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Posted 2 years agoShoutout to Bsmithiii, for making this excellent story, a little tale about some sailors and a kyri.
It’s all based in my world and lore so I think you all might enjoy it they did a great job.
Read it here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/53544041/
It’s all based in my world and lore so I think you all might enjoy it they did a great job.
Read it here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/53544041/
An idea for a scary Vr game that invokes a fear of crowds
Posted 3 years agoStory:
A vr game set in a Dystopia in the very distant future.
The upper class of the human population has been reduced to idle bodies who dont percieve the world at all. After years of exposure to endless media targeted specifically to the viewer and living in the harsh bleak world that remains, the only way to feel joy that remains is to be connected to a machine that satisfies the mind in an indescribable way. Like Hard drugs people became addicted to these machines and opted to remain in them forever. Not having a moment of boredom for eternity
All that remains was an urban wasteland.
In control of everything was a hive mind of 5 different people that made up one. They keep the power running while the humans enjoyed their eternal bliss. They turned the planet into a sprawling superstructure consisting of machinery thats purpose could not be grasped by inspecting it.
The lower class population who could not afford to be placed in the joy machines were absorbed into the hivemind and became cells as part of the system. Each persons minds was used as a seperate computer for the Hive to use as processing. They roamed every inch of the superstructure as huge crowds of people flowing and pulsing in a machine like fashion.
The worlds population grew beyond 10 billion due to human biological augmentation. Most people went by extremely malnourished and kept alive only by their implants. Most basic human functions became unnecessary and people lost things like sight. Any person who required vision was given optics.
Eventually the humans in the joy machines were released unexpectedly and were promptly connected to the hive. The player character is one of these released but is able to escape and restore their eyesight.
The player is forced out of the endless bliss of the fake into the real bleak world. Their time in the machine still affects them as they will experience hallucinations. Peoples faces may appear distorted they will have to determine what is real or not.
They will roam through what can only just be made out as a neighbourhood. A street road, a car and stop sign can be seen as well as a drive way and perhaps some rubble of what used to be homes. But all around it and above it and below it. Sprawling metallic surfaces, beams pipes. Faint rays of sunlight falling down from above only just reaching the surface where you stand. as well as the environment a long column of people marching throw the structures can be seen.
Following the people leads you to a massive gathering, all the new people are being marked and examined before being sent of to their new existance as cells. The ones doing the processing are also people but they have been adapted for new uses.
Long appendaged people with stilt like legs and flash light heads stand above the crowd scanning for you.
They hive has noticed that there has been a miscount and is searching for who went missing. The player must avoid being detected to proceed.
The gameplay continues through different areas with different types of enemies and puzzles to solve, furthering the story as they play.
The player will gain access to tools that allow them to manipulate the crowds in a certain way. They could even be granted certain enhancements like leg extentions to see above the crowd.
Enemy variants -
Humans : Basic crowd npcs. They follow a complex crowd simulation tech that i will not be able to explain. but i hope the technology to create realistic interesting crowds could be made, otherwise this entire idea wouldnt work. The crowds work to create a sense of claustrophobia. and those with a fear of crowded places will know exactly why the idea of walking through a Large crowd of people while being stalked from an unknown direction would be scary. The crowds would play the main role of the gameplay. They could be used as puzzles, controlling the flow of the crowd to allow you to pass. Create tension, the player gets caught in a flow forcing them down a certain path. Maybe if the player stops moving for two long they take damage and get trappled. Fast moving crowds, slow moving crowds, idle crowds. All of these npcs are also blind, this is the reason why the hive cant just use them to find you.
Stalkers : Stalkers are the most basic enemy type. They appear in a crowded area when the hive suspects you are there. They appear like and ordinary wandering crowd npc, the only difference being a slight illusion utililizing the stereoscopic lenses of VR.
This is an idea im very curious about; The Stalkers faces will appear normal through the left eye, but throught the right eye will appear distorted and scary. I really think this could create a very distressing image. If the eyes would like interchange going from normal to fucked up and switching sides. So your seeing two different images overlaping, i really want to know what it would look like
There will be two types of stalkers, one will do as the name implies and slowly and robotically walk toward the player forcing the player to be constantly moving to avoid them, Like in It Follows. The other is one that blends with the crowd who, if interacted with, will injure the player.
The next is the Silt walkers, who are the tall people with flashlight heads. They scan the crowds for the player, and if they find you they alert the stalkers of your location. They also will follow you and keep you under the light untill you reach a place they cant follow or loose them.
Another enemy type that could fit is the witch from l4d2. not the witch itself but something similar. plays a noise to warn you that its there and will charge you if you alarm it. would work perfectly when the player is being forced into a narrow area.
Crawlers : Watch your feet! these little guys will crawl beneath the crowds trying to get you from below.
Different player abilities -
The player can collect a hack that causes surrounding crowds to disperse, allowing the player to move freely and see enemies
A hack that creates an invisible field that no npcs will enter.
The player can push or interact with npcs. In a still crowd a should tap will urge the npc to move slightly.
Leg Extensions, you get it
The Villians -
5 Different voices who speak to you throughout the game. One of them is quite nice and would help you, another that is self centered and narsicistic and you can imagine the others. Theyd all be rather horrible, often taunting you. they would all refer to themselves as we.
The communicate to you through Echoes of their voices throughout the superstructure , And through the crowds. since the people are connected to the hive the all speak to you, in a monotone voice, in unison.
Just picture moving through a huge crowd, all of them staring at you and speaking to you in unison.
Ive come up with some potential dialogue.
Voice 1: Why are we doing that?
Voice 2: What are we doing?
Voice 1: We are doing something
Voice 2: We are doing many things
Voice 3: We are not doing what we think we are
Voice 1: Which of us is doing that?
Voice 4: We arent
Voice 1: Why are we doing that?
Voice 2: We are not doing anything
Voice 1: Well stop it
Voice 2: Stop what?
Voice 5: We should stop this line of questioning immediately.
This occurs early on when the player has wandered off the expected path and is messing with some machinery to proceed.
Voice 1: One of us is running away
Voice 5: He
Voice 1: Ah yes, He is not us at all.
Voice 5: He is not
Voice 2: Where does he expect to go?
Voice 5: He will surely find his experience unpleasant
Voice 2: He must be the miscount we discovered earlier
*In unison*: Obviously
Voice 1: We should do something about him
Voice 4: Why bother
Voice 5: we are going to collect him momentarily
Voice 4: Very well
Voice 3: How many of us are near him?
Voice 1: There is an entire cell nearby
Voice 5: We are approaching him now.
Player is introduced to stalkers
A vr game set in a Dystopia in the very distant future.
