New Series & Boost
General | Posted a year agoSo over a year ago I wrote a fic called Product Recall: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50584764/
Long story short, I'm planning on making a short series out of it, some fics will involve events from the story while a few others will be about the aftermath. My current story I'm working on in that universe will be based on this pic: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/58616299/
Yeah I like G5, sue me. XP
I recently got it from: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/daemoniaoutcast/ Please check em out, they're really nice and their art is really good.
Long story short, I'm planning on making a short series out of it, some fics will involve events from the story while a few others will be about the aftermath. My current story I'm working on in that universe will be based on this pic: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/58616299/
Yeah I like G5, sue me. XP
I recently got it from: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/daemoniaoutcast/ Please check em out, they're really nice and their art is really good.
Well.
General | Posted a year agoWell...that was a pain in the ass.
Regarding My Celly Wonka Fic (No. It's Not Cancelled)
General | Posted a year agoI've been meaning to get back into writing my fic for a while now. I've just been kinda stuck on how the story starts. For some reason I just can't agree with myself on a starting point. Though I seem to be circling more and more around one idea that instead of the Golden Tickets being won in a contest, they're given out to the tourists as an invitation. It'll make sense once it's all put together. Along with that I'm planning on somewhat rewriting the two chapter I've already posted Pinkie Pie Goes Up The Pipe & Goodbye Rarity. Reason why is I kinda wanna do something different with Pinkie's chapter but still keep it in line with the story. I've also moved said chapter into the scraps folder. With Rarity's chapter I kinda want to redo the whole inflation scene. Looking back on it, it was a decent effort back then, but I feel it doesn't work as well now. And that doesn't sit well with me as it's pretty much the BIG event of the story. Pun intended. I am also gonna work on another chapter. I figured that since it's Airborne August, I'd do the chapter on the Fizzy Lifting Drink Room. I'm gonna work on it alongside my current berry fic.
Well, that's pretty much it for now. I'll update you all again when I need to & I'm probably going to upload a few of my recent comms on here soon.
Well, that's pretty much it for now. I'll update you all again when I need to & I'm probably going to upload a few of my recent comms on here soon.
Beep
General | Posted a year agoHey all, just letting y'all know I'm still breathing. I'm also letting you know I'm working on something berry related for a belated Juicy July post. Little late I know, but I had other priorities. I'm on vacation next week so if I can't get it done by this weekend, I should have more than enough time to write it and maybe another fic or two while on break.
Anyways, hope y'all are enjoying your summer.
Anyways, hope y'all are enjoying your summer.
Update March 4th
General | Posted 2 years agoIt's been a few. Just been having a bit of an issue with myself. Nothing major, just, for some random reason, my motivations have been fluctuating. One day I just wanna write and the next I don't want to do a damn thing. Maybe it's the weather. Who knows.
What I DO know is that I'm gonna start outlying a new series of short, and spicy, fics involving Loona, Tex, and Bee, from Helluva Boss. Not to spoil anything but the gist of it, is that they become a ploy amorous couple and shenanigans ensue. Some stories will involve just standard love making, some with weight gain, and some inflation. Maybe a berry inflation later on.
No idea when the first chapter of that will be posted, or when I'll be done with any of my other projects. Like I said, my motivation fluctuates.
That's all for now.
What I DO know is that I'm gonna start outlying a new series of short, and spicy, fics involving Loona, Tex, and Bee, from Helluva Boss. Not to spoil anything but the gist of it, is that they become a ploy amorous couple and shenanigans ensue. Some stories will involve just standard love making, some with weight gain, and some inflation. Maybe a berry inflation later on.
No idea when the first chapter of that will be posted, or when I'll be done with any of my other projects. Like I said, my motivation fluctuates.
That's all for now.
Update
General | Posted 2 years agoOk. I'm actually gonna take a break from the berries for a while. Each time I try to do something involving the subject, I end up not finishing it. So, I'm gonna focus on other fetishes for a while. The only berry fic I'm gonna write is Pipe Pressure and that's only because I promised it to another creator. Sorry if any of you are disappointed by this.
Slight Delay
General | Posted 2 years agoHad a bit of a busy Saturday and I ended up not feeling so good today. Still working on the fic. I'll try to have it up this week or by next Saturday. Sorry guys.
