I will not be doing the Applejack flash
Posted 11 years agoHowever, due to popular demand, I think that I will attempt to create another flash with Lemony and I can try to make it more interactive than the last.
That said, I would wish to know what you would want to see and this may or may not influence the outcome. (For example, Weight gain, Inflation or Stuffing etc.)
I have also recently been very inactive and hope to finally change this.
    That said, I would wish to know what you would want to see and this may or may not influence the outcome. (For example, Weight gain, Inflation or Stuffing etc.)
I have also recently been very inactive and hope to finally change this.
MLP: S4 finale
Posted 11 years agoThere is an opinion ahead, that is mostly negative. Turn back now, if you do not wish to read such things.
Now, I took my time to actually watch season four. I was not particularly thrilled and it did not invoke the usual wonder and joy that previous seasons have, much to my disappointment.
But the last episode, "Twilights Kingdom" gave me some open questions, that I would simply like to bring up.
Why was it called "Twilights Kingdom"? She did not recieve a Kingdom, merely a very out of place castle within ponyville. The show writers could have easily given her a kingdom within the borders of Equestria, perhaps a small one as the Crystal Empire is. I do not understand this decision. "A Princesses purpose" or even simply "The power of Friendship" would have easily suited as a title, instead of this rather misleading one.
Why did Tirek not know of Twilight, but of Cadence? It was established that Tirek had been imprisoned before Lunas banishment, and it makes sense he knew of Celestia and Luna, as they were the ones responsable. However, Cadence was pretty much established to not have had an involvement, nor a lifespan like the two sisters. If Tirek, in his time of freedom until this episode, had figured out that Cadence existed, due to the Crystal Empire, then he would have easily found out about Twilight, who got a coronation, a parade, had saved the two princesses as they disappeared (The moon and sun standing in the sky at the same time must have been a hint at them missing. Tirek can not be this dumb.) and who was present at various events as well. A Princess, useful or not, should be spoken of. Esspecially one who was once Celestias personal student.
Why did the Alicorns give Twilight all her magic, instead of doing something beforehand? Tirek was weak, but Celestia, instead of handeling this together with Discord, sent him alone. I do not see why, Tirek would have not been able to absorb her magic in that state of being. In fact, why didn't the three alicorns team up to destroy him, using Discord as a way to find him? It was clear he could not harm Discord until he had gotten powerful enough. Every decision made seemed unlogical to me, merely serving the purpose to get the most powerful ponies out of the way, so that Twilight could have her moment.
Also, giving Twilight the magic merely postponed the entire thing. What was she to do with this, wait until Tirek got bored? Why was she not to tell her friends? This was already a flaw in the Crystal Empire episodes, telling the pony who has overcome all challenges with her friends, to not trust her friends to help her. I do not see the point.
These are the three issues that bug me the most in this episode.
The writing for this season and this episode esspeccially, seemed rather.. uncreative and bland, less like a living breathing world and more like the recital of "what do I need to do, to achieve this point".
I am sorry, I am normally not the person for such rants. I assume it just needed to get out. It saddens me to a degree.
    Now, I took my time to actually watch season four. I was not particularly thrilled and it did not invoke the usual wonder and joy that previous seasons have, much to my disappointment.
But the last episode, "Twilights Kingdom" gave me some open questions, that I would simply like to bring up.
Why was it called "Twilights Kingdom"? She did not recieve a Kingdom, merely a very out of place castle within ponyville. The show writers could have easily given her a kingdom within the borders of Equestria, perhaps a small one as the Crystal Empire is. I do not understand this decision. "A Princesses purpose" or even simply "The power of Friendship" would have easily suited as a title, instead of this rather misleading one.
Why did Tirek not know of Twilight, but of Cadence? It was established that Tirek had been imprisoned before Lunas banishment, and it makes sense he knew of Celestia and Luna, as they were the ones responsable. However, Cadence was pretty much established to not have had an involvement, nor a lifespan like the two sisters. If Tirek, in his time of freedom until this episode, had figured out that Cadence existed, due to the Crystal Empire, then he would have easily found out about Twilight, who got a coronation, a parade, had saved the two princesses as they disappeared (The moon and sun standing in the sky at the same time must have been a hint at them missing. Tirek can not be this dumb.) and who was present at various events as well. A Princess, useful or not, should be spoken of. Esspecially one who was once Celestias personal student.
