the next chapter four and five have been poster, don't forget to put your comments down below on what you think of it and what you think i should modify about it

Well ingot the first three chapters up if anyones interested. I would like everyones opinions on the storybso far, what you think is going to happen, and how good or bad it is. Please and thankyou

i got the first three chapters up for grabs and reading, anyoneone wanna read the first chapter, well here is the link to it

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/138...../#cid:99768654