2 Part Fic Incoming
General | Posted 2 years agoWorking on a 2-Part (kinda) Rarity berry inflation fic, featuring Applejack, right now. Hoping to get the first part out this weekend, schedule permitting.
This should make up for the fact that A) I haven't written anything in (literally) 10 months,
and
B) Make up for not having anything for Rarity Day.
Also I'm getting back to work on another (previously mentioned) berry fic called Pipe Pressure.
That's all for now.
This should make up for the fact that A) I haven't written anything in (literally) 10 months,
and
B) Make up for not having anything for Rarity Day.
Also I'm getting back to work on another (previously mentioned) berry fic called Pipe Pressure.
That's all for now.
It's Rarity Day!!! :D
General | Posted 2 years agoAnd I totally forgot!!! D:
Expect a quick berry Rarity fic soon. Also a fat fetish one too. :3
Expect a quick berry Rarity fic soon. Also a fat fetish one too. :3
Updating My Gallery
General | Posted 2 years agoUpdated my comm pics on here to their more appropriate sizes.
Update
General | Posted 2 years agoDoing better but I still don't feel like talking. Been working on a few projects and getting back into my Celly Wonka fic, which will come out I don't know when because I'm not writing it in chronological order. Might have a story or two by the weekend hopefully. One will be a story called Pipe Pressure, that I've been trying to write for Pinkierawr, and the other involves a another pic I got from Mitsi. Speaking of whom, I actually do have a completed story I'm going to upload shortly, involving his character KIM going through an all too familiar situation.
That's all for now.
Also thanks to everyone who faves and watched. I appreciate it.
That's all for now.
Also thanks to everyone who faves and watched. I appreciate it.
Taking a Break
General | Posted 3 years agoLong story short I'm gonna take a break for a while. I did something stupid, a friend called me out on it, and I realized I was in the wrong and I need some time to clear my head and rethink about myself.
I got one more fic I'll post here, but other than that I'm going quiet for a bit. I'll be fine, just please don't contact me. I just don't feel like talking right now.
Thanks for understanding.
I got one more fic I'll post here, but other than that I'm going quiet for a bit. I'll be fine, just please don't contact me. I just don't feel like talking right now.
Thanks for understanding.
Update on my Burnout
General | Posted 3 years agoI've been slowly starting to recover from my previously mentioned burnout. But I'm not gonna go crazy and start pumping out stories all at once. Instead, I'm gonna take a project, work on that, then move onto he next. Right now, I have 2 fics in my roster. One of them is actually gonna be a rewrite of one of my Rarity fics. Another is something I'm writing as a belated birthday present for Mitsi.
As for my Celly Wonka fic. That's on a bit of an indefinite hiatus right now for several reasons I won't get in to.
That's all for now.
As for my Celly Wonka fic. That's on a bit of an indefinite hiatus right now for several reasons I won't get in to.
That's all for now.
Taking a Short Break From Writing Here
General | Posted 3 years agoI'm suffering from creative burnout right now. I think I'm just overstimulated and just tired of berries right now. On top of that, a few creators I've followed over the years have turned out to be complete assholes. And it's just been a bit demoralizing.
I'll be back when I get my footing again.
Until then, here's one of my latest additions to my commission pile. Two years ago I commissioned this piece: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35430888/
From the amazing Cowcat44. Nearly two weeks ago I commd another piece from her here: https://twitter.com/Cowcat44/status/1549001360359563265?s=20&t=lzi4AGoE2LTu8-A5p4tDeg
Please, if you can, visit her page, give a like, etc. because she's been having trouble getting views. Something to do with Twitter shadow banning her or something. Twitter just sucks. But again, please, have a look.
Thanks. Talk to y'all soon.
I'll be back when I get my footing again.
Until then, here's one of my latest additions to my commission pile. Two years ago I commissioned this piece: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35430888/
From the amazing Cowcat44. Nearly two weeks ago I commd another piece from her here: https://twitter.com/Cowcat44/status/1549001360359563265?s=20&t=lzi4AGoE2LTu8-A5p4tDeg
Please, if you can, visit her page, give a like, etc. because she's been having trouble getting views. Something to do with Twitter shadow banning her or something. Twitter just sucks. But again, please, have a look.
Thanks. Talk to y'all soon.
