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Amber Heart's Mary-Sue Test
Posted 10 years agoX- Full points
/ - Half Points (Only half of what it says is true)
Name:
[] Is it your real name? (+5)
[ ] Is it your real nickname?(+3)
[x] Is it a human name at all? (+2)
[x] Does it have to do with their cutie mark? (-2) (Amber Heart, Heart is the caring side of her)
Total so far: 0
Appearance:
[ ] Does it have a canon character's mane? (+2)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash's? (+4)
[ ] How many colors does its mane have? (+2 for each color past 1)
[ ] Does it sparkle or glitter? (+5)
[ ] Unicorn? (+3)
[x] Pegasus? (+2)
[ ] Earth Pony? (-1)
[ ] Alicorn? (+10)
[ ] Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? (+4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra)
[ ] Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? (+3)
[ ] Are they purple? (+2) (Lighter shade)
[ ] Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" (+3)
[ ] Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? (+2)
[ ] Are they male? (+1)
[x] Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? (+1)
Total so far: 3
Cutie Mark
[ ] Does it ever change? (+10)
[/] Do they have more than 1 special talent? (+4) (Specialized in taking care of others though is skilled in apothecary as well)
[ ] Does it cover the entire flank? Ex: Luna's (+2)
[ ] Is it something lame and not very impressive? Ex: cleaning windows (-3)
[ ] Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do? (+2)
[ ] Are they the best at what they do? (+5)
[ ] Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the main characters? (+3)
Total so far: 5
Relationships:
[ ] Are they in a romantic relationship? (+3)
[ ] More than one? (+3)
[ ] With a canon character? (+4)
[ ] With Luna or Celestia? (+8)
[ ] With any of the Mane 6? (+4)
[x] Are your character and a main character friends? (+1)
[x] Is it one of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are they related to a well known/canon/main character? (+5)
[ ] Is it royalty? (+3)
Total so far: 8
Personality
[x] Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? (+2) (Kinda a mix of Pinkie and Rainbow Dash)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash? (+1)
[ ] Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? (+3)
[ ] They are loved by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+2)
[ ] Are they hated by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+1)
[ ] Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly(-6)
GRAND TOTAL: 10
0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!
9-12 Well balanced!
13-18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC
19+ you might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible. (Mary-Sue)
/ - Half Points (Only half of what it says is true)
Name:
[] Is it your real name? (+5)
[ ] Is it your real nickname?(+3)
[x] Is it a human name at all? (+2)
[x] Does it have to do with their cutie mark? (-2) (Amber Heart, Heart is the caring side of her)
Total so far: 0
Appearance:
[ ] Does it have a canon character's mane? (+2)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash's? (+4)
[ ] How many colors does its mane have? (+2 for each color past 1)
[ ] Does it sparkle or glitter? (+5)
[ ] Unicorn? (+3)
[x] Pegasus? (+2)
[ ] Earth Pony? (-1)
[ ] Alicorn? (+10)
[ ] Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? (+4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra)
[ ] Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? (+3)
[ ] Are they purple? (+2) (Lighter shade)
[ ] Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" (+3)
[ ] Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? (+2)
[ ] Are they male? (+1)
[x] Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? (+1)
Total so far: 3
Cutie Mark
[ ] Does it ever change? (+10)
[/] Do they have more than 1 special talent? (+4) (Specialized in taking care of others though is skilled in apothecary as well)
[ ] Does it cover the entire flank? Ex: Luna's (+2)
[ ] Is it something lame and not very impressive? Ex: cleaning windows (-3)
[ ] Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do? (+2)
[ ] Are they the best at what they do? (+5)
[ ] Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the main characters? (+3)
Total so far: 5
Relationships:
[ ] Are they in a romantic relationship? (+3)
[ ] More than one? (+3)
[ ] With a canon character? (+4)
[ ] With Luna or Celestia? (+8)
[ ] With any of the Mane 6? (+4)
[x] Are your character and a main character friends? (+1)
[x] Is it one of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6? (+2)
[ ] Are they related to a well known/canon/main character? (+5)
[ ] Is it royalty? (+3)
Total so far: 8
Personality
[x] Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? (+2) (Kinda a mix of Pinkie and Rainbow Dash)
[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash? (+1)
[ ] Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? (+3)
[ ] They are loved by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+2)
[ ] Are they hated by everypony? (+5)
[ ] Except one? (+1)
[ ] Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly(-6)
GRAND TOTAL: 10
0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!
9-12 Well balanced!
13-18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC
19+ you might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible. (Mary-Sue)
To all the new watchers
Posted 11 years agoWell hi XD I honestly have no idea what you're watching for since I don't do any of my own art but thanks nonetheless! If you like kittens and ponies you're in the right place at least. Thanks for watching!
