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Chapter 6 Posted
Posted 8 years agoAshchu's Rape Chapter 6 is now posted.
I just have 1 encounter in this chapter because I wanted Meowth to have his own. I have up to chapter 9 written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. I do have some big surprises coming up, so be sure to stay tuned to future chapters. I am playing around with many different fetishes and I plan to try to put in as many different fetishes into this series as I can in order to keep it fresh and to keep it from getting boring. I'm still doing research while writing in order to keep things making sense, this also includes researching pokemon heights and proportions to keep things as believable as possible. It just doesn't make sense for Ashchu, as small as he is, to be the same size as say Lugia, which is huge. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series is still growing, I'm at 94 right now.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
Commissions are still open and the Commissions tab is enabled on my profile. All prices are still negotiable, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
I know some of you may be interested in an update to the Tails' Birthday Present Part 2. I am still writing it, but am primarily concentrating on Ashchu's Rape, so it may take a bit before Part 2 is posted. I also have been neglecting the submissions of the people I watch. I have them going back to 2015 and I am sitting at 173,333 right now, this is also causing a delay in writing. My goal is to have that count down to 0 within a month or 2.
I just have 1 encounter in this chapter because I wanted Meowth to have his own. I have up to chapter 9 written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. I do have some big surprises coming up, so be sure to stay tuned to future chapters. I am playing around with many different fetishes and I plan to try to put in as many different fetishes into this series as I can in order to keep it fresh and to keep it from getting boring. I'm still doing research while writing in order to keep things making sense, this also includes researching pokemon heights and proportions to keep things as believable as possible. It just doesn't make sense for Ashchu, as small as he is, to be the same size as say Lugia, which is huge. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series is still growing, I'm at 94 right now.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
Commissions are still open and the Commissions tab is enabled on my profile. All prices are still negotiable, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
I know some of you may be interested in an update to the Tails' Birthday Present Part 2. I am still writing it, but am primarily concentrating on Ashchu's Rape, so it may take a bit before Part 2 is posted. I also have been neglecting the submissions of the people I watch. I have them going back to 2015 and I am sitting at 173,333 right now, this is also causing a delay in writing. My goal is to have that count down to 0 within a month or 2.
Another update
Posted 8 years agoCommissions are still open and the Commissions tab is enabled on my profile. All prices are still negotiable, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
Ashchu's Rape Chapter 5 has been up for a few days and it's time for another update.
I have a few more chapters written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. I do have some surprises coming up, so be sure to stay tuned to future chapters. I am playing around with many different fetishes and I plan to try to put in as many different fetishes into this series as I can in order to keep it fresh and to keep it from getting boring. I'm still doing research while writing in order to keep things making sense, this also includes researching pokemon heights and proportions to keep things as believable as possible. It just doesn't make sense for Ashchu, as small as he is, to be the same size as say Lugia, which is huge. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series is still growing, I'm at 93 right now.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
I know some of you may be interested in an update to the Tails' Birthday Present Part 2. I am still writing it, but am primarily concentrating on Ashchu's Rape, so it may take a bit before Part 2 is posted. I also have been neglecting the submissions of the people I watch. I have them going back to 2015 and I am sitting at 211,463 right now, this is also causing a delay in writing. My goal is to have that count down to 0 within a month or 2.
Ashchu's Rape Chapter 5 has been up for a few days and it's time for another update.
I have a few more chapters written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. I do have some surprises coming up, so be sure to stay tuned to future chapters. I am playing around with many different fetishes and I plan to try to put in as many different fetishes into this series as I can in order to keep it fresh and to keep it from getting boring. I'm still doing research while writing in order to keep things making sense, this also includes researching pokemon heights and proportions to keep things as believable as possible. It just doesn't make sense for Ashchu, as small as he is, to be the same size as say Lugia, which is huge. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series is still growing, I'm at 93 right now.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
I know some of you may be interested in an update to the Tails' Birthday Present Part 2. I am still writing it, but am primarily concentrating on Ashchu's Rape, so it may take a bit before Part 2 is posted. I also have been neglecting the submissions of the people I watch. I have them going back to 2015 and I am sitting at 211,463 right now, this is also causing a delay in writing. My goal is to have that count down to 0 within a month or 2.
Commissions and Ashchu's Rape update
Posted 8 years agoI have opened up commissions and enabled the Commissions tab on my profile. All prices are negotiable at this time, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
Ashchu's Rape Chapter 4 is now up and it's time for another update.