The upper class of the human population has been reduced to idle bodies who dont percieve the world at all. After years of exposure to endless media targeted specifically to the viewer and living in the harsh bleak world that remains, the only way to feel joy that remains is to be connected to a machine that satisfies the mind in an indescribable way. Like Hard drugs people became addicted to these machines and opted to remain in them forever. Not having a moment of boredom for eternity
All that remains was an urban wasteland.
In control of everything was a hive mind of 5 different people that made up one. They keep the power running while the humans enjoyed their eternal bliss. They turned the planet into a sprawling superstructure consisting of machinery thats purpose could not be grasped by inspecting it.
The lower class population who could not afford to be placed in the joy machines were absorbed into the hivemind and became cells as part of the system. Each persons minds was used as a seperate computer for the Hive to use as processing. They roamed every inch of the superstructure as huge crowds of people flowing and pulsing in a machine like fashion.
The worlds population grew beyond 10 billion due to human biological augmentation. Most people went by extremely malnourished and kept alive only by their implants. Most basic human functions became unnecessary and people lost things like sight. Any person who required vision was given optics.
Eventually the humans in the joy machines were released unexpectedly and were promptly connected to the hive. The player character is one of these released but is able to escape and restore their eyesight.
The player is forced out of the endless bliss of the fake into the real bleak world. Their time in the machine still affects them as they will experience hallucinations. Peoples faces may appear distorted they will have to determine what is real or not.
They will roam through what can only just be made out as a neighbourhood. A street road, a car and stop sign can be seen as well as a drive way and perhaps some rubble of what used to be homes. But all around it and above it and below it. Sprawling metallic surfaces, beams pipes. Faint rays of sunlight falling down from above only just reaching the surface where you stand. as well as the environment a long column of people marching throw the structures can be seen.
Following the people leads you to a massive gathering, all the new people are being marked and examined before being sent of to their new existance as cells. The ones doing the processing are also people but they have been adapted for new uses.
Long appendaged people with stilt like legs and flash light heads stand above the crowd scanning for you.
They hive has noticed that there has been a miscount and is searching for who went missing. The player must avoid being detected to proceed.
The gameplay continues through different areas with different types of enemies and puzzles to solve, furthering the story as they play.
The player will gain access to tools that allow them to manipulate the crowds in a certain way. They could even be granted certain enhancements like leg extentions to see above the crowd.
Enemy variants -
Humans : Basic crowd npcs. They follow a complex crowd simulation tech that i will not be able to explain. but i hope the technology to create realistic interesting crowds could be made, otherwise this entire idea wouldnt work. The crowds work to create a sense of claustrophobia. and those with a fear of crowded places will know exactly why the idea of walking through a Large crowd of people while being stalked from an unknown direction would be scary. The crowds would play the main role of the gameplay. They could be used as puzzles, controlling the flow of the crowd to allow you to pass. Create tension, the player gets caught in a flow forcing them down a certain path. Maybe if the player stops moving for two long they take damage and get trappled. Fast moving crowds, slow moving crowds, idle crowds. All of these npcs are also blind, this is the reason why the hive cant just use them to find you.
Stalkers : Stalkers are the most basic enemy type. They appear in a crowded area when the hive suspects you are there. They appear like and ordinary wandering crowd npc, the only difference being a slight illusion utililizing the stereoscopic lenses of VR.
This is an idea im very curious about; The Stalkers faces will appear normal through the left eye, but throught the right eye will appear distorted and scary. I really think this could create a very distressing image. If the eyes would like interchange going from normal to fucked up and switching sides. So your seeing two different images overlaping, i really want to know what it would look like
There will be two types of stalkers, one will do as the name implies and slowly and robotically walk toward the player forcing the player to be constantly moving to avoid them, Like in It Follows. The other is one that blends with the crowd who, if interacted with, will injure the player.
The next is the Silt walkers, who are the tall people with flashlight heads. They scan the crowds for the player, and if they find you they alert the stalkers of your location. They also will follow you and keep you under the light untill you reach a place they cant follow or loose them.
Another enemy type that could fit is the witch from l4d2. not the witch itself but something similar. plays a noise to warn you that its there and will charge you if you alarm it. would work perfectly when the player is being forced into a narrow area.
Crawlers : Watch your feet! these little guys will crawl beneath the crowds trying to get you from below.
Different player abilities -
The player can collect a hack that causes surrounding crowds to disperse, allowing the player to move freely and see enemies
A hack that creates an invisible field that no npcs will enter.
The player can push or interact with npcs. In a still crowd a should tap will urge the npc to move slightly.
Leg Extensions, you get it
The Villians -
5 Different voices who speak to you throughout the game. One of them is quite nice and would help you, another that is self centered and narsicistic and you can imagine the others. Theyd all be rather horrible, often taunting you. they would all refer to themselves as we.
The communicate to you through Echoes of their voices throughout the superstructure , And through the crowds. since the people are connected to the hive the all speak to you, in a monotone voice, in unison.
Just picture moving through a huge crowd, all of them staring at you and speaking to you in unison.
Ive come up with some potential dialogue.
Voice 1: Why are we doing that?
Voice 2: What are we doing?
Voice 1: We are doing something
Voice 2: We are doing many things
Voice 3: We are not doing what we think we are
Voice 1: Which of us is doing that?
Voice 4: We arent
Voice 1: Why are we doing that?
Voice 2: We are not doing anything
Voice 1: Well stop it
Voice 2: Stop what?
Voice 5: We should stop this line of questioning immediately.
This occurs early on when the player has wandered off the expected path and is messing with some machinery to proceed.
Voice 1: One of us is running away
Voice 5: He
Voice 1: Ah yes, He is not us at all.
Voice 5: He is not
Voice 2: Where does he expect to go?
Voice 5: He will surely find his experience unpleasant
Voice 2: He must be the miscount we discovered earlier
*In unison*: Obviously
Voice 1: We should do something about him
Voice 4: Why bother
Voice 5: we are going to collect him momentarily
Voice 4: Very well
Voice 3: How many of us are near him?
Voice 1: There is an entire cell nearby
Voice 5: We are approaching him now.
Player is introduced to stalkers
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Lore Number 3
Posted 3 years agoGet ready for some brand new lore baby we got magic we got rocks we got it all
The universe is one different to ours with very different rules. I was inspired a lot by the movie Treasure planet. I wanted the kind of solar sail ships but in a more industrial setting. So I made like little tugboat spaceships. While trying to get inspiration for this I found Ian mcque's art which basically directly influenced the way they look.
I wanted space, or the Aether cause that sounds more magical, to have a very maritime or aquatic feel to it. So i made the boats almost resemble the shape of a blue whale and gave them little solar panel fins which use solar light energy that flows through the world as a natural bridge between the planets designed for people to use by... something maybe not sure yet.