Why did the Alicorns give Twilight all her magic, instead of doing something beforehand? Tirek was weak, but Celestia, instead of handeling this together with Discord, sent him alone. I do not see why, Tirek would have not been able to absorb her magic in that state of being. In fact, why didn't the three alicorns team up to destroy him, using Discord as a way to find him? It was clear he could not harm Discord until he had gotten powerful enough. Every decision made seemed unlogical to me, merely serving the purpose to get the most powerful ponies out of the way, so that Twilight could have her moment.
Also, giving Twilight the magic merely postponed the entire thing. What was she to do with this, wait until Tirek got bored? Why was she not to tell her friends? This was already a flaw in the Crystal Empire episodes, telling the pony who has overcome all challenges with her friends, to not trust her friends to help her. I do not see the point.
These are the three issues that bug me the most in this episode.
The writing for this season and this episode esspeccially, seemed rather.. uncreative and bland, less like a living breathing world and more like the recital of "what do I need to do, to achieve this point".
I am sorry, I am normally not the person for such rants. I assume it just needed to get out. It saddens me to a degree.
I do wonder...
Posted 11 years ago... how would you all react, if I were to post something that was related to the webcomic, Homestuck, if you are familiar with this. Of course, this would tie into what I ususally draw as well. I am merely not sure if it would be to anyones liking.
    I am not sure I can do this anymore
Posted 11 years agoI have been writing on the first episode, The Crystal Empire, for a while now and have noticed how my spark for ponies simply is not there anymore. While I have the basic idea and ambition to work on this project, I do not wish to go and watch episodes again, to get my feel for the show back, and to me, the newest episodes to not provide the feeling that I used to have for the show.
I might have spoken up to soon, but I will need to once again disappoint you here and say, that I can not do it. I find it impossible to capture the spirit of this show that I once felt so deeply for and it saddens me. But I can not do much to fix this, so I assume, this is my second and last leave. I am sorry for the inconvinience. If am I am unable to capture the spirit of the show within my writing, I feel like I should not attempt to do so then.
The only thing, that I can offer, is a brief summary of my plans with the third season rewrite. But other than that, I feel as the part of me that enjoyed the little ponies, might have simply passed away.
    I might have spoken up to soon, but I will need to once again disappoint you here and say, that I can not do it. I find it impossible to capture the spirit of this show that I once felt so deeply for and it saddens me. But I can not do much to fix this, so I assume, this is my second and last leave. I am sorry for the inconvinience. If am I am unable to capture the spirit of the show within my writing, I feel like I should not attempt to do so then.
The only thing, that I can offer, is a brief summary of my plans with the third season rewrite. But other than that, I feel as the part of me that enjoyed the little ponies, might have simply passed away.
It appears that My Faithful Pony will happen.
Posted 11 years agoOverall, I am glad to hear such open and welcoming words to this project. I will try my best, to not dissapoint. This is a last Journal, before I get to work, merely to clarify some last things about the project.
As a first thing, I will reduce my plans to only rewriting Season three, at least for now. It is good to start small, I assume. Recreating Season four might follow, but fairly much later.
I shall not include songs in these rewritings. As much as I adore the songs of the show, I am bad at writing them.
My focus is on character development, storylines, family friendliness and keeping the message of 'Magic is Friendship' in place. One notable thing in character development, will be Princess Cadence, that I wish to adjust a bit. I never felt like she developed any distinct personallity aside from being pretty and pink. It is sad, as I think she could be so much more. I hope to achieve this in these rewritings.
Despite it being a mere 13 episodes, I wish to try and include and overarching storyline, similar to the attempt in the current season. If things go well, it all should fit right in.
Due to this added nature of the stories. I wish to begin to release the stories only once I am fully done with each, so that I can put the pieces together correctly and not end up doing the same mistakes that I critic.
Speaking of critic, criticism will be highly welcomed.
I hope you are patient with me, as this all might take a while. However my greatest thanks go to all of you.
    As a first thing, I will reduce my plans to only rewriting Season three, at least for now. It is good to start small, I assume. Recreating Season four might follow, but fairly much later.
I shall not include songs in these rewritings. As much as I adore the songs of the show, I am bad at writing them.