I have a few more chapters written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. This will prevent gaps in the event I get writers block or need to take a break from writing. I also do some research while writing, this helps me keep the encounters with different pokemon making some kind of sense. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series seems to keep growing, I'm at 87 right now. In order to keep this story from having way too many chapters and to have room for pokemon to return for mor rounds with Ashchu, I'm going to be putting more pokemon in each chapter. This means the chapters will get longer starting with the chapter I am currently writing, so it will be a few weeks before you see the change.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
Ashchu's Rape Chapter 4 is now up and it's time for another update.
I have a few more chapters written, but will still keep to the 1 chapter every Wednesday timeline. This will prevent gaps in the event I get writers block or need to take a break from writing. I also do some research while writing, this helps me keep the encounters with different pokemon making some kind of sense. The list of pokemon I have to put in this series seems to keep growing, I'm at 87 right now. In order to keep this story from having way too many chapters and to have room for pokemon to return for mor rounds with Ashchu, I'm going to be putting more pokemon in each chapter. This means the chapters will get longer starting with the chapter I am currently writing, so it will be a few weeks before you see the change.
I am still accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
Ashchu's Rape series update and Commissions
Posted 8 years agoThe Ashchu's Rape story series is now fully underway.
With the action now heating up, I just wated to give a few updates with how this story and other projects will be uploaded going forward.
I am making notes as I go along so that I don't repeat Pokemon/Fetish combinations too much. I will also, keep re-reading and editing chapters as I find errors with them. If you find an error, please let me know and I'll fix it and re-upload it.
I will upload a new chapter every Wednesday. This gives me a chance to have a short break in between chapters and allow me to rest and work on other projects.
I will be accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
I have opened up commissions and enabled the Commissions tab on my profile. All prices are negotiable at this time, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
With the action now heating up, I just wated to give a few updates with how this story and other projects will be uploaded going forward.
I am making notes as I go along so that I don't repeat Pokemon/Fetish combinations too much. I will also, keep re-reading and editing chapters as I find errors with them. If you find an error, please let me know and I'll fix it and re-upload it.
I will upload a new chapter every Wednesday. This gives me a chance to have a short break in between chapters and allow me to rest and work on other projects.
I will be accepting requests for pokemon and/or fetishes readers would like to see in the series. Since it will be long series, I may run into writers block at least a few times and these requests will make it easier during those times. Just know that I will still be writing chapters during the rest of the week as long as I don't have other projects going, so it may be a few chapters or more before I'm able to work the request in, unless it makes sense to insert it into a chapter already completed. If that happens, expect to see it sooner, rather than later. I will keep each requestor updated so they know when to expect their request in the series.
You may contact me by note, commenting on a series update journal, or commenting on any series chapter posted. I will be keeping an eye on those 3 places closely. I do respond to every comment and note. Don't be shy, I will never judge, I know everyone has things they like to see that others may not enjoy so much. I will work every request in and won't discriminate. Requests will be worked into the series in the order they are received according to the date/time stamp on them.
I have opened up commissions and enabled the Commissions tab on my profile. All prices are negotiable at this time, with me being a bit new to writing, I just used random, fair costs for each type of commission. Once I get my first commission, I will put a queue on my profile. Once a price and details of a commission are agreed upon, 50% of the estimated cost will be due up front via paypal before I start working on it. When my queue consists of multiple commission types, I will be rotating through each type (i.e. Simple, then Complex, then Multi-Chapter). This will give me an even workload. Everyday I work on a commission, I will send a draft to the commissioner for their approval. Once finished, I will provide a semi-final draft to the commissioner for approval. Once approved, the final payment is due. Once the final payment is made, I will provide a final draft to the commissioner for their final approval. When that is approved, the commission is finished and uploaded here, unless the commissioner specifies otherwise. The commissioner will have full permission to repost their commission anywhere they wish as long as they credit me in the post, it is their story and may do with it as they wish.
The new Ashchu's Rape story series
Posted 8 years agoThe prologue chapter is up and I'll start writing the next chapter shortly. I know it was short, but it was only meant to give you a brief idea of what happened in the prequel so you, the reader, wouldn't be lost when reading this story.
Only the author and myself, know the full story of the prequel and I would love to post it. If they are reading this journal or the story, please contact me and let me know whether or not I have permission to post it.
