ok i so for the last ten years i have been working to my dream. i want to open my own ranch that will help at risk youths and abused and neglected horses. but now that i have been reading this new book and i have another idea. that i think is awesome using my ranch to house foster kids but i do not want to give up on my original thoughts. can you guys help me with some of my ideas? please give me your thoughts.

Corrina looked over her shoulder as she looks at the two innocent faces. Wolf pups, is what her mind said, But she knew better. All she has to do it to keep them safe until she gets them to her secret hid out or at least leave them where her grandma will find them.
All of a sudden in the thicket of the forest there was a blast. Panic swept through her. Just like on that faithful night. She will protect her assignment as she knew she had to. She ran with the precious cargo and stashed them in a tree hole that would block anything that may threaten them.
She spoke but a word of protection when she heard it.
"You have done so much just to keep it all a secret. Don’t you realize that you will never hide them well enough from Me." she had to flee in order to keep them safe. With tears of sadness and anger she left with the pups whimpering in the night.
Whispering to herself. "I am sorry little ones but I do love you." she was in the clearing before she was free. Until he appeared.
"You won’t get away that easily my dear. Now that I know what can happen I will not rest until I can have the power that your father and all the people who married into your family has found."
"You ass. Kane as if I’d let you touch me or them. My family is never going to except you and without my love it will be all in vein and you will never find them. those pups will be safe from you. Until I can destroy you.
"Oh my dear never will you do such a thing. I have tasted your power and now I want more...."

Four year past after that faithful day Corrina now is living in a secret existence. But her mother and family keep insisting she go out and try to live a normal life.
Her mom wants her to meet this boy that she had hoped they would go to prom together. The first time he made her land on her butt. Now he wants to learn how to rid, to know her past. He has already seen some of her gifts but how long untill he dose as kane had. Then shed have to hid even more. She has thought of leaving but she could never leave her family. As they spend time she has growing feelings that she had thought she has squished long ago. But all she want to do is live at peace with those she loves. But cole wants to learn everything, what her past is why she loves that spot in the forest. Why she gose days on end away from home. And everytime kane gets closer. Would life get any easier so she can live the way she wants? Or will kane get what he seeks and destroy every thing in his path.

hey all if you havent read it i have a new book that i started and i hope you all read what i have right now. there will be more but i have to type it up from my journal

I stared at the man I had been dating for the last three years.
“What do you meant Justin?” I wanted to run before he said it. Taking a deep breath he looked to the ground.
“My name is not Justin, its actually Matt. Justin is my middle name.” my heart nearly stopped. Matt Justin the name is the same as my first love. He looked at me with the blue gray eyes that I had fallen for. I realized I fell for Justin … Matt before I left for here.
“you cant be matt. At least not my matt.” He nodded then squared his broad shoulders.
“I am sorry that I didn’t tell you before but I was sworn to secrecy.”
“by who!” my head began to spin. My first love was my ex boy friend. How did this end up happening?
“I will tell you after we get to the train station.” I stopped him there.
“Sorry matt I had already made plans with a friend.” Whistling I signaled my companions from the trees.” They have been honest with me form the get go and now I will travel on foot with them.” Matt smiled but looked surprised.
“When did you get a horse? And a wolf for that matter!?”
“Why dose he sound so surprised? I mean really you have clothing that states that you are going to ride back.” I had to hide my laugh from matt because I did not want to explain to him about the power I have.
“What’s so funny? I am trying to be serious.”
“Nothing just though of something I said once. Anyhow you will have to make the trek back home by your self. So have fun with your secrets.” Matt’s eyes twinkled. I hated when they twinkle it always means that he had some kind of plan.
“Well if our mare holds two people then I can come with you.” I snorted.
“And you think that just because you say it she’ll do it.”
“I don’t mind corrie. But he will walk or no deal I don’t like that he hurt you.” I nodded.
“If you are going to ‘escort’ me then you will have to walk. My mare does not trust you.” Matt nodded and said he would love to escort me back home. With that I wanted to get going.
“He can come because I will run most of the time but you have to help him up and if he hurts me he will have a painful experience” shadow bared her teeth.
“You will be riding with me for most of the time I want to get going as fast as I can.” Matt smiled. I hoped up onto the mare with no problems. “Oh and by the way you should not hurt her when you get up. Just warning you.” He chuckled and waited for my hand to help him jump on my 17 hand horse. I pulled as he jumped and swung on. With a jolt shadow began to gallop off. Paw’s was keeping up with ease. I felt Matt rock trying to keep his balance. I put the reins down and helped him steady. When I turned around I felt his arms circle around my ribs and waist tightly. A shiver ran up my arms but I chose to ignore, it. This is not going to work very well. I thought to my self. I looked one more time behind me and as the forest engulfed us I said Farwell to my old home.