My focus is on character development, storylines, family friendliness and keeping the message of 'Magic is Friendship' in place. One notable thing in character development, will be Princess Cadence, that I wish to adjust a bit. I never felt like she developed any distinct personallity aside from being pretty and pink. It is sad, as I think she could be so much more. I hope to achieve this in these rewritings.
Despite it being a mere 13 episodes, I wish to try and include and overarching storyline, similar to the attempt in the current season. If things go well, it all should fit right in.
Due to this added nature of the stories. I wish to begin to release the stories only once I am fully done with each, so that I can put the pieces together correctly and not end up doing the same mistakes that I critic.
Speaking of critic, criticism will be highly welcomed.
I hope you are patient with me, as this all might take a while. However my greatest thanks go to all of you.
Project in thought "My Faithfull Pony"
Posted 11 years agoI have not been on this page for quite some while. My love for My little Pony has also started to fade, over the previous and current season. 
I shall call this my last attempt to come in contact with it, with a project I wish to present here. I shall however say, if a majority of my followers do not wish to see it, or are dissapointed in my turn away from chubby pony art and stories, I shall not start this.
The idea however, is due to my great dissapointment with the current direction of the MLP show. During the third season, storylines had been bending characters personalites and breaking the established lore in order to tell its story and ultimately ascend Twilight to a Princess. Season four has not been any different to me, particially feeling painfull to watch as again the characters seemingly act only to plot convinience and even the newly established lore is broken once more. The world of the show feels very unstable.
Thus, I wish to rewrite the episodes of season three and recreate those of season four, to better fit the style the show had during the first two seasons, let the characters act more in character and generally make it feel more like a "Family show" and less like something that is trying to please the fandom and still appeal to its target demographic of little girls.
These episodes will all be merely written, in the same style as my other stories, trying to make them feel more faithfull to what I believe MLP was originally meant to feel like. Hence the name "My Faithfull Pony".
I do wish for more feedback from you, before I spend my time on this. The first episode, of course, will be the Crystal Empire.
    I shall call this my last attempt to come in contact with it, with a project I wish to present here. I shall however say, if a majority of my followers do not wish to see it, or are dissapointed in my turn away from chubby pony art and stories, I shall not start this.
The idea however, is due to my great dissapointment with the current direction of the MLP show. During the third season, storylines had been bending characters personalites and breaking the established lore in order to tell its story and ultimately ascend Twilight to a Princess. Season four has not been any different to me, particially feeling painfull to watch as again the characters seemingly act only to plot convinience and even the newly established lore is broken once more. The world of the show feels very unstable.
Thus, I wish to rewrite the episodes of season three and recreate those of season four, to better fit the style the show had during the first two seasons, let the characters act more in character and generally make it feel more like a "Family show" and less like something that is trying to please the fandom and still appeal to its target demographic of little girls.
These episodes will all be merely written, in the same style as my other stories, trying to make them feel more faithfull to what I believe MLP was originally meant to feel like. Hence the name "My Faithfull Pony".
I do wish for more feedback from you, before I spend my time on this. The first episode, of course, will be the Crystal Empire.
Quitting
Posted 12 years agoI have not been on this site for a while now. As my tumblr has already stated, I am quitting. Art, writing, all of it. For all those, that wished to know.
    I assume I should update my journal.
Posted 12 years agoAs a shout suggested this.
I am not entirely sure how many stories I will end up writing or not, but let us just say that if I find a good situation and inspiration, I will be writing and uploading them.
I am still mostly available here: http://defenceless-pony-mod.tumblr.com/
Feel free to leave story ideas in the comments of this journal, of situations that you would wish to see.
    I am not entirely sure how many stories I will end up writing or not, but let us just say that if I find a good situation and inspiration, I will be writing and uploading them.
I am still mostly available here: http://defenceless-pony-mod.tumblr.com/
Feel free to leave story ideas in the comments of this journal, of situations that you would wish to see.
Particially stopping
Posted 13 years agoI am sorry to say, that I will not update my stories on Furaffinity any longer. I am terribly sorry about this.
It has reasons, that I do not wish to go into further. However, I might post a picture occasionally, if I feel like it, and will still be updating my tumblr, found here: http://a-defenceless-pony.tumblr.com/
I just hope you all understand. It has been hard enough as it is already for me and I just wish to have some fun for a change.