I will only post the stories of this series here on FA as I don't really have the time to keep up with other sites as well.
This story will contain 30 chapters at a minimum. I will try to use as many fetishes as I can and work on my skill to be able to do threesomes, foursomes, moresomes.
Some pokemon may pop up more than once and try different fetishes each time.
I will take requests for Pokemon and/or fetishes you want to see during the story. Feel free to share them in notes or comments.
On a side note, I started writing because there were things I wanted to read, but couldn't find. I figured I could use my imagination and skill with words to create these stories on my own.
Real life tends to interfere with my writing. When it does, you may notice small changes in my writing, or in the instance of the last 2 chapters of Mewtwo's Pent Up Energy, some rather big changes.
Getting all these thoughts out of my head and in writing is a bit liberating for me and is more therapeutic than anything.
Only the author and myself, know the full story of the prequel and I would love to post it. If they are reading this journal or the story, please contact me and let me know whether or not I have permission to post it.
I will only post the stories of this series here on FA as I don't really have the time to keep up with other sites as well.
This story will contain 30 chapters at a minimum. I will try to use as many fetishes as I can and work on my skill to be able to do threesomes, foursomes, moresomes.
Some pokemon may pop up more than once and try different fetishes each time.
I will take requests for Pokemon and/or fetishes you want to see during the story. Feel free to share them in notes or comments.
On a side note, I started writing because there were things I wanted to read, but couldn't find. I figured I could use my imagination and skill with words to create these stories on my own.
Real life tends to interfere with my writing. When it does, you may notice small changes in my writing, or in the instance of the last 2 chapters of Mewtwo's Pent Up Energy, some rather big changes.
Getting all these thoughts out of my head and in writing is a bit liberating for me and is more therapeutic than anything.
Update on Mewtwo's Pent Up Energy
Posted 8 years agoI'm sorry the 3rd chapter isn't getting finished as fast as the last chapter.
Recent events at work have made it very difficult for me to write.
I do plan on having it finished and uploaded no later than Wednesday.
I'm off work Tuesday and Wednesday, so I have all day to write.
I am meeting my goal of getting 2 blocks of text done before work and 2 more after work at a minimum, so it might be finished tomorrow or Tuesday.
The last chapter won't take as long to write as it is the shortest chapter in the story, so it should be done shortly after the 3rd chapter is uploaded.
Due to a fan request I'll have a surprise in store for readers in the final chapter. It isn't what I had planned, but I think it'll get a good reception. This also should show, that I do take requests into consideration, even if they are not planned in the outline of the story.
Recent events at work have made it very difficult for me to write.
I do plan on having it finished and uploaded no later than Wednesday.
I'm off work Tuesday and Wednesday, so I have all day to write.
I am meeting my goal of getting 2 blocks of text done before work and 2 more after work at a minimum, so it might be finished tomorrow or Tuesday.
The last chapter won't take as long to write as it is the shortest chapter in the story, so it should be done shortly after the 3rd chapter is uploaded.
Due to a fan request I'll have a surprise in store for readers in the final chapter. It isn't what I had planned, but I think it'll get a good reception. This also should show, that I do take requests into consideration, even if they are not planned in the outline of the story.
Future of my writing
Posted 8 years agoSo it looks like my stories are getting a lot of views and I want to discuss my plans going forward.
There are 2 more chapters remaining in the current story. The final chapter may not be half as long as the others due to a small amount of content to put in it, but it made sense to do it that way and you'll see why.
The third chapter, I will be starting to write momentarily and I expect it to be as long as the second chapter.
I know someone is going to ask "Why did you start with a long chapter and make the rest shorter and shorter?" So I will answer that now. Short answer is, the amount of pairings. Long answer is, when I first planned it out, I bunched all the chapters together, then realized the story would be way too long. So I thought about how I could separate it into chapters and once you read the rest of the chapters you'll see that it actually makes sense.
What do you like/dislike about the current story? Any suggestions for improvement? Please let me know, this is the kind of info that will drive future story projects.
It is too early at this point for me to talk about starting commissions as I am inexperienced still, but if you want to commission me, send a message and we can work something out.
My next story project is going to be a big one. It will span 30 chapters at a minimum. It is a sequel to a commission I paid for years ago. Unfortunately, it wasn't posted online and I lost the author's info, so I am unable to contact them for permission to post the story they wrote for me. What this means is that for the first chapter, I am going to do a "Prologue" style chapter. This will briefly explain the events that happened in the prequel and better help you, the reader, understand what is going on. It will not contain material from the story itself.