The entire universe is kind of like one unified organism. Everything that happens is predetermined and all magics are naturally occurring. I haven't thought of every possible type of magic but each represents part of the universe. Each one has a thing or place that is the source of it. Many people personify the sources as if they are gods because they often act in ways that seem intelligent though they are simply outside of our understanding.
Light -
Light magic originates in the universe from the sun, which provides well light, warmth and life to the universe. Light also provides guidance, it shows you where you can go. Think like lamps posts along a path. This is why the kyri who worship light, live on a tidally locked planet always under the sun and live in houses shaped like lighthouses. Light houses being known as lights that guide ships to shore.
theres more info about this here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/47663995/
Psychic/mind -
Most things that exist have a mind. so technically a relationship with inanimate object really is possible, its even possible to become one. This is part of how the rocks that Mylar speaks with work, and a major part of my other character Everlies backstory. (she fucks things)
Creatures in the universe evolved to have mushy brains which intercept the signal of their mind allowing them to have better control over their physical form. Other creatures such as rocks learnt to use magic to move about, they evolved to be tough and hard so that they could live longer. One neat thing is someone who can control minds can lift a rock as if they had the force because they are forcing it to take that action.
Wielding psychic magic is done with a lesser mind, an object that does not have a functioning mind. Its usually because the object is too small or it has no been given a mind for some other reason. It can be connected to you as an extension. This allows for things like robot limbs. If you can connect a lesser mind to another person it will allow you to take advantage of them in certain ways.
Minds are usually worn on the body as a necklace, bracelet or even clothing. A mind is connected to another by forcing a connection between the two. This is usually done with memory, which is why most have a personal object as a lesser mind. Forcing this connection with another person can be a lot more tricky if they are conscious. One way you could do it is by tricking somebody into connecting themselves. Its a lot easier for them to force the connection than for you and lesser minds are often used to contain information that can be accessed by connecting with it. This is why many Psychic's are very charismatic and charming people.
It is possible to infiltrate a mind of a person while they are sleeping. While doing this you could leave instructions that basically hypnotize a person in a specific way or connect them to another mind.
But if you want to be a powerful psychic sorcerer you need to be a bit more evil. You could basically possess a fresh corpse by transferring its mind into a lesser mind and then binding your self to the body, which is not a simple process. Binding yourself to another person is done using a third-party as a host. Both individuals fight for control of the bodies and the looser can either be set aside for a moment or forced into a lesser mind. Being transferred into a lesser mind would basically be like purgatory.
Lesser minds can also be used as storage for information. Libraries with random objects on shelves instead of books that can be read only by psychics with magic books, Or they can perhaps be used to store thoughts.
Most objects that exist are not super intelligent. They possess a mind but don't think. So its ok for most people to be careless with the environment and destroy as they please. If you ever cant find you keys there is a chance they found out how to move.
It is possible to train a mind to have a very basic understanding. This mind can be taught how to use a machine body basically becoming a robot. Some creative people utilize the flesh of creatures combined with technologies to create an abomination that could be controlled manually or given instructions like surveillance.
I have two ideas for reading minds, one being done with a book that is paired to a person. The book writes on itself a jumble of cryptic letters, words and random bits of imagery that if you know what your doing can be deciphered. Another way is the Great mind;
Similar to the sun there has to be a source of the mind magic. So somewhere in the universe is a massive indescribable thing that contains every thought of every being. maybe it looks like a huge school of fish. Unlike the sun this object can in fact communicate. Its a mind made up of all minds. And if you have light to guide you inside of it you may be able to find yourself or others inside of its labyrinthian interior.
A mind can be destroyed if the integrity of the object is damaged. So if a person is killed they could remain alive if the body stays intact enough but if it decays or is torn to pieces then your mind returns to the Greatmind and is reincarnated in something new. Reincarnations retain very little memory of a previous life.
When a loved one or someone dies the body is usually burned to make sure that they're mind is safely returned to the Greatmind(i need to come up with a cool name for that) with the light from the flames to guide them there. Since Aether travel was invented a more convenient way was to send the into the sun directly.
All of the races of people that live in the universe were created by the great mind as an extension of itself. People are the universes way of looking at itself. Using people the universe is able to gain control over its own shape. Some races were given the ability to use magic that is passed down to their children(Actually I haven't decided whether magic is something all can learn or only some). Some people were given such power that they became legends, many people believed that they were gods and chose to worship them. This created two different types of religions. Those who worship a deity and believe in the things the Great person preached during their time and those who worship the universe or magic, focus on the self and being one with the universe.
Here are a couple of species I plan to have. Very standard stuff I haven't put the time into this aspect yet, apart from the Kyri.
Canun - A species of canine people with a large variety of appearances. They were one of the earliest species born so had the most time to spread and adapt.
They contain multiple subspecies that developed their own cultures and civilizations. One being the Kyri
Kyri - Originally dark brown furred fox with four ears, now more known by their glowing magic fur. Most of the kyri live in solitude on the tidally locked planet Iterra practicing magic and perfecting the self so that they can help guide others. Read more : https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10213835
There are very few non glowing kyri remaining. They have lost most of their heritage and remain on other worlds.
Humans - I'm still not certain whether I want to include humans but I'm leaning towards it.
If I do decide to have humans they will be a smaller percentage of the universe who choose to remain in their little portion of the worlds. Coming across one elsewhere would be rare.
Ill probably make a dedicated journal for races. the other two I haven't thought about much are cats and lizards also maybe bugs.
That's all for now.
Also here is a cool map https://twitter.com/Discreet_user_/.....irRxCZYv9pDWaw
The Universe:
The universe is one different to ours with very different rules. I was inspired a lot by the movie Treasure planet. I wanted the kind of solar sail ships but in a more industrial setting. So I made like little tugboat spaceships. While trying to get inspiration for this I found Ian mcque's art which basically directly influenced the way they look.
I wanted space, or the Aether cause that sounds more magical, to have a very maritime or aquatic feel to it. So i made the boats almost resemble the shape of a blue whale and gave them little solar panel fins which use solar light energy that flows through the world as a natural bridge between the planets designed for people to use by... something maybe not sure yet.
The entire universe is kind of like one unified organism. Everything that happens is predetermined and all magics are naturally occurring. I haven't thought of every possible type of magic but each represents part of the universe. Each one has a thing or place that is the source of it. Many people personify the sources as if they are gods because they often act in ways that seem intelligent though they are simply outside of our understanding.
Magics:
Light -
Light magic originates in the universe from the sun, which provides well light, warmth and life to the universe. Light also provides guidance, it shows you where you can go. Think like lamps posts along a path. This is why the kyri who worship light, live on a tidally locked planet always under the sun and live in houses shaped like lighthouses. Light houses being known as lights that guide ships to shore.
theres more info about this here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/47663995/
Psychic/mind -
Most things that exist have a mind. so technically a relationship with inanimate object really is possible, its even possible to become one. This is part of how the rocks that Mylar speaks with work, and a major part of my other character Everlies backstory. (she fucks things)
Creatures in the universe evolved to have mushy brains which intercept the signal of their mind allowing them to have better control over their physical form. Other creatures such as rocks learnt to use magic to move about, they evolved to be tough and hard so that they could live longer. One neat thing is someone who can control minds can lift a rock as if they had the force because they are forcing it to take that action.
