Hi! So awhile back an artist for Magic asked me for a few pointers on drawing a few types of animals. I gladly did, and he currently is an artist for MTG Bloomburrow. Taking a look at the art for the set, I wish I could have put in a piece, so, my goal is to make my art better, if not that kind of quality.

So, once a week I'll be putting in a completely hand drawn and colored piece and am looking for critiques - good, bad, and ugly. Again, my goal is to make it more realistic and more 'museum' quality so to speak. I have to start somewhere so this week it is this:

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57357662/
https://www.deviantart.com/goodtime.....ers-1074418553

I know the coloring needs a lot of work, there is smudging, outlines, all that - but I wanted a place to start from. So please be honest and tell me what needs work and what does work. Also, if there is a medium you think I should try, a different kind of paper, etc. let me know! I'd be willing to give it a shot. I'd just really like to improve.

Every weekly piece will be a future one for my New World, New Memories CYOA too, so it won't go to waste.

Again, I appreciate honesty.

Thanks! You are all great!

I've decided to try my hand at a transformation Create Your Own Adventure sort of thing.

It's called "New World, New Memories" and can be found on Deviantart here https://www.deviantart.com/goodtime.....ning-857157887 as well as Furaffinity as soon as I figure out how to construct it there.

Right now it's all intro and beginning offshoots, but I'll be rapidly increasing it.

Note: I will still be keeping up with other artwork, including commissions and requests and everything: this is just another side thing.

Check it out!

If anyone has any requests, let me know. Generally I do transformation sequences over several pages, but I also do one shots.

Commissions and trades will still priority over requests, but otherwise this is open.


Message me if you have any ideas you'd like to see!

Wow, so I've gotten enough commissions and requests for commissions now where I should probably put out info/rates.

It's $3 a page for commissions ($2 for not colored), but I also accept trades.

Commissions will be done first as I get them, followed by trades, then requests/things I want to draw.

I never thought I'd ever write a message like this, so thanks to everyone!

If anyone has any requests, let me know. Generally I do transformation sequences over several pages, but I also do one shots. Message me if you have any ideas you'd like to see!