However, I willl still answer notes as far as I can here, as well as watch for other pictures from all of you.
Again, I am terribly sorry. I however wish to hug each and every one of you, for the lovely support you have given to me. It means a lot to me.
    It has reasons, that I do not wish to go into further. However, I might post a picture occasionally, if I feel like it, and will still be updating my tumblr, found here: http://a-defenceless-pony.tumblr.com/
I just hope you all understand. It has been hard enough as it is already for me and I just wish to have some fun for a change.
However, I willl still answer notes as far as I can here, as well as watch for other pictures from all of you.
Again, I am terribly sorry. I however wish to hug each and every one of you, for the lovely support you have given to me. It means a lot to me.
Do you know this feeling...
Posted 13 years ago... when you see or hear something beautiful, that you are inspired to create something equally beautiful, but your hand doesn't appear to allow it?
    What is with the hate in the brony community?
Posted 13 years agoIt has been a while now, since I have come out to show my artwork. Ever since, I have been actively looking for other artwork, mostly on Derpibooru, but also other places. While I have nothing against any sort of theme of the pictures, as people can draw whatever they wish to, whatever it may be, I am actually surprised about the amount of hatefull comments that some pictures recieve, and I do not mean my own, as I can take that. But with some others, I simply do not understand.
Critic is important for improvement, but it does not have to be hatefull, does it? One's opinion on the theme does not say whether or not the actual picture is good or not. And while stating 'I dislike this, because it is simply not to my liking' is perfectly fine, I do not understand why some must say hatefull things, esspecially in a fandom, that is about friendship and understanding one another.
I am sorry for this sudden outburst, but it is something I wished to adress. I do not wish to be called a brony, if this is what the most of them act like. I am not saying there are no bronies out there, that act nice and friendly. Only that I am seeing more of the unfriendly kind and do not understand it.
Perhaps some one can give me advice on this or tell me why this is the case? I also hope, that no one will claim me to be one that hates ponies or bronies now, as this is not true. I am just really baffled about the great amount hate in a fandom of a series, that is about colorful ponies and friendship.
I am really confused.
    Critic is important for improvement, but it does not have to be hatefull, does it? One's opinion on the theme does not say whether or not the actual picture is good or not. And while stating 'I dislike this, because it is simply not to my liking' is perfectly fine, I do not understand why some must say hatefull things, esspecially in a fandom, that is about friendship and understanding one another.
I am sorry for this sudden outburst, but it is something I wished to adress. I do not wish to be called a brony, if this is what the most of them act like. I am not saying there are no bronies out there, that act nice and friendly. Only that I am seeing more of the unfriendly kind and do not understand it.
Perhaps some one can give me advice on this or tell me why this is the case? I also hope, that no one will claim me to be one that hates ponies or bronies now, as this is not true. I am just really baffled about the great amount hate in a fandom of a series, that is about colorful ponies and friendship.
I am really confused.
Back.
Posted 13 years agoI can now properly update again. Most issues have been settled and I am feeling better. I thank you for your patience.
    Pardon
Posted 13 years agoupdates may not occur frequently from this point. I will notify you all, once this changes.
    Tumblr
Posted 13 years agohttp://a-defenceless-pony.tumblr.com/
This is the newly opened tumblr of mine, where you can ask Defenceless questions. Let us see if I am able to handle this.
Also, if you do happen to know any good tumblr blogs for me to watch, do share with me. Just keep in mind, that if a blog features to much NSFW art, I will not watch it.
    This is the newly opened tumblr of mine, where you can ask Defenceless questions. Let us see if I am able to handle this.
Also, if you do happen to know any good tumblr blogs for me to watch, do share with me. Just keep in mind, that if a blog features to much NSFW art, I will not watch it.
Requests and other questions
Posted 13 years agoI have been receiving a lot of notes lately, and many are asking me the same question.
Do I draw commissions/requests?
I draw for fun and entertainment, of myself, as well as those that I show my work to. So, pardon, but I am not going to take money for my artwork.
However, if one has an idea for a picture, he or she may send it to me. I adore getting ideas and such, so do not fear. Depending on if I like the idea or not, I may or may not draw it.