We ran until it turned dusk. Soft paws had been leading the way for hours now. With an abrupt stop I felt matt lung forowred only for my body to stop his tumbling forwored, only to have him slide side ways. I cluched to him as we both plumied to theground. Luckly he was not hurt unluckly he landed on me. I sat there sidways like youd see in a cartoon or movie.
“ eh hem do you mind kindly getting off me” shadow helped me with the point as she grabed his shirt in her mouth and yanked him away. Dragging him five feet away she laied by me to let me grab to her mane. When I was finally up I dusted my self off.
“ you know I don’t think that horse likes me. But what waswith the whole dragging me upandaway?” I shrugged my sholders and grined.
“ you know that is the darnest thing when you cheat on your girlfriend with a skank.” I patted my horse and started to set up camp. The tent went up no problem, but the fire was another story. Matt came up and took my flint. Striking it four times he was finally fed up.
“this is not going to work.” Rolling my eyes I took my flint stone back.
“ that’s because geniuse the wood is to wet. We need drier wood.i looked around and saw stiks laying under a tree. Those should do. But look out for foxes they are notorius for stealing stuff from humans.” I snikerd because I knew that there was a really badcover up job for a trap. As I turnd my back I heard a shreak coming from the trees direction.

hey i revised my book twin couples. and added more comint on it and tell me if it makes scens and yes i know of the misspelled words pls comint on it

so seeeing as my new computer will not do as i need i am putting my story on here hope you like it and i'll figure this out again eventualy


I waited on my mother’s front porch scared out of my mind. Every shadow, every movement I jumped. I had my shotgun but it was normally a squirrel. So I put my shotgun down. I stood up and went to the barn where my horse, Nightmare, was. She was pregnant with her foal twins. I checked on her and then I gave her a hug. She knew I was shaking and because she felt me hug her she folded her neck to hug me back. I felt her short, prickly, black hairs go through my shirt and the warmth from her neck help me calm down. I checked on her foals one last time they seemed fine about 8 months more and we will have new babies on the ground. I went back to the front porch in a haste I thought was not possible while walking but I achieved it. I was a 16 year old runaway back home. I ran away on a fool quest to be with a 19 year old sleaze bag. But I didn’t find out until we were gone. So I slowed my steps to look at the Ohio spring night. I breathed in the scent of safety and home. I looked at the pasture where my sisters and mothers horses were. I got to my chair now cold from the night air. I heard a rustle. I slowly went to my shotgun and when the rustling stopped I grabbed my gun and hurled it over my shoulder in a shooting position. “Whoa there, cowgirl.” I heard three formiller voices in choirs. I heard two female voices that were unmistakably my two best friends and my brother. When I saw them I ran and gave them a hug. They hugged me with great intensity. If it weren’t for them I’d be back where it wasn’t safe. When I felt the embrace they gave me I felt the familiar sting of tears in my eyes. I left the safety of the hugs and stared at them. “Guess who’s in town?” Jake said. My gut started to twist and the safety I felt melted away in to fear. “It’s your ex-boyfriend, Matt.” Miranda said. Relief flooded though my veins. Then confusion swept over my body. “And why does this interest me?” I asked. “Because Ash, I think you could go for it!” I haven’t seen my ex-boyfriend in five years. Not since I decided that Vince was the better choice. What a mistake that was. “You should go talk to him” said Tara. “That is a big fat hell no Terri!” I exclaimed. “I feel bad enough for hurting him the way I did five years ago. Especially when I left without a goodbye.” I shrank back in to the rocking chair to try and escape the eyes that were staring so hard at me. “Well now you can go and make amends with him and get back together!” Miranda said excitedly. She jumped with her fist pumped up into the air like when we did when we were kids for a triumphant victory in a sports game. “I know you guys have your hopes up for me to have a boyfriend but don’t try and sell me so fast, I am not ready.” My two friends and Jake looked sorry they were pushing. “But at least you are safe.” they said in union. Yes I felt very blessed that the lord had them come and rescue me.
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He went into the Greasy Spoon and went to the table where he saw the three friends that were still in town. “Hey there scum bags.” He said jokingly. “We’re not in high school anymore, Matt.” Craig said with a frown. “I just want to feel younger.” Retorted matt. “Well, since you wanna feel younger, do you know who’s back in town?” Matt’s face screwed up. “Who?” Matt asked with a beer halfway to his lips. “Ashley,” Brian said in to a sing song voice. Matt almost dropped his mug of beer on the floor. If it weren’t for Craig’s fast reflexes it would have been all over him and the floor. “W...Wha… what!” Matt stuttered and then coughed. “When the hell did that happen!?” He had not seen his ex since she ran away with Vincent Heckle. “Well, it’s true she came home two days ago.” Brian said. “So does she have kids? She and Vince must be very proud of them.” Matt said with a hint of jealously. That surprised him. He thought he extinguished these feelings for her after she left him. “No she came back by herself.” Craig said. That surprised him even more. “Well, he probably will be here in a little while.” He was not planning on staying around when Vince comes he’ll be gone the minute that he knows. “Well I hope she is happy.” He said a little too harshly. But just then he heard the bell of the front door chime. And in a speak of the bitch moment there she was. Her blond slightly wavy hair that she tries to hide hanging loose the way he had loved it when they were dating. Her figure did not change one bit. His eyes stopped at her breasts and then lingered up to her lips. The lips he tasted in hot quick kisses. He looked at her expression and it was anything but excided. Just then she looked over as if he had called her over. She eyes were mirror images of horror and fear. He wondered what happened to make her that way. “Well I guess she didn’t have any kids.” Brian breathed. Matt knew how his friends felt. Ash was the picture of drop dead gorgeous.