Wielding psychic magic is done with a lesser mind, an object that does not have a functioning mind. Its usually because the object is too small or it has no been given a mind for some other reason. It can be connected to you as an extension. This allows for things like robot limbs. If you can connect a lesser mind to another person it will allow you to take advantage of them in certain ways.
Minds are usually worn on the body as a necklace, bracelet or even clothing. A mind is connected to another by forcing a connection between the two. This is usually done with memory, which is why most have a personal object as a lesser mind. Forcing this connection with another person can be a lot more tricky if they are conscious. One way you could do it is by tricking somebody into connecting themselves. Its a lot easier for them to force the connection than for you and lesser minds are often used to contain information that can be accessed by connecting with it. This is why many Psychic's are very charismatic and charming people.
It is possible to infiltrate a mind of a person while they are sleeping. While doing this you could leave instructions that basically hypnotize a person in a specific way or connect them to another mind.
But if you want to be a powerful psychic sorcerer you need to be a bit more evil. You could basically possess a fresh corpse by transferring its mind into a lesser mind and then binding your self to the body, which is not a simple process. Binding yourself to another person is done using a third-party as a host. Both individuals fight for control of the bodies and the looser can either be set aside for a moment or forced into a lesser mind. Being transferred into a lesser mind would basically be like purgatory.
Lesser minds can also be used as storage for information. Libraries with random objects on shelves instead of books that can be read only by psychics with magic books, Or they can perhaps be used to store thoughts.
Most objects that exist are not super intelligent. They possess a mind but don't think. So its ok for most people to be careless with the environment and destroy as they please. If you ever cant find you keys there is a chance they found out how to move.
It is possible to train a mind to have a very basic understanding. This mind can be taught how to use a machine body basically becoming a robot. Some creative people utilize the flesh of creatures combined with technologies to create an abomination that could be controlled manually or given instructions like surveillance.
I have two ideas for reading minds, one being done with a book that is paired to a person. The book writes on itself a jumble of cryptic letters, words and random bits of imagery that if you know what your doing can be deciphered. Another way is the Great mind;
Similar to the sun there has to be a source of the mind magic. So somewhere in the universe is a massive indescribable thing that contains every thought of every being. maybe it looks like a huge school of fish. Unlike the sun this object can in fact communicate. Its a mind made up of all minds. And if you have light to guide you inside of it you may be able to find yourself or others inside of its labyrinthian interior.
A mind can be destroyed if the integrity of the object is damaged. So if a person is killed they could remain alive if the body stays intact enough but if it decays or is torn to pieces then your mind returns to the Greatmind and is reincarnated in something new. Reincarnations retain very little memory of a previous life.
When a loved one or someone dies the body is usually burned to make sure that they're mind is safely returned to the Greatmind(i need to come up with a cool name for that) with the light from the flames to guide them there. Since Aether travel was invented a more convenient way was to send the into the sun directly.
Inhabitants -
All of the races of people that live in the universe were created by the great mind as an extension of itself. People are the universes way of looking at itself. Using people the universe is able to gain control over its own shape. Some races were given the ability to use magic that is passed down to their children(Actually I haven't decided whether magic is something all can learn or only some). Some people were given such power that they became legends, many people believed that they were gods and chose to worship them. This created two different types of religions. Those who worship a deity and believe in the things the Great person preached during their time and those who worship the universe or magic, focus on the self and being one with the universe.
Here are a couple of species I plan to have. Very standard stuff I haven't put the time into this aspect yet, apart from the Kyri.
Canun - A species of canine people with a large variety of appearances. They were one of the earliest species born so had the most time to spread and adapt.
They contain multiple subspecies that developed their own cultures and civilizations. One being the Kyri
Kyri - Originally dark brown furred fox with four ears, now more known by their glowing magic fur. Most of the kyri live in solitude on the tidally locked planet Iterra practicing magic and perfecting the self so that they can help guide others. Read more : https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10213835
There are very few non glowing kyri remaining. They have lost most of their heritage and remain on other worlds.
Humans - I'm still not certain whether I want to include humans but I'm leaning towards it.
If I do decide to have humans they will be a smaller percentage of the universe who choose to remain in their little portion of the worlds. Coming across one elsewhere would be rare.
Ill probably make a dedicated journal for races. the other two I haven't thought about much are cats and lizards also maybe bugs.
That's all for now.
Also here is a cool map https://twitter.com/Discreet_user_/.....irRxCZYv9pDWaw
Character Lore and Bios - V2
Posted 3 years agoUpdated my characters lore, i had fun with this
Current lore on my characters
My characters:
Mylar Bezier - A happy Kyri Fox (Also known as a Fyre Fox)
Mylar is known to literally light up a room.
She comes from a tribe / group of sorcerers known as Kyri who worship light. They were gifted fur that has magical properties that allows them to harness magic easier than other creatures. The fur spreads over their bodies becoming brighter as they age untill they reach the end of their lifespan and become blinding to look at.
The Kyri, Long before they glowed, was a warrior nation who fought for good, but were tricked into fighting on the wrong side during a great battle.
They lost most of their people during the battle and eventually surrendered. The remaining Kyri were banished and their nation disbanded. In their shame they were left stranded in the aether with no home eventually becoming travelling nomads. But the people resented them as they were seen as traitors.
Completely lost, the kyri reached out to the god of light, who was known for showing guidance and direction, Light pittied the Kyri and led them toward a planet where they could worhsip him and find new purpose.
The kyri learned to forgive themselves for their mistakes and made it their goal to guide and help others without violence. The Light was very pleased with them and rewarded them with magical glowing fur so that they could carry the light no matter how dark they found it. They're new fur seperated them from the people they used to be, they could know be accepted by the others worlds and their mistakes forgotten.
There remains very few of the original non glowing kyri, and through cross breeding they have lost most of their heritage, the main remaining feature being the 4 four ears.
Mylar grew up with these people many years after these events on the planet they call home, A tidally locked planet where the live in constant sunset. Mylar was taught many things by her people. She was very atheletic. She had very precise footwork and could cross over obstacles like water down a creek. She practice alot of different types of magic, specialising mostly in Empathic magic and healing magic.