July
General | Posted 3 years agoToday is July first, which is the start of what us berry lovers call (as a bit of a joke) Juicy July, which make a bit of sense because it's the month where blueberries really start to bloom.
It also the name makes sense when you really think of it. Like with May they call it Mayternity.
Anyways I just want to start off by saying thank you for all the support so far. It really make me happy that you guys love my stories and the pics that come with them. Hope you're all visiting the artists who've done them. If you haven't, then please do so.
So I'm planning on getting back to work on my Celly Wonka story. The first chapter is just a bit of a slog to get through. But hopefully it'll pick up once I get to the next chapter.
Also I'm planning on having iterations of the five kids in this story (all are actually adults) but I want to use more MLP-esque names for them.
I already have the name fir my Charlie equivalent, who I named Savory Sweet. If you have any name suggestions please let me know, and I'll be sure to credit you in the story if I like the name.
Anyways I had a suck day at work (a really suck day) and I'm gonna play some more Kerbal Space Program before getting back to writing berries.
Have a good day and happy Juicy July. 🫐
It also the name makes sense when you really think of it. Like with May they call it Mayternity.
Anyways I just want to start off by saying thank you for all the support so far. It really make me happy that you guys love my stories and the pics that come with them. Hope you're all visiting the artists who've done them. If you haven't, then please do so.
So I'm planning on getting back to work on my Celly Wonka story. The first chapter is just a bit of a slog to get through. But hopefully it'll pick up once I get to the next chapter.
Also I'm planning on having iterations of the five kids in this story (all are actually adults) but I want to use more MLP-esque names for them.
I already have the name fir my Charlie equivalent, who I named Savory Sweet. If you have any name suggestions please let me know, and I'll be sure to credit you in the story if I like the name.
Anyways I had a suck day at work (a really suck day) and I'm gonna play some more Kerbal Space Program before getting back to writing berries.
Have a good day and happy Juicy July. 🫐
Signal Boost
General | Posted 3 years agoPlease help where you can.
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10234507/
https://www.gofundme.com/f/voodooscause?utm_medium=email&utm_source=customer&utm_campaign=p_email%2B5806-thank-you-ask-share
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10234507/
https://www.gofundme.com/f/voodooscause?utm_medium=email&utm_source=customer&utm_campaign=p_email%2B5806-thank-you-ask-share
Still Here
General | Posted 3 years agoI'm still here. Just had a lack of motivation the last few weeks. I'll post my first chapter of that quick chocolate factory fic tomorrow, hopefully along with another fic I mentioned earlier with Shining Armor and Big Macintosh.
Also pretty soon I'll be posting one more berry fic sometime later called Milkshake Your Tail, staring Vinyl Scratch.
I'm also starting up my little furry romance fetish story and will start posting some quick fics of it soon.
Also I'll be uploading some KSP screenshots as well since I don't want to just post fetishy stuff here.
All for now.
Also pretty soon I'll be posting one more berry fic sometime later called Milkshake Your Tail, staring Vinyl Scratch.
I'm also starting up my little furry romance fetish story and will start posting some quick fics of it soon.
Also I'll be uploading some KSP screenshots as well since I don't want to just post fetishy stuff here.
All for now.
Update To Pass the Time
General | Posted 3 years agoOk so I'm working on creating my new furry project and I'm finally getting back to work on my Celly Wonka project. But I don't want to leave you all bored and waiting. So I'm going to work on a much shorter, 10-15 chapter, story to keep you all satisfied until I get some good progress on my aforementioned Wonka fic.
It'll be simple and quick. In this story Fluttershy (our Charlie), Twilight, Pinkie Pie (Augustus), Rarity, Applejack (Mike), Rainbow Dash (Marvin Prune (a character from an early draft of the book)), and Sunset Shimmer (Veruca) along with their respective mothers touring an all to familiar factory. They're all 18+ BTW. And, of course, mayhem and expansion ensues.
I did leave a few names out because of this: there's going to be three alternate chapters to this involving the same scene. See I couldn't decide on of I wanted Twilight (meant to be another cut character Miranda Piker) or Rarity (set to be Violet) to get the gum. So I said "screw it, I'll do alternate chapters" so I'm going do that, plus the ending chapter showing their fates after their mishaps.