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My breath caught and I stared at him. Ohh how she wished she hadn’t hurt him like she did. If only…. NO! No she is done with that the if only’s can’t change what happened. She learned from her mistake and had come to her senses although it had only taken five years to realize her mistake. “… Will you come pleas ash?” I had not been listening until I tore my eyes away from matt’s beautiful eyes. “I am sorry Miranda what did you say.” Her friend had huffed a little annoyance hinted in her breath. “Will you come to our party for you this Saturday? Pleas ash?” she added in a little wine at the end to have emphases. “Where is it?”I said with a huff. “At our house ash” my brother jumped in. “what time?” “4:00 pm” they said in union. “It’ll be heaps of fun the games the food the dancing…” Miranda and Tara looked at each other with a wide grin and said “the boys” they giggled like they were school girls. “Will you to stop trying to make it seem like a school dance” I retorted with irritation lining my words. My friends were then in a conversation that I did not want to be part of. So I looked around to see if there were anyone else I knew from high school. Then my eye caught a sight I definitely DID NOT want to see. Matt was coming over and I had no escape route. So I had to face him. But I gave him an ounce over he looked about the same but seemed different somehow. Duh you dumped him without even telling him goodbye five years ago moron! I said in my head. But I looked at his biceps and they were just as muscular as ever. He still had those high cheekbones that made him always a winner for women. But he still looked like the same old matt warren from high school maybe a little older though. He strode over to me and gave a lazy smile.

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He walked over to his once girlfriend. But he didn’t know why. When he got there she gave him a wary smile and looked like she was about to run for dear life. “ hey ash how’ve you been?” man that was lame but at least he was able to talk. She had on a babby blue t-shirt and black sport shorts. Her favoret since well ever. She looked gorguse close up more then far away. It’s a good thing his friends dicided to leave after the check had been paid. “ hey matt I’ve been good but I am feeling a lot better now that I am home. That had bewildered him even more then her being alone with out vince.

I could not belive he was still able to speak with me even though I left without saying good bye.



so yeah sry but i cant figure it out yet but i will ary again hope you liked it :)

hey all i am back onn affinity and i got some new material yeah so hope you all look and commit ><D

hey all just got back from a horse show and man am i tired. my horse is being a jerk cant beleve it. but got three ribbons, sixth, fifth, and forth. next time i am brinning home a first second and sixth lol. next up fenalla and b4 that mchenry county fair hopefully. mchenry is my ma's drill team can't wait well later. ^.-V

hey sry for askin for help. but i was making a poem when i found out i was starting to make ANOUTHER book. lol i feel dum for doing so but i couldn't stop my thoughts. but i need help to choose a name. hears what its happining. a girl named cleo ( cleopatra) is the name she lives and workes on a ranch she braks broncs and works with cattle. and i am still sceptical about having it from her point of veiw or just writing about her life. but it has been six years since her boyfriend asked if she would marry him but when she says no he disided to marry a diffrent girl to get back at her and leav. since that day she nursed her heart and put her work first. o and she gave up one love after her love after her ex. when low and behold she hears about her ex coming back. she learns that he was having a hard time with cops and his Ex girlfriend. with the memory of the insedent of what happand after there seinor year of high school anger reaches her heart and swars that she will not allow him near her. ............. and thats as far as i got lol it was just supposed to be a peom guess i let my mind wonder further. but hear is the first paregragh.