I hope you all can understand.
The second thing is, that it is okay to talk to me via note. I am not sure why, but some appear to think that they are bothering me with their notes. This is not the case. If I take time to respond, it is mostly because I am either busy, or am tired at the moment I read them.
I have also been asked for messenger names. I am sorry to say, I do not have such a thing and do not plan on getting one either. The notes here feel far more comfortable to me.
I thank you all for reading and apologize for writing this here, instead of writing to each induvidually.
    Do I draw commissions/requests?
I draw for fun and entertainment, of myself, as well as those that I show my work to. So, pardon, but I am not going to take money for my artwork.
However, if one has an idea for a picture, he or she may send it to me. I adore getting ideas and such, so do not fear. Depending on if I like the idea or not, I may or may not draw it.
I hope you all can understand.
The second thing is, that it is okay to talk to me via note. I am not sure why, but some appear to think that they are bothering me with their notes. This is not the case. If I take time to respond, it is mostly because I am either busy, or am tired at the moment I read them.
I have also been asked for messenger names. I am sorry to say, I do not have such a thing and do not plan on getting one either. The notes here feel far more comfortable to me.
I thank you all for reading and apologize for writing this here, instead of writing to each induvidually.
To all those, that tried out my flash animation...
Posted 13 years ago... I may have forgotten to say, that the end is maybe not the end, or those, whoe didn't happen to find it.
Merely a small hint!
    Merely a small hint!
If I were to try myself on a flash animation...
Posted 13 years ago.. what is it, that you would adore to see?
I am meaning a simple weight gain animation, one that perhaps can be activated multiple times, to go one with the gain.
Feel free to post situation ideas and gaining type. Something simple, as I am new to such.
    I am meaning a simple weight gain animation, one that perhaps can be activated multiple times, to go one with the gain.
Feel free to post situation ideas and gaining type. Something simple, as I am new to such.
What type of 'gain' appeals to you?
Posted 13 years agoI am pondering about drawing a list of all the different types of gaining, including body shapes that ponies (or other individuals) can have, just as a personal practice and reference. However, I then wondered, what are your personal preferences? I would adore to know.
This is alone about the shape that the victim is to get. The situations in which they can obtain these body shapes, shall be discussed entirely on its own, as it is a very big topic itself.
Here a few options:
Stuffing:
-stuffed, thin, with small taut belly
-stuffed, thin, with big, round belly
-stuffed, thin, near bursting
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, with small taut belly
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, with big, round belly
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, near bursting
Inflation:
-Halfway full, liquid (Water, soda, etc) inflation
-full, liquid inflation
-near bursting, liquid inflation
-Halfway full, gas (Air, Helium etc) inflation
-full, gas inflation
-near bursting, gas inflation
-Blueberry, magical inflation, beginning
-Blueberry, magical inflation, midway
-Blueberry, magical inflation, Full/near bursting
-Inflation of all body parts, not just belly, blimp
Weight gain:
-Pudgy, stomach heavy body type
-Pudgy, hind/thigh heavy body type
-Pudgy, balanced body type
-fat, stomach heavy body type
-fat, hind/thigh heavy body type
-fat, balanced body type
-obese, stomach heavy body type
-obese, hind/thigh heavy body type
-obese, balanced body type
-immobile, stomach heavy body type
-immobile, hind/thigh heavy body type
-immobile, balanced body type
-Blob
Vore:
-Big pred, little prey, small taut belly
-Big pred, little prey, full up
-Big pred, little prey, near bursting
-Equal sized pred-prey, full belly
-small pred, big prey (wierd body shape to me)
I do hope I covered a majority. At least, from things that I would attempt. I am merely a bit picky on Vore and blueberry, but not entirely against it, as both can be entertaining in certain contexts.
To me, each of these do have at least minor differences to each other.
Feel free to pick one, if you wish. I would be interested in what you all like.
    This is alone about the shape that the victim is to get. The situations in which they can obtain these body shapes, shall be discussed entirely on its own, as it is a very big topic itself.