Anyways I'm actually starting this up right now and hopefully will have it up soon, maybe the first chapter this weekend. We'll see.
Also if you're wondering who's going to play Sunset's mom, it's Stellar Flare (Sunbursts mom). Yeah I do have that as my head canon.
It'll be simple and quick. In this story Fluttershy (our Charlie), Twilight, Pinkie Pie (Augustus), Rarity, Applejack (Mike), Rainbow Dash (Marvin Prune (a character from an early draft of the book)), and Sunset Shimmer (Veruca) along with their respective mothers touring an all to familiar factory. They're all 18+ BTW. And, of course, mayhem and expansion ensues.
I did leave a few names out because of this: there's going to be three alternate chapters to this involving the same scene. See I couldn't decide on of I wanted Twilight (meant to be another cut character Miranda Piker) or Rarity (set to be Violet) to get the gum. So I said "screw it, I'll do alternate chapters" so I'm going do that, plus the ending chapter showing their fates after their mishaps.
Anyways I'm actually starting this up right now and hopefully will have it up soon, maybe the first chapter this weekend. We'll see.
Also if you're wondering who's going to play Sunset's mom, it's Stellar Flare (Sunbursts mom). Yeah I do have that as my head canon.
Update to my last journal
General | Posted 3 years agohttps://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10191964/
So, while I still plan to take a quick break from berry inflation, I am gonna tell about a new series of stories I'm planning, with some new fur OC's I came up with, and some do involve it along with other body expansion ideas as well as pregnancy. In fact, the first story I'm planning involves simulated preg and mpreg.
The three main characters in this are 18 y/o high school seniors.
The setting is in a society of space faring human-like dogs and cats. Their world is very advanced in technology in medicine, space travel, and entertainment. Our main characters live in the suburbs of their planet's enormous capital city.
The series is about a corgi named Danny, he's a bit of an outcast at school. He's always been nervous around others due to previous bullying from students and (long ago) his parents. He lives with both sets of his grandparents who took him in when his parents were arrested for abusing him. While he keeps to himself, he does talk and help many of the students, including two of the popular seniors. Jenny, a golden retriever who's not only a cheerleader, but one of the smartest girls in school. She comes from a decent middle-class home in the suburbs. Then there's her boyfriend Alexi, who comes from an ultra-rich family. His father runs a resort that I can only describe as Disney World on steroids.
Danny is actually bi and has a crush on both of them. But he just keeps it to himself and kind of tries to avoid them unless they need help with homework. But it turns out the two had been eyeballing him for a few years now. Alexi is also bi. Not only that, but he and Jenny are very...adventurous with their relationship. Fate soon crosses their paths when they sign up for a heath class for extra credit. Just before the holidays, their teacher gives out a voluntary assignment. Classmates would pair with a partner, and they would go through basically a parenthood simulation over their vacation. While some have the option to do adoption, others (both guys and gals) can simulate getting pregnant. The "baby" is an anamatronic that grows inside the subject's body and is conceived via a series of pills.
Danny, who had always wondered what the magic of motherhood was like, does volunteer to go through with the pregnancy simulation. However, due to an odd number of students in the class, it seems like he's destined to do this on his own. That is until Jenny and Alexi speak up and offer to take him in as a third partner. And the teacher agrees, much to Danny's shock.
Over the course of the stories, he gets to know the two and their families, as they get him to come out of his shell. As a result, sparks start to fly between the three. Also, some shenanigan's involving fat, inflation, etc. ensue. lol
Honestly describing this was a pain in the ass. lmao.
That's all for now.
So, while I still plan to take a quick break from berry inflation, I am gonna tell about a new series of stories I'm planning, with some new fur OC's I came up with, and some do involve it along with other body expansion ideas as well as pregnancy. In fact, the first story I'm planning involves simulated preg and mpreg.
The three main characters in this are 18 y/o high school seniors.
The setting is in a society of space faring human-like dogs and cats. Their world is very advanced in technology in medicine, space travel, and entertainment. Our main characters live in the suburbs of their planet's enormous capital city.
