bunny's whispering voice.
"Alani?"
"What's up?" He asks tiredly without moving.
"I don't want to lie in the corner anymore."
"...I...I don't care.... Let me sleep..." He answers tiredly.
Suddenly movement behind him.
"She's not going to..." he thinks to himself. He can't finish his thought, because Bunny has already squeezed herself onto the narrow bed.
"What the fuck?! Bunny, are you crazy?!" he asks, confused and frightened.
Bunny doesn't care. She pushes herself further onto the bed and, to his amazement, under the covers.
"Bunny, what the hell are you doing?!" Panic. One wrong move, and she could seriously hurt him with her claws.
"Your bed is much better."
"No! Fuck...! It's too narrow! You could hurt me! Damn, if someone sees us like this..."
She's not a dog sleeping at the foot of the bed, Redum thought.
Bunny says nothing. Instead, she snuggles against his back and puts her arm around his chest.
"Bunny, what are you doing?" Redum ask nervously.
Her shirt is off. She clings tighter. He can't kick her out now. Boxer is still outside the door. Should he call him for help? The situation would not only be embarrassing, but also dangerous for everyone.
She puts her leg over his. Now he definitely can't leave. "I hope she don't gut me out" he thought, still trying to cope with the situation. Her panties seem to be off as well. What a strange situation. He can feel her demanding but soulful embrace, her firm silky skin, the tension of her muscles, and her strange warmth.
"Why are you doing this?"
"I want to be with you." Bunny whispers.
. . .
There is a simple way to make relations stronger and get more loyalty...
"Are you pondering what I am pondeing, Pinky?"
"Yes, Brain, but who will be DM for that D&D party?"
"No Pinky, they should smash!"
May be feplaced by CS:GO, CoD, Operation Flashpoint or other online shooter you find appropriate for Alani and Bunny. But guess real training is much more interesting))
Anyway, I tried to do a classic "Pinky and Brain" cartoon joke when Pinky say something sooooo faaaaar from original idea that it does not make sense at all)
Both will do real training. No VR.
Wish I could still write like that, your making one hell of a story.
Also Bunny reminded me bit of a cat there at the end seeking attention. The Bunny demands attention, she wants it now! The danger waifu wants the snuggles and cuddles and she not taking no as an answer.
Super cute, good luck with your writing!
Love how she's not quite human... and nor she should be!