Here a few options:
Stuffing:
-stuffed, thin, with small taut belly
-stuffed, thin, with big, round belly
-stuffed, thin, near bursting
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, with small taut belly
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, with big, round belly
-stuffed, pudgy/fat, near bursting
Inflation:
-Halfway full, liquid (Water, soda, etc) inflation
-full, liquid inflation
-near bursting, liquid inflation
-Halfway full, gas (Air, Helium etc) inflation
-full, gas inflation
-near bursting, gas inflation
-Blueberry, magical inflation, beginning
-Blueberry, magical inflation, midway
-Blueberry, magical inflation, Full/near bursting
-Inflation of all body parts, not just belly, blimp
Weight gain:
-Pudgy, stomach heavy body type
-Pudgy, hind/thigh heavy body type
-Pudgy, balanced body type
-fat, stomach heavy body type
-fat, hind/thigh heavy body type
-fat, balanced body type
-obese, stomach heavy body type
-obese, hind/thigh heavy body type
-obese, balanced body type
-immobile, stomach heavy body type
-immobile, hind/thigh heavy body type
-immobile, balanced body type
-Blob
Vore:
-Big pred, little prey, small taut belly
-Big pred, little prey, full up
-Big pred, little prey, near bursting
-Equal sized pred-prey, full belly
-small pred, big prey (wierd body shape to me)
I do hope I covered a majority. At least, from things that I would attempt. I am merely a bit picky on Vore and blueberry, but not entirely against it, as both can be entertaining in certain contexts.
To me, each of these do have at least minor differences to each other.
Feel free to pick one, if you wish. I would be interested in what you all like.
I am back, in a way.
Posted 13 years agoI will begin to draw again, now that I feel bit better. I am sorry for not updating for such a long time and look foward to continueing.
    A mere Update
Posted 13 years agoI am not going to be as active as before. I am sorry to say this after almost a week of wait and such little time spent on here. 
All I can say, something has happend and my joy to draw has been taken for now.
Updates, esspecially on the interactive story will still occure, just less frequently.
I hope you understand.
Defenceless.
    All I can say, something has happend and my joy to draw has been taken for now.
Updates, esspecially on the interactive story will still occure, just less frequently.
I hope you understand.
Defenceless.
I just happen to notice.
Posted 13 years agoI joined Furaffinity on a friday the 13th. I hadn't even noticed.
From now on, I assume it is my lucky day. As I have enjoyed every second I spend on here up to now.
    From now on, I assume it is my lucky day. As I have enjoyed every second I spend on here up to now.
Pardon for inactivity.
Posted 13 years agoMy modem had issues on monday. Finally I have gotten a new one and can continue. As a little present though, I have begun a new story, writing in a style I used to sport. It will be uploaded shortly.
I apologize for not informing anyone sooner.
    I apologize for not informing anyone sooner.
Flattered.
Posted 13 years agoI wanted to say, I am truely flattered. 
Thank you all so much, for all your kind comments and support!
    Thank you all so much, for all your kind comments and support!
First Journal, for simple updates.
Posted 13 years agoFirst of all, I added a few things to my profile, such as what I will and what I won't draw. Will update it, if necessary. 
Think it as a simple guideline, so you know what to expect. Though I am always open to try out new things, if I trip over an interesting idea.
I changed my characters backstory a bit. Makes more sense and is friendlier now. Yes, much better.
Also, for stories, I am flattered that so many are enjoying the stories of mine and participating on the interaktiv one, even though it hasn't had many options yet.
Thanks again to CapnSqueaks, for the marvelous thumbnail to my current story "More than just a Dash."
In the future, I have following stories planned:
-Inflation story, with Trixie
-Massive weight gain, with Rarity and AJ
-And some more, that you will simply have to wait for and be suprised by!
Also, more stuffing.
Full, fat, round ponies.
    Think it as a simple guideline, so you know what to expect. Though I am always open to try out new things, if I trip over an interesting idea.
I changed my characters backstory a bit. Makes more sense and is friendlier now. Yes, much better.
Also, for stories, I am flattered that so many are enjoying the stories of mine and participating on the interaktiv one, even though it hasn't had many options yet.
Thanks again to CapnSqueaks, for the marvelous thumbnail to my current story "More than just a Dash."
In the future, I have following stories planned:
-Inflation story, with Trixie
-Massive weight gain, with Rarity and AJ
-And some more, that you will simply have to wait for and be suprised by!
Also, more stuffing.
Full, fat, round ponies.
 
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