The series is about a corgi named Danny, he's a bit of an outcast at school. He's always been nervous around others due to previous bullying from students and (long ago) his parents. He lives with both sets of his grandparents who took him in when his parents were arrested for abusing him. While he keeps to himself, he does talk and help many of the students, including two of the popular seniors. Jenny, a golden retriever who's not only a cheerleader, but one of the smartest girls in school. She comes from a decent middle-class home in the suburbs. Then there's her boyfriend Alexi, who comes from an ultra-rich family. His father runs a resort that I can only describe as Disney World on steroids.
Danny is actually bi and has a crush on both of them. But he just keeps it to himself and kind of tries to avoid them unless they need help with homework. But it turns out the two had been eyeballing him for a few years now. Alexi is also bi. Not only that, but he and Jenny are very...adventurous with their relationship. Fate soon crosses their paths when they sign up for a heath class for extra credit. Just before the holidays, their teacher gives out a voluntary assignment. Classmates would pair with a partner, and they would go through basically a parenthood simulation over their vacation. While some have the option to do adoption, others (both guys and gals) can simulate getting pregnant. The "baby" is an anamatronic that grows inside the subject's body and is conceived via a series of pills.
Danny, who had always wondered what the magic of motherhood was like, does volunteer to go through with the pregnancy simulation. However, due to an odd number of students in the class, it seems like he's destined to do this on his own. That is until Jenny and Alexi speak up and offer to take him in as a third partner. And the teacher agrees, much to Danny's shock.
Over the course of the stories, he gets to know the two and their families, as they get him to come out of his shell. As a result, sparks start to fly between the three. Also, some shenanigan's involving fat, inflation, etc. ensue. lol
Honestly describing this was a pain in the ass. lmao.
That's all for now.
Taking a break from berries.
General | Posted 3 years agoI feel I've oversaturated my account with Berry stories. So, after one more story I'm writing for a friend, and a quick fic on my Sci-Twi berry comm from Mitsi, I'm gonna take a quick berry break. I'm going to do some more regular inflation, water inflation, fat, and preg.
I'm working on the story line to my Sunset berry sequel, which is why it's been taking so long to write. Also I reset my Celly Wonka fic because I actually hated what I wrote. It's the same plot line just a few changes have been applied.
Also I forgot to mention, Mitsi has a growth drive going to raise money for the damage to his house. It's a berry inflation drive involving his OC KIM. If you got a few buck go visit his GoFundMe.
That's it for now. I'll post those stories...as soon as I stop playing the new Lego Star Wars game.
Seriously this game is addicting. Lol
I'm working on the story line to my Sunset berry sequel, which is why it's been taking so long to write. Also I reset my Celly Wonka fic because I actually hated what I wrote. It's the same plot line just a few changes have been applied.
Also I forgot to mention, Mitsi has a growth drive going to raise money for the damage to his house. It's a berry inflation drive involving his OC KIM. If you got a few buck go visit his GoFundMe.
That's it for now. I'll post those stories...as soon as I stop playing the new Lego Star Wars game.
Seriously this game is addicting. Lol
Big Update
General | Posted 4 years agoOk soooo this is gonna be a weird update. I found out this morning that NecroFeline has left FA. Necro was one of the people (the other being Dudewazzup) who came up with the Celly Wonka universe. I got permission from both of them tow write my current project. Her leaving has put a bit of a damper on my mood.
BUT I don't want you guys and gals to panic. I'm not quitting or delaying. Quite the opposite. I've been thinking of doing this for a while and this morning was the straw that broke the camel's back. So I decided, as much as my OCD hates this, that I'm going to skip a bit to where the characters enter the factory.
I'll post the chapters in between 3 and the one where the tour begins at a later date. I just want to do this now because of this morning and, as I've said before, writing these opening chapters is sooo boring. I want to get to the good stuff and I know you all do too.
But I don't want y'all to be lost so here's an exposition dump:
In the next chapter we have a small montage of characters getting their tickets.
The winners here are:
Fluttershy
Rainbow Dash
Troubleshoes Clyde
Caramel
Starlight
Sunburst
Trixie
Chancellor Neighsay
Dean Cinch
Blueblood
Vinyl
Octavia
Double Diamond
Party Favor
Treehugger
Rarity
Timber Spruce and Gloriosa Daisey
We then cut back to Sunset at work, when a rather chubby Flash Sentry shows up, having just scored his ticket. After work she and him go to his place to play some games and eat some pizza. They talk for a bit about the contest and about relationships, when she lets it slip that she has feeling for Twilight. She also admits she still has feelings for him too, years after their breakup. Flash advises her to just be honest and tell Twilight. He doesn't like Timber or his butthole attitude either.