Since this project will be so long, I will be taking requests for what readers want to see in following chapters.
There are 2 more chapters remaining in the current story. The final chapter may not be half as long as the others due to a small amount of content to put in it, but it made sense to do it that way and you'll see why.
The third chapter, I will be starting to write momentarily and I expect it to be as long as the second chapter.
I know someone is going to ask "Why did you start with a long chapter and make the rest shorter and shorter?" So I will answer that now. Short answer is, the amount of pairings. Long answer is, when I first planned it out, I bunched all the chapters together, then realized the story would be way too long. So I thought about how I could separate it into chapters and once you read the rest of the chapters you'll see that it actually makes sense.
What do you like/dislike about the current story? Any suggestions for improvement? Please let me know, this is the kind of info that will drive future story projects.
It is too early at this point for me to talk about starting commissions as I am inexperienced still, but if you want to commission me, send a message and we can work something out.
My next story project is going to be a big one. It will span 30 chapters at a minimum. It is a sequel to a commission I paid for years ago. Unfortunately, it wasn't posted online and I lost the author's info, so I am unable to contact them for permission to post the story they wrote for me. What this means is that for the first chapter, I am going to do a "Prologue" style chapter. This will briefly explain the events that happened in the prequel and better help you, the reader, understand what is going on. It will not contain material from the story itself.
Since this project will be so long, I will be taking requests for what readers want to see in following chapters.
Mewtwo's Pent Up Energy journal
Posted 8 years agoI posted my first story yesterday, I hope everyone is enjoying it. I do plan on continuing it for at least a total of 4 chapters.
I'll post the other chapters here as long as the story gets a good reception. I do appreciate constructive criticism. I also ask that people take it easy with the criticism since it is the my first try at writing.
I am halfway through the second chapter. Once it is done and posted, you'll notice a slight change. More emotions show on all the characters, even sympathy and a little remorse from Mewtwo. I hope this change makes the story better.
The way I have the story outlined, the first chapter is the longest. The second and third chapter is about half the length as the first. The final chapter will be the shortest. This is due to the amount of pairings.
Originally I wanted some threesomes and foursomes, but my lack of writing skill makes it almost impossible to put into wiritng, so those parts were cut from the outline. This also cut a significant amount of length from the entire story. If left in, the first chapter would double or triple in length to give you an idea of how much longer the story would be as a whole.
I am hoping that if my writing skills are good enough, I can take commissions for it. I know in the past I was trying to get into drawing, 3d modeling, and fursuit making. But writing seems to be easier for me.
Anyway, if all goes well, I should have the next chapter ready to post sometime in the next week. It all depends on work and how much I can get done everyday. It will most definitely be done and posted by Tuesday evening.
I'll post the other chapters here as long as the story gets a good reception. I do appreciate constructive criticism. I also ask that people take it easy with the criticism since it is the my first try at writing.
I am halfway through the second chapter. Once it is done and posted, you'll notice a slight change. More emotions show on all the characters, even sympathy and a little remorse from Mewtwo. I hope this change makes the story better.
The way I have the story outlined, the first chapter is the longest. The second and third chapter is about half the length as the first. The final chapter will be the shortest. This is due to the amount of pairings.
Originally I wanted some threesomes and foursomes, but my lack of writing skill makes it almost impossible to put into wiritng, so those parts were cut from the outline. This also cut a significant amount of length from the entire story. If left in, the first chapter would double or triple in length to give you an idea of how much longer the story would be as a whole.
I am hoping that if my writing skills are good enough, I can take commissions for it. I know in the past I was trying to get into drawing, 3d modeling, and fursuit making. But writing seems to be easier for me.
Anyway, if all goes well, I should have the next chapter ready to post sometime in the next week. It all depends on work and how much I can get done everyday. It will most definitely be done and posted by Tuesday evening.
My Fine is $545.60
Posted 11 years agoBah, why the hell not. Bandwagons can be fun. Maybe. I don't know, I've never actually been on one before.
The Rules: This is fun to do. Just read the 'offense' and if you've done it, you owe that fine.
You don't have to confess your answers, just the amount of your fine.
NOTE: fines to be added once, not for how ever many times you have done it. And be honest.