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As I try to fall asleep on the dew damp grass I hear the near by river. I listened to the coyotes howl of the first hunt since spring began. I couldn't think of anything els then what happened when the last day of high school of my senior year six years ago. It was vary strange. It was sunny with a heavy sheet of clouds threatening to storm when Justin Elwood asked me to meet him at the valley. The valley is where me and Justin in the beginning of high school found. We were running after our own horses who escaped from the holding pen. We saw my mare Lucia ( Lu ch e uh). We looked around and saw the beautiful grassy area and that is when we heard a loud and angry neigh ring though out the bowl shape valley and that is where we saw a black stallion. The stallion looked around and met my eye's. He stomped one hoof and started to charge. Justin looked at where the black was going.
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Hey i finally started my new story and outting the black filly and the gray colt aside for a while. check out the first few paragraghs of the stoy twin couples. i need a difrent tittle i was thinkin of also twin riders if you read it pls give coments and suggestions for a title or if you like the origanall tell me. ^^

Well as the old school year comes to a end a new chapter of life opens out to all of us. for my friend and sempi he will be going to colloge. for the rest that'll be in high school we must get ready for the next year of saying goodbye and hello to many more friends. i get to thinking that many that'll leav will forget us younger friends and not keep in touch but it is a 50-50 chance if it does it does. many will be busy next year and some will be careless. all i can say is BRING IT ON! i made a promis to MANY ppl from my late aunt to my freshmen year i promised them i'd be better and work harder next year so the last thing is to my sempi GOOD LUCK AND WORK HARD! and to the rest LETS MAKE THE REST OF OUR HIGH SCHOOL EXPERIENCE FUN AND SUCCEFUL AND WORK TOGETHER!

you know school is almost out. my clsest cuz is graduating highschool and so is a friend. i feel sad cuz i will soon can only sit quietly in the bakround and watch both of em' say godbye and leave there childhood behind.when i think it makes me happy cuz one i know there lives will be successfull but i am mainly happy cuz i can't wait to see them completly grown and happy. so to my cuz meg and friend keith good luck! we all are routin for you
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my ma and mike are makin fun of my life i want to have and there sayin all this cuz of my drawing i did it aint half as good as my friends and there makin a big deal i hate it i feel like a kid again VV. i hate it!
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i think i am going to deleat my story and re put it up but in chapters. idk if i should but i might.

ok ok i still need a few more votes for my new book but now theres a new prob should i be the pearson talking or should i not be i think i shouldn't be the person talking idk but i ll give yall a sample of what i was thinkin.




EX.


it's been 3 days since the crash. Mama and papa still haven't woken up. cam and i are in the hospital still they say untill they find a family to help us. mama and papa once told us about the family we used to go and see. but that was when we were 2 or three years old. mama and papa told us that we couldn't go see em' because they work on a ranch that needs constent supervision. i vagly remember some memorys. and i don't now about cam but it wasn't much of a suprise. i remember me and cam were on our horses named cocoa and sunset. sunset was mine and cocoa was cam. and there i think were two boys.we were in one of the big pastures and we were riding me and cam were training at the time to be trick riders. and we all had fun.




or i could do both twins


EX2

it's been 3 days since the crash. Mama and papa still haven't woken up. cam and i are in the hospital still they say untill they find a family to help us. mama and papa once told us about the family we used to go and see. but that was when we were 2 or three years old. mama and papa told us that we couldn't go see em' because they work on a ranch that needs constent supervision. i vagly remember some memorys. and i don't now about cam but it wasn't much of a suprise. i remember me and cam were on our horses named cocoa and sunset. sunset was mine and cocoa was cam. and there i think were two boys ....... no no no sam it was girls........CAM! you remember i thought you forgot. nope i remembered it and i thought they were girls. well i think they are boys so lets go with that k? fine fineso any way i think we were in the largest pasture and me and cam were practicing trick riding.


well thats a sample pls vote

new book that i might wright. i am thinking of a new book besides the black fillly and the gray colt and idk if it is good pls read the plot i have to base it on





PLOT

main characters twin sisters (names Samantha (Sam) age 14 and camrin (cam) age 14. the sisters love to ride and have their own horses both mares and they love to trick ride and they are skilled in riding. but the are sisters that get into a car accident with there mom and dad the mom. and the dad are in comas. (Long sleep) they have no relative to speak about that could keep them for a while. So it was decided that they would stay at a family friends house until there parents were better. The family friend (Ben) has a wife (Kathrin)(kat) and two kids (Jim and Tim) they are also the same age as the girls maybe one year apart I have not decided. The live in a ranch in northern Nevada. ( I have not decided ether Nevada, Tennessee, or Idaho.) But the thing is only the parents have known each other they never got to get the kids together. But the girls do not like the idea because they do not want to leave the mares that they have known for all there life. (Names for the mare N/A) so the mares are shipped to the friends house secretly and only the friend knows about it. When the girls get to the friend’s ranch the boys automatically dislike the sisters because they do not speak or socialize they stay to themselves and each other. But Ben and kat want them to feel at home so they decide to allow the girls to go out and ride at night.



Well that’s all I have so far leave comennts