Meanwhile, Charlie and the gang are hanging out and talking when the discussion of the old folks is brought up. It's then revealed that Violet and their friends hired a private investigator to spy on their parents.
The next day. After exhausting her last candy bar from the box, Sunset goes to talk to Twilight who reveals that she got her gold ticket before being taken away by Timber. This leaves Sunset feeling down.
Not long after Charlie shows up at her store with a few quarters in his hand that he just found on the sidewalk. He hands them to Sunset who buys one last candy bar. The two head outside where she opens the wrapper and finds her golden ticket, much to Charlie's excitement. The two rush home happy as can be.
When they get home, however, they find Violet arguing with the old folks, having finally snapped over the years of verbal abuse. When one of them makes a backhanded comment to her Charlie steps in and stands up for his wife.
This causes his own dad to, literally, stand up and get out of bed, much to the shock of Charlie, Violet, Sunset, and the private investigator and insurance fraud investigator who had been watching this a few yards away over in the next building. This leads to a fight where the four old freeloaders shove the trio out of the apartment, taking Sunset's ticket in the process.
Now in a near homicidal rage Charlie and Violet go to get backup while Sunset tries to figure out a way to open the door. Soon she notices a dark dressed figure approach her. He introduces himself as Sombra Slugworth, the head of the Wonka company's rival corporation. He tells her that he needs her to gather information on the inner workings of the factory, citing there's something sinister going on. Sunset pays him no mind, however, and tells him to leave before her parents come back. He doesn't heed her warning and as a result, Charlie and Violet, now with their friends, the landlord, and the investigators in tow, use him as a battering ram to open the door. Another brawl ensues and the police come and arrest the four freeloaders for insurance fraud.
Seemingly suffering from temporary amnesia, Sombra attempts to convince Sunset again, only this time for the group to chuck him out the window into the dumpster below. While the group celebrate the days victories, Sombra goes to meet his compatriot Bon Bon, who is a private investigator herself. She, Sombra, and Shining Armor, a police detective, have each been getting messages from an unknown, but credible, source from inside the factory. They say something bad is in play and the tour is part of the plan. Sombra also notes that he and several other candy company heads have been invited to the factory the day of the tour as well. Shining Armor is however a bit apprehensive about investigating since Cadance will be going there the night before. Apparently she'll be helping out in a special event for after the tour.
The night before the event however, he seems to loose contact with her. A bad feeling sets in and he call Sombra and Bon Bon who have also lost communication with their contact. He decides to help them investigate the factory the next day. But knowing he'll need some help he decides to recruit an 11 year old Flurry Heart, who is all too eager to help. Spoiler alert: this will result in various hijinks.
Meanwhile the tourists are checked into a hotel for a pre-event party. Sunset and Flash are able to get Twilight away from Timber for a while, much to his annoyance.
Ok that's it. I'm gonna get started on, I think it's, chapter 8 and I'm gonna try to get it out by February 1st. Because that's the day the tour in the book and the remake landed on.
Anyways I'll update you if I have one.
BUT I don't want you guys and gals to panic. I'm not quitting or delaying. Quite the opposite. I've been thinking of doing this for a while and this morning was the straw that broke the camel's back. So I decided, as much as my OCD hates this, that I'm going to skip a bit to where the characters enter the factory.
I'll post the chapters in between 3 and the one where the tour begins at a later date. I just want to do this now because of this morning and, as I've said before, writing these opening chapters is sooo boring. I want to get to the good stuff and I know you all do too.
But I don't want y'all to be lost so here's an exposition dump:
In the next chapter we have a small montage of characters getting their tickets.
The winners here are:
Fluttershy
Rainbow Dash
Troubleshoes Clyde
Caramel
Starlight
Sunburst
Trixie
Chancellor Neighsay
Dean Cinch
Blueblood
Vinyl
Octavia
Double Diamond
Party Favor
Treehugger
Rarity
Timber Spruce and Gloriosa Daisey
We then cut back to Sunset at work, when a rather chubby Flash Sentry shows up, having just scored his ticket. After work she and him go to his place to play some games and eat some pizza. They talk for a bit about the contest and about relationships, when she lets it slip that she has feeling for Twilight. She also admits she still has feelings for him too, years after their breakup. Flash advises her to just be honest and tell Twilight. He doesn't like Timber or his butthole attitude either.