She also learned how to fluke, fluking is a spell that binds to you temporary giving you extraordinary luck. for example if you were in danger of being hit by a car that was undoubtably going to hit you, it simply wouldn't. though this spell does have potential negative consequences. In exchange for your life in often takes another. This spell has very specific requirements to be cast. Firstly, something very unlucky must happen to you for example; being struck by lightning, then if your still alive, you must say a word that has never been said before in under ten seconds and clap. All you friends might think you lost it but you wont be the one whose dead when a stray bullet flies in your direction. Most great sorcerers believe that this spell works by the universe getting all twisted up around you as a result of your utterly ridiculous actions.
Mylar spents alot of her time meditating, balancing rocks, balancing on rocks and communicating with rocks. Not all rocks though. Most rocks cant talk back, and some aren't shaped that good. But their world is home to a species of sapient rock that wander about alot. These rocks are quite nice and often join together to form a bridge or something helpful, but sometimes when they are feeling silly they will go right up to the top of the mountains and just hurl them selves down. Which is quite dangerous to the kyri who maybe at the bottom. So Mylar often spends time convincing them not to do this and if they're nice she might balance them for a bit.
Kyri people often go on journeys through the Aether to help people and check up on places they have restored and assisted. When Mylar was young she had never left her planet and used to listen to the stories that the older Kyri brought back about magnificant other worlds and all the different types of people that existed. She was very interested in great cities and the new technologies people had invented.
On one of these journeys A Kyri had picked up an Orphan child the same age as Mylar named Eli.
Eli - Eli was an orphan child who was forced into the hands of a travelling Kyri. The Fox decided he would be cared for best with their people. Returning to their homeworld the child was taught the ways of the Kyri along side mylar. Growing up in this envirnonment, although it was very accepting of him, He never felt like he fit in. He could not learn magic like the others. Only those born with magic could wield it. He did not glow like the others. This led him to becoming irrationally afraid of dark places and he couldnt go anywhere alone. And being brought in at a slightly older age made him learn slower.
He grew up in a rough place and learned some bad behaviours that the Kyri struggled with fixing. Though some of the Kyri themselves were also tempted to break some rules because of him. Mylar and him became good friends and often went on dangerous trips to the dark side of the planet to see the mysterious wildlife against the wishes of the elders.
Though he was never teased or bullied for being different, his real fear was existential. he was afraid to upset their god.
One day when Eli left the following to seek his true belonging. Mylar gave him a braid of her fur. so that no matter where he went the light would always be with him.
Years later mylar would too leave and one day they could reunite.
Umbra Pierce - a cybernetic thug.
Umbra lives on the abandoned mining planet of Argosa-5. Long left to rot and die with no way for the miners to leave, they took to making the most of what they had and established their own society of downtrodden thieves and scavengers. The rest of the universe believed that there had been a rebellion, the planet had to be abandoned and the people there was left behind as punishment. The planets surface was severely scarred by mining equipment and deep carverns that go down for miles. The depths of the planet far worse.
With barely any resources for agriculture the people live mostly off of flying animals and vermin. But the major resources come from piracy. Eventually people were able to repurpose much of the mining equipment into working Aetherships. They would travel far away from Argosa and steal food and resources to bring back. The most valuable resource being magical flowers. These flowers had the ability to power the great big warpgates that were once used to come to this planet. The gates required an entire greenhouse of flowers to become operational and last long enough to push a attack against their oppressors.
Umbra was a pirate and a thief, not a super talented one but not terrible. She spent more time stealing from those who lived on the planet, since getting on board a pirate crew was not easy.
Umbra had cybernetic enhanced limbs that were common place on Argosa. The original purpose of these was to help working longer hours and lifting. They are now used to break peoples noses.
Ember - Embers orignal purpose was to be the opposite of mylar but with the way the story has changed i no longer have need for her in the story. Though her backstory wasnt that fleshed out anyway, shes a kinky demon dragon, it just doesnt fit anymore. but i may repurpose her in the future.
Everly Linette - Everly lives in the same universe as Mylar but she has a seperate story, that potentially crosses over with mylars. I'm looking forward to working on it when im finished with mylar.
Everly is an intelligent and busy women, always has something going on, she speaks in long wordy sentences at first but the longer you talk to her the faster she talks, wanting to be done with you. She runs the only Astral Detective Agency. She solves problems, there isnt really a good enough way to desribe her job as its often involves problems that are beyond people.
Everly is majorly attracted to objects. She has had relationships with all matter of.. things. Things such as pens, doors and magical flowers. Though some flowers are known to have relationships with each other so not that unusual.
It all began when a man she loved got inexplicably turned into a bottle of whisky. Though this was quite devastating, their love was so powerful that they could set aside their differences and continue to be together. At first it was great they would do everything together just as they always did. Travel, watch plays, argue sometimes, eat dinners, get real mad, go to the pub. One time they were both at the pub and well. It was all falling apart, the whisky bottle couldnt be with Everly anymore. He always told her that the shelf was to high, that he was afraid he will fall, and she wouldnt get a new one. But she would always say, "Your a whisky bottle you cant move!" and so he was leaving her. Everly said she was done with a bottle of his shape and size and that there were plenty of other bottles over there behind the bar. She left him in the bar alone. He was moments later poured and drunken.
This is all subject to change, im always coming up with new ideas and i often change a backstory almost completely
Current lore on my characters
My characters:
Mylar Bezier - A happy Kyri Fox (Also known as a Fyre Fox)
Mylar is known to literally light up a room.
She comes from a tribe / group of sorcerers known as Kyri who worship light. They were gifted fur that has magical properties that allows them to harness magic easier than other creatures. The fur spreads over their bodies becoming brighter as they age untill they reach the end of their lifespan and become blinding to look at.
The Kyri, Long before they glowed, was a warrior nation who fought for good, but were tricked into fighting on the wrong side during a great battle.
They lost most of their people during the battle and eventually surrendered. The remaining Kyri were banished and their nation disbanded. In their shame they were left stranded in the aether with no home eventually becoming travelling nomads. But the people resented them as they were seen as traitors.
Completely lost, the kyri reached out to the god of light, who was known for showing guidance and direction, Light pittied the Kyri and led them toward a planet where they could worhsip him and find new purpose.
The kyri learned to forgive themselves for their mistakes and made it their goal to guide and help others without violence. The Light was very pleased with them and rewarded them with magical glowing fur so that they could carry the light no matter how dark they found it. They're new fur seperated them from the people they used to be, they could know be accepted by the others worlds and their mistakes forgotten.
There remains very few of the original non glowing kyri, and through cross breeding they have lost most of their heritage, the main remaining feature being the 4 four ears.
Mylar grew up with these people many years after these events on the planet they call home, A tidally locked planet where the live in constant sunset. Mylar was taught many things by her people. She was very atheletic. She had very precise footwork and could cross over obstacles like water down a creek. She practice alot of different types of magic, specialising mostly in Empathic magic and healing magic.