Smoked weed -- $10
Did acid or pills -- $5
Ever had sex at church -- $25
Woke up in the morning and did not know the person who was next to you -- $40
Had sex with someone on MySpace/Facebook/Bebo/FA? etc -- $25
Had sex for money -- $100
Ever had sex with a Puerto Rican -- $20
Vandalized something -- $20
Had sex on your parents' bed -- $10
Beat up someone -- $20
Been jumped -- $10
Cross dressed -- $10
Given money to stripper -- $25
Been in love with a stripper -- $20
Kissed someone who's name you didn't know -- $0.10
Hit on some one of the same sex while at work -- $15
Ever drive and drank -- $20
Ever got drunk at work, or went to work while still drunk -- $50
Used toys while having sex -- $30
Got drunk, passed out and don't remember the night before -- $20
Went skinny dipping -- $5
Had sex in a pool -- $20
Kissed someone of the same sex -- $10
Had sex with someone of the same sex -- $20
Cheated on your significant other -- $10
Masturbated -- $10
Cheated on your significant other with their relative or close friend -- $20
Done oral -- $5
Got oral -- $5
Done / got oral in a vehicle while it was moving -- $25
Stole something -- $10
Had sex with someone in jail -- $25
Made a nasty home video or took pictures -- $15
Had a threesome -- $50
Had sex in public -- $20
Been in the same room while someone was having sex --$25
Stole something worth over more than a hundred dollars-- $20
Had sex with someone 10 years older -- $20
Had sex with someone under the age accepted by rule of thumb (half your age plus 7) -- $25
Been in love with two people or more at the same time-- $50
Said you love someone but didn't mean it -- $25
Went streaking -- $5
Went streaking in broad daylight -- $15
Been arrested -- $5
Spent time in jail -- $15
Pissed in the pool -- $0.50
Played spin the bottle -- $5
Done something you regret -- $20
Had sex with your best friend -- $20
Had sex with someone you work with at work -- $25
Had anal sex -- $80
Lied to your mate -- $5
Lied to your mate about the sex being good -- $25
Tally it up and put it on your status as: "My Fine Is..." (nothing else) then repost.
The Rules: This is fun to do. Just read the 'offense' and if you've done it, you owe that fine.
You don't have to confess your answers, just the amount of your fine.
NOTE: fines to be added once, not for how ever many times you have done it. And be honest.
Smoked weed -- $10
Did acid or pills -- $5
Ever had sex at church -- $25
Woke up in the morning and did not know the person who was next to you -- $40
Had sex with someone on MySpace/Facebook/Bebo/FA? etc -- $25
Had sex for money -- $100
Ever had sex with a Puerto Rican -- $20
Vandalized something -- $20
Had sex on your parents' bed -- $10
Beat up someone -- $20
Been jumped -- $10
Cross dressed -- $10
Given money to stripper -- $25
Been in love with a stripper -- $20
Kissed someone who's name you didn't know -- $0.10
Hit on some one of the same sex while at work -- $15
Ever drive and drank -- $20
Ever got drunk at work, or went to work while still drunk -- $50
Used toys while having sex -- $30
Got drunk, passed out and don't remember the night before -- $20
Went skinny dipping -- $5
Had sex in a pool -- $20
Kissed someone of the same sex -- $10
Had sex with someone of the same sex -- $20
Cheated on your significant other -- $10
Masturbated -- $10
Cheated on your significant other with their relative or close friend -- $20
Done oral -- $5
Got oral -- $5
Done / got oral in a vehicle while it was moving -- $25
Stole something -- $10
Had sex with someone in jail -- $25
Made a nasty home video or took pictures -- $15
Had a threesome -- $50
Had sex in public -- $20
Been in the same room while someone was having sex --$25
Stole something worth over more than a hundred dollars-- $20
Had sex with someone 10 years older -- $20
Had sex with someone under the age accepted by rule of thumb (half your age plus 7) -- $25
Been in love with two people or more at the same time-- $50
Said you love someone but didn't mean it -- $25
Went streaking -- $5
Went streaking in broad daylight -- $15
Been arrested -- $5
Spent time in jail -- $15
Pissed in the pool -- $0.50
Played spin the bottle -- $5
Done something you regret -- $20
Had sex with your best friend -- $20
Had sex with someone you work with at work -- $25
Had anal sex -- $80
Lied to your mate -- $5
Lied to your mate about the sex being good -- $25
Tally it up and put it on your status as: "My Fine Is..." (nothing else) then repost.
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