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General | Posted 5 years agolooking to have 3 people read and give me feedback on the first chapter or 2 of the book I'm publishing.
I won't accept just anyone tho, ill need some evidence that you'll be able to provide the level of feedback/ critique I'm looking for.
Is it boring/interesting to read
What do the characters look like to you
What time period does this seem to take place in
Do the characters feel like they portray realistic emotions
What you liked
what you didn't like
was anything confusing
Any other critique you would want to add
I won't accept just anyone tho, ill need some evidence that you'll be able to provide the level of feedback/ critique I'm looking for.
Is it boring/interesting to read
What do the characters look like to you
What time period does this seem to take place in
Do the characters feel like they portray realistic emotions
What you liked
what you didn't like
was anything confusing
Any other critique you would want to add
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General | Posted 6 years agojust note me