She also learned how to fluke, fluking is a spell that binds to you temporary giving you extraordinary luck. for example if you were in danger of being hit by a car that was undoubtably going to hit you, it simply wouldn't. though this spell does have potential negative consequences. In exchange for your life in often takes another. This spell has very specific requirements to be cast. Firstly, something very unlucky must happen to you for example; being struck by lightning, then if your still alive, you must say a word that has never been said before in under ten seconds and clap. All you friends might think you lost it but you wont be the one whose dead when a stray bullet flies in your direction. Most great sorcerers believe that this spell works by the universe getting all twisted up around you as a result of your utterly ridiculous actions.
Mylar spents alot of her time meditating, balancing rocks, balancing on rocks and communicating with rocks. Not all rocks though. Most rocks cant talk back, and some aren't shaped that good. But their world is home to a species of sapient rock that wander about alot. These rocks are quite nice and often join together to form a bridge or something helpful, but sometimes when they are feeling silly they will go right up to the top of the mountains and just hurl them selves down. Which is quite dangerous to the kyri who maybe at the bottom. So Mylar often spends time convincing them not to do this and if they're nice she might balance them for a bit.
Kyri people often go on journeys through the Aether to help people and check up on places they have restored and assisted. When Mylar was young she had never left her planet and used to listen to the stories that the older Kyri brought back about magnificant other worlds and all the different types of people that existed. She was very interested in great cities and the new technologies people had invented.
On one of these journeys A Kyri had picked up an Orphan child the same age as Mylar named Eli.
Eli - Eli was an orphan child who was forced into the hands of a travelling Kyri. The Fox decided he would be cared for best with their people. Returning to their homeworld the child was taught the ways of the Kyri along side mylar. Growing up in this envirnonment, although it was very accepting of him, He never felt like he fit in. He could not learn magic like the others. Only those born with magic could wield it. He did not glow like the others. This led him to becoming irrationally afraid of dark places and he couldnt go anywhere alone. And being brought in at a slightly older age made him learn slower.
He grew up in a rough place and learned some bad behaviours that the Kyri struggled with fixing. Though some of the Kyri themselves were also tempted to break some rules because of him. Mylar and him became good friends and often went on dangerous trips to the dark side of the planet to see the mysterious wildlife against the wishes of the elders.
Though he was never teased or bullied for being different, his real fear was existential. he was afraid to upset their god.
One day when Eli left the following to seek his true belonging. Mylar gave him a braid of her fur. so that no matter where he went the light would always be with him.
Years later mylar would too leave and one day they could reunite.
Umbra Pierce - a cybernetic thug.
Umbra lives on the abandoned mining planet of Argosa-5. Long left to rot and die with no way for the miners to leave, they took to making the most of what they had and established their own society of downtrodden thieves and scavengers. The rest of the universe believed that there had been a rebellion, the planet had to be abandoned and the people there was left behind as punishment. The planets surface was severely scarred by mining equipment and deep carverns that go down for miles. The depths of the planet far worse.
With barely any resources for agriculture the people live mostly off of flying animals and vermin. But the major resources come from piracy. Eventually people were able to repurpose much of the mining equipment into working Aetherships. They would travel far away from Argosa and steal food and resources to bring back. The most valuable resource being magical flowers. These flowers had the ability to power the great big warpgates that were once used to come to this planet. The gates required an entire greenhouse of flowers to become operational and last long enough to push a attack against their oppressors.
Umbra was a pirate and a thief, not a super talented one but not terrible. She spent more time stealing from those who lived on the planet, since getting on board a pirate crew was not easy.
Umbra had cybernetic enhanced limbs that were common place on Argosa. The original purpose of these was to help working longer hours and lifting. They are now used to break peoples noses.
Ember - Embers orignal purpose was to be the opposite of mylar but with the way the story has changed i no longer have need for her in the story. Though her backstory wasnt that fleshed out anyway, shes a kinky demon dragon, it just doesnt fit anymore. but i may repurpose her in the future.
Everly Linette - Everly lives in the same universe as Mylar but she has a seperate story, that potentially crosses over with mylars. I'm looking forward to working on it when im finished with mylar.
Everly is an intelligent and busy women, always has something going on, she speaks in long wordy sentences at first but the longer you talk to her the faster she talks, wanting to be done with you. She runs the only Astral Detective Agency. She solves problems, there isnt really a good enough way to desribe her job as its often involves problems that are beyond people.
Everly is majorly attracted to objects. She has had relationships with all matter of.. things. Things such as pens, doors and magical flowers. Though some flowers are known to have relationships with each other so not that unusual.
It all began when a man she loved got inexplicably turned into a bottle of whisky. Though this was quite devastating, their love was so powerful that they could set aside their differences and continue to be together. At first it was great they would do everything together just as they always did. Travel, watch plays, argue sometimes, eat dinners, get real mad, go to the pub. One time they were both at the pub and well. It was all falling apart, the whisky bottle couldnt be with Everly anymore. He always told her that the shelf was to high, that he was afraid he will fall, and she wouldnt get a new one. But she would always say, "Your a whisky bottle you cant move!" and so he was leaving her. Everly said she was done with a bottle of his shape and size and that there were plenty of other bottles over there behind the bar. She left him in the bar alone. He was moments later poured and drunken.
This is all subject to change, im always coming up with new ideas and i often change a backstory almost completely
Some lore 1
Posted 3 years ago[note some info here is no longer true or has changed]
Hey people,
Last few days ive been bored of drawing and of porn in general, dont worry tho. This is something that happens to me weekly and i think i large reason for it this time is that ive been spreading my energy into different things. So heres a bunch of lore and information about my whole thing, whatever this is. One day it will hopefully be comic worthy. or even just book worthy.
This is half lore notes and half blog i guess.
If you dont care about anything ive written below, id love to know whether your a prick or if theres nothing of value here at all.[2025 Edit: why did i say this?]
and Dont worry, porn will be back shortly
Fyre foxes religion
First we need a creation myth, Where did the universe come from. Perhaps not even the gods know. they are also trying to figure out where they came from and this universe was created so that hopefully they could find out why.
Nah
Gods dont live in another higher realm. or above people.
Gods ARE the universe. All of peoples minds if you mashed them all together would be the god of thought. The god of matter is everything you touch meaning everyday objects could be living (Ties in to Everlies plot). The god of Light brings warmth to all it touches, The god of nature, controls how plants form and grow. The god of Machinery.
The universes Magic is not controlled by a specific god. It is something that connects everything. Every god has access to it. And specific people born under special circumstances can also wield this rare magic. Most people arent able to.
One thing that exists beyond gods are magical flowers. that i have yet to come up with a name for. Each contain some of the universes magic within. These flowers are believed to posess an ethereal mind of its own. its own universe within its petals.
These can be used by everyday people to create magic contraptions allowing for machinery and advanced technologies to be made. all powered by magic.
The god of Light? - would make total sense considering fyre foxes glow.