Meanwhile, Charlie and the gang are hanging out and talking when the discussion of the old folks is brought up. It's then revealed that Violet and their friends hired a private investigator to spy on their parents.
The next day. After exhausting her last candy bar from the box, Sunset goes to talk to Twilight who reveals that she got her gold ticket before being taken away by Timber. This leaves Sunset feeling down.
Not long after Charlie shows up at her store with a few quarters in his hand that he just found on the sidewalk. He hands them to Sunset who buys one last candy bar. The two head outside where she opens the wrapper and finds her golden ticket, much to Charlie's excitement. The two rush home happy as can be.
When they get home, however, they find Violet arguing with the old folks, having finally snapped over the years of verbal abuse. When one of them makes a backhanded comment to her Charlie steps in and stands up for his wife.
This causes his own dad to, literally, stand up and get out of bed, much to the shock of Charlie, Violet, Sunset, and the private investigator and insurance fraud investigator who had been watching this a few yards away over in the next building. This leads to a fight where the four old freeloaders shove the trio out of the apartment, taking Sunset's ticket in the process.
Now in a near homicidal rage Charlie and Violet go to get backup while Sunset tries to figure out a way to open the door. Soon she notices a dark dressed figure approach her. He introduces himself as Sombra Slugworth, the head of the Wonka company's rival corporation. He tells her that he needs her to gather information on the inner workings of the factory, citing there's something sinister going on. Sunset pays him no mind, however, and tells him to leave before her parents come back. He doesn't heed her warning and as a result, Charlie and Violet, now with their friends, the landlord, and the investigators in tow, use him as a battering ram to open the door. Another brawl ensues and the police come and arrest the four freeloaders for insurance fraud.
Seemingly suffering from temporary amnesia, Sombra attempts to convince Sunset again, only this time for the group to chuck him out the window into the dumpster below. While the group celebrate the days victories, Sombra goes to meet his compatriot Bon Bon, who is a private investigator herself. She, Sombra, and Shining Armor, a police detective, have each been getting messages from an unknown, but credible, source from inside the factory. They say something bad is in play and the tour is part of the plan. Sombra also notes that he and several other candy company heads have been invited to the factory the day of the tour as well. Shining Armor is however a bit apprehensive about investigating since Cadance will be going there the night before. Apparently she'll be helping out in a special event for after the tour.
The night before the event however, he seems to loose contact with her. A bad feeling sets in and he call Sombra and Bon Bon who have also lost communication with their contact. He decides to help them investigate the factory the next day. But knowing he'll need some help he decides to recruit an 11 year old Flurry Heart, who is all too eager to help. Spoiler alert: this will result in various hijinks.
Meanwhile the tourists are checked into a hotel for a pre-event party. Sunset and Flash are able to get Twilight away from Timber for a while, much to his annoyance.
Ok that's it. I'm gonna get started on, I think it's, chapter 8 and I'm gonna try to get it out by February 1st. Because that's the day the tour in the book and the remake landed on.
Anyways I'll update you if I have one.
Another update and another series
General | Posted 4 years agoI'm working on the next 2 chapters since they're both shorter and less tedious than chapter 3. Chapter 6 is likely going to be where we finally get to the factory, thank God.
Also I'm planning on doing another small series. A year ago I was planning on a fic called Violet Vinyl. Basically it was a run of the mill factory blueberry story. I recycled some of the materials for other fics. I'm reimagining it as a short NSFW series with Vinyl, Octavia, and Neon Lights.
The gist of it is: during a tour of a candy factory Vinyl is turned into a blueberry, which, unintentionally, causes Octavia to rediscover her fetish for inflation. The few stories after are her, with Neon's help, pretty much finding ways to blow Vinyl up again, much to her dismay. But maybe eventually she'll start coming around to it.
I'm also planning on writing a follow up to Sunset's Berry Blowup, where Sunset's staying at Twilight's home, being studied by her parents, until the effects of the gum wear off. It ends up being more of