Creative Feedback - Story Idea
Posted 4 years agoHello all,
I'm hoping for some feedback/creative direction on a story idea I typed out briefly today.
Shoot some ideas my way, perhaps one will end up the direction I end up taking it.
Thanks!
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Nose twitch…..Callie’s nostrils fill with a sticky, sweet scent that wafts in layers up through the blankets enveloping her naked body. She salivates as if on command, an automatic body response that she can’t control. The scent permeates her dream, rousing her just enough to be aware of somebody else in her bed. Deft fingers rub lightly up her back, sharp nails just barely scratching the skin beneath her silky fur. Breathing in deeply, the wolfess enjoys the sweet musk that now completely fills the room. Her sister apparently had some good dreams last night….and needs some assistance.
Rolling over, Callie makes out the hazy outline of her twin through the morning light struggling to penetrate the thick curtains. She is naked, her pert breasts showcasing erect nipples which she strokes and teases with her free hand. The other hand continues its caressing, making its way down between Callie’s legs.
“You had better hope your boyfriend doesn’t show up, Petra….if I’m not mistaken, you haven’t informed him of my occasional assistance. And on the off chance that he doesn’t mind….I’m not in the mood to share you in a threesome.” Callie spreads her legs, allowing her own arousal to float up above the blankets. She sees her sisters’ nose twitch as she catches the scent. Petra’s fingers close in on their target and begin to rub in gentle circles on Callie’s clit, eliciting a groan from the sleepy wolfess.
“He isn’t coming over today….it’s just me and you, Sister. I know that’s how you like it…” Unable to resist the sweet smell of Callie’s arousal, Petra sunk her muzzle down level with her sister's clit, breathing in deeply to fill her nose with the thick scent. Her tongue inched out and softly brushed the swollen slit filling her vision, taking a moment to savor the thick juices starting to build up.
I'm hoping for some feedback/creative direction on a story idea I typed out briefly today.
Shoot some ideas my way, perhaps one will end up the direction I end up taking it.
Thanks!
***********
Nose twitch…..Callie’s nostrils fill with a sticky, sweet scent that wafts in layers up through the blankets enveloping her naked body. She salivates as if on command, an automatic body response that she can’t control. The scent permeates her dream, rousing her just enough to be aware of somebody else in her bed. Deft fingers rub lightly up her back, sharp nails just barely scratching the skin beneath her silky fur. Breathing in deeply, the wolfess enjoys the sweet musk that now completely fills the room. Her sister apparently had some good dreams last night….and needs some assistance.
Rolling over, Callie makes out the hazy outline of her twin through the morning light struggling to penetrate the thick curtains. She is naked, her pert breasts showcasing erect nipples which she strokes and teases with her free hand. The other hand continues its caressing, making its way down between Callie’s legs.
“You had better hope your boyfriend doesn’t show up, Petra….if I’m not mistaken, you haven’t informed him of my occasional assistance. And on the off chance that he doesn’t mind….I’m not in the mood to share you in a threesome.” Callie spreads her legs, allowing her own arousal to float up above the blankets. She sees her sisters’ nose twitch as she catches the scent. Petra’s fingers close in on their target and begin to rub in gentle circles on Callie’s clit, eliciting a groan from the sleepy wolfess.
“He isn’t coming over today….it’s just me and you, Sister. I know that’s how you like it…” Unable to resist the sweet smell of Callie’s arousal, Petra sunk her muzzle down level with her sister's clit, breathing in deeply to fill her nose with the thick scent. Her tongue inched out and softly brushed the swollen slit filling her vision, taking a moment to savor the thick juices starting to build up.
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