The fyre foxes were either created by the god of light. or chosen. they used to be a species of dark brown foxes, untill the were given magical fur.
The god of light is a Good guy. He provides plants with sustenance, the worlds with heat and light. he shows the path to those who are lost.
The fyre foxes, before they glowed, searched for a tidal locked planet where they could spend more time in the light. They resided inbetween the light and dark. The god of light could sense their loyalty to him. So he gave them fur that shun his light where ever they were.
The Furs light not only shun light but it contained some of their gods own magic leading them to becoming very powerful magic users. Learning this magic became a strong part of their religion.
One thing fyre foxes did was at a certain age when they had prepared they would embark on a journey to spend the love and warmth of their people to the rest of the universe. Travelling to places that were unfortunate and helping the people. A trademark of a fyre fox being near by, were orbs of light that were cast to provide just a small convience to passer by.
Fyre foxes practiced most spells that could help people. things like healing wounds, sickness, telepathy, telekinesis and Conjuration.
Fyre foxes were able to sense weakness and emotional trauma in an individual in order to help them.
Practises of the fyre foxes include; Meditation, Communion activities like drinking tea, farming, agriculture, studying spells, arts and poetry
Some facts about their planet:
⦁ The fyre foxes pathways and buildings are only located on the side of the mountain that recieves sunlight.
⦁ all of their crops are also located on the sunny side
⦁ The depths of the mountains are avoided, as they are darker and filled with a fog that obscured the vision. it is a prime grounds for the local flora fauna and they prefer not to tamper with it.
⦁ To avoid the depths great pillars were created across the valleys for ease of traversal and to remain in the light. these make for great meditation areas for a clear mind.
⦁ Maybe or maybe not: one life form on the planet is a kind of living stone. who can form anything they wish. they made a deal with the fyre foxes that, they will take the form of homes, in return the foxes will polish the rocks and not destory any of the terrain in order to produce their own homes.
⦁ The temples and homes are made mostly of these meticulously stacked stones of varying shape and height. other temples are built into existing landscape.
⦁ The vessel used to travel to the planet remains in the centre of the village. it stands tall and upright exactly like a light house. with the mountains around it appearing as waves. The light house is home to great foxes whos light is almost blinding. They remain in the tower providing knowledge of their gods to those who seek it
Kye was a child who was forced into the hands of a travelling fyre fox. upon returning to their homeworld the child was taught the ways of the fyre foxes along side mylar. Growing up in this envirnonment, although it was very accepting of him. he never felt like he fit in. he could not learn magic like the others, he did not glow making him afraid to be alone in the dark and being brought in at a slightly older age made him learn slower. Though he was never teased or bullied, his real fear was existential. he was afraid to upset his god.
One day when Kye left the following to seek his true belonging. Mylar gave him a braid of her fur. so that no matter where he went the light would always be with him.
years later mylar would too leave and one day they could reunite.
Mylar, when she was born, was given a unique attribute. She could (Fuck it ive been thinking about scrapping this for a while, Mylar having the ability to alter peoples feelings makes in impossible to give her dialogue that is interesting, If everyone she met was nice she would never have any conflict in a story. Its a cool idea but it doesnt work if shes a main character, originally she was going to be a main side character. but more like part of the plot. she was the goal, the objective was to have her, which is also cool. but i find exploring her story to be more fascinating. Umbras characters is extremely underdeveloped in comparison and I cant think of a single interesting idea for her which sucks, im sure i will. )
Instead of mylar having an op ability shes gonna be an average fyre fox. she will still be a unique character in the story because of her background, she doesnt need stupid powers.
Her upbringing in a nuturing and happy settlement underprepared her for the real world. She ventured out without ever feeling true loss or sadness in her life. To her people dying is something to celebrate.
During her adventure she will meet dangerous individuals who she has to win over instead of forcefully changing their minds with powers. she needs to change in order to change others.
She will experience loss of people who have helped her on her travels, during hitchhiking and whatever else. Rising the question of what happens to those who are not of her people when they die.
She needs to learn what the world is really like without loosing hope. without abandoning her beliefs ( Perhaps this is their gods true test of their strength and loyalty, can you still see the light when surrounded by darkness)
When meeting kye again. She will learn that he has changed alot, he still wears the braid, but his beliefs have been altered by the things he has witnessed in his adventures.
(oh cool idea- at the end of kyes character arc he is given glowing fur)
Heres something extra I need to contemplate. -
the original idea for this WHOLE thing, was that it would be a comic. which im sure it will still be a comic, but i have thought about the idea of making it more of a book instead with just some of my own visuals to go along with it. might be easier, but nah i want a challenge. Currently i have no experience with either so its up to me. i gotta figure out which would work better.
The original idea was that this would be a porn comic. lol. Mylar and umbra would have wacky sex hijinks. The story was going be more comedic and light hearted. and nsfw. Things like the Penis doorhandles that must be pleasured to enter. That kind of tone im good at. and i dont know if both would work properly. Well idk if any of this will work.
Im thinking the way ill do it is SFW but its definitely mature. things like dick doorhandles could work. and if i feel like it, i can make offical fan fiction versions, where instead of mylar offering something for something, she offers a good fuck. probably wouldnt be hard to accomplish.
If i ended up making a big ol comic with probably alot of pages as this may turn out to be some day. i wouldnt mind sharing it with people irl aswell yunno.
Im being quite ambitious tho, and im ahead of myself on this rn.
On the topic tho. Ember's character is now going to change entirely. probably for the better. originally she was just a sex queen of degeneracy. pretty lame depraved story writing. So if she remains in the story somehow she will play a different role. I do like some of the ideas i made for her tho. She was gonna have a big ol palace castle with guys who willingly crucified herself to please her outside the gate. and they would be the guyswho told mylar how to gain entrance. idk ill think about it.
Hey people,
Last few days ive been bored of drawing and of porn in general, dont worry tho. This is something that happens to me weekly and i think i large reason for it this time is that ive been spreading my energy into different things. So heres a bunch of lore and information about my whole thing, whatever this is. One day it will hopefully be comic worthy. or even just book worthy.
This is half lore notes and half blog i guess.
If you dont care about anything ive written below, id love to know whether your a prick or if theres nothing of value here at all.[2025 Edit: why did i say this?]
and Dont worry, porn will be back shortly
Fyre foxes religion
First we need a creation myth, Where did the universe come from. Perhaps not even the gods know. they are also trying to figure out where they came from and this universe was created so that hopefully they could find out why.
Nah
Gods dont live in another higher realm. or above people.
Gods ARE the universe. All of peoples minds if you mashed them all together would be the god of thought. The god of matter is everything you touch meaning everyday objects could be living (Ties in to Everlies plot). The god of Light brings warmth to all it touches, The god of nature, controls how plants form and grow. The god of Machinery.
The universes Magic is not controlled by a specific god. It is something that connects everything. Every god has access to it. And specific people born under special circumstances can also wield this rare magic. Most people arent able to.
One thing that exists beyond gods are magical flowers. that i have yet to come up with a name for. Each contain some of the universes magic within. These flowers are believed to posess an ethereal mind of its own. its own universe within its petals.
These can be used by everyday people to create magic contraptions allowing for machinery and advanced technologies to be made. all powered by magic.
The god of Light? - would make total sense considering fyre foxes glow.
The fyre foxes were either created by the god of light. or chosen. they used to be a species of dark brown foxes, untill the were given magical fur.
The god of light is a Good guy. He provides plants with sustenance, the worlds with heat and light. he shows the path to those who are lost.
The fyre foxes, before they glowed, searched for a tidal locked planet where they could spend more time in the light. They resided inbetween the light and dark. The god of light could sense their loyalty to him. So he gave them fur that shun his light where ever they were.
The Furs light not only shun light but it contained some of their gods own magic leading them to becoming very powerful magic users. Learning this magic became a strong part of their religion.
One thing fyre foxes did was at a certain age when they had prepared they would embark on a journey to spend the love and warmth of their people to the rest of the universe. Travelling to places that were unfortunate and helping the people. A trademark of a fyre fox being near by, were orbs of light that were cast to provide just a small convience to passer by.
Fyre foxes practiced most spells that could help people. things like healing wounds, sickness, telepathy, telekinesis and Conjuration.
Fyre foxes were able to sense weakness and emotional trauma in an individual in order to help them.
Practises of the fyre foxes include; Meditation, Communion activities like drinking tea, farming, agriculture, studying spells, arts and poetry
Some facts about their planet:
⦁ The fyre foxes pathways and buildings are only located on the side of the mountain that recieves sunlight.
⦁ all of their crops are also located on the sunny side
⦁ The depths of the mountains are avoided, as they are darker and filled with a fog that obscured the vision. it is a prime grounds for the local flora fauna and they prefer not to tamper with it.
⦁ To avoid the depths great pillars were created across the valleys for ease of traversal and to remain in the light. these make for great meditation areas for a clear mind.
⦁ Maybe or maybe not: one life form on the planet is a kind of living stone. who can form anything they wish. they made a deal with the fyre foxes that, they will take the form of homes, in return the foxes will polish the rocks and not destory any of the terrain in order to produce their own homes.
⦁ The temples and homes are made mostly of these meticulously stacked stones of varying shape and height. other temples are built into existing landscape.
⦁ The vessel used to travel to the planet remains in the centre of the village. it stands tall and upright exactly like a light house. with the mountains around it appearing as waves. The light house is home to great foxes whos light is almost blinding. They remain in the tower providing knowledge of their gods to those who seek it
Kye was a child who was forced into the hands of a travelling fyre fox. upon returning to their homeworld the child was taught the ways of the fyre foxes along side mylar. Growing up in this envirnonment, although it was very accepting of him. he never felt like he fit in. he could not learn magic like the others, he did not glow making him afraid to be alone in the dark and being brought in at a slightly older age made him learn slower. Though he was never teased or bullied, his real fear was existential. he was afraid to upset his god.
One day when Kye left the following to seek his true belonging. Mylar gave him a braid of her fur. so that no matter where he went the light would always be with him.
years later mylar would too leave and one day they could reunite.
Mylar, when she was born, was given a unique attribute. She could (Fuck it ive been thinking about scrapping this for a while, Mylar having the ability to alter peoples feelings makes in impossible to give her dialogue that is interesting, If everyone she met was nice she would never have any conflict in a story. Its a cool idea but it doesnt work if shes a main character, originally she was going to be a main side character. but more like part of the plot. she was the goal, the objective was to have her, which is also cool. but i find exploring her story to be more fascinating. Umbras characters is extremely underdeveloped in comparison and I cant think of a single interesting idea for her which sucks, im sure i will. )
Instead of mylar having an op ability shes gonna be an average fyre fox. she will still be a unique character in the story because of her background, she doesnt need stupid powers.
Her upbringing in a nuturing and happy settlement underprepared her for the real world. She ventured out without ever feeling true loss or sadness in her life. To her people dying is something to celebrate.
During her adventure she will meet dangerous individuals who she has to win over instead of forcefully changing their minds with powers. she needs to change in order to change others.
She will experience loss of people who have helped her on her travels, during hitchhiking and whatever else. Rising the question of what happens to those who are not of her people when they die.
She needs to learn what the world is really like without loosing hope. without abandoning her beliefs ( Perhaps this is their gods true test of their strength and loyalty, can you still see the light when surrounded by darkness)
When meeting kye again. She will learn that he has changed alot, he still wears the braid, but his beliefs have been altered by the things he has witnessed in his adventures.
(oh cool idea- at the end of kyes character arc he is given glowing fur)
Heres something extra I need to contemplate. -
the original idea for this WHOLE thing, was that it would be a comic. which im sure it will still be a comic, but i have thought about the idea of making it more of a book instead with just some of my own visuals to go along with it. might be easier, but nah i want a challenge. Currently i have no experience with either so its up to me. i gotta figure out which would work better.
The original idea was that this would be a porn comic. lol. Mylar and umbra would have wacky sex hijinks. The story was going be more comedic and light hearted. and nsfw. Things like the Penis doorhandles that must be pleasured to enter. That kind of tone im good at. and i dont know if both would work properly. Well idk if any of this will work.
Im thinking the way ill do it is SFW but its definitely mature. things like dick doorhandles could work. and if i feel like it, i can make offical fan fiction versions, where instead of mylar offering something for something, she offers a good fuck. probably wouldnt be hard to accomplish.
If i ended up making a big ol comic with probably alot of pages as this may turn out to be some day. i wouldnt mind sharing it with people irl aswell yunno.
Im being quite ambitious tho, and im ahead of myself on this rn.
On the topic tho. Ember's character is now going to change entirely. probably for the better. originally she was just a sex queen of degeneracy. pretty lame depraved story writing. So if she remains in the story somehow she will play a different role. I do like some of the ideas i made for her tho. She was gonna have a big ol palace castle with guys who willingly crucified herself to please her outside the gate. and they would be the guyswho told mylar how to gain entrance. idk ill think about it.
Thanks everyone! :)
Posted 4 years agoJust want to make this to thank everyone who's watched and favourited my shit.
It means so much to me!
and seeing how quickly my art has progressed since my earliest upload gives me great hopes for the future!
Thanks for 150 watches and 1000 favs!
Hope you all stick around!
:)
It means so much to me!
and seeing how quickly my art has progressed since my earliest upload gives me great hopes for the future!
Thanks for 150 watches and 1000 favs!
Hope you all stick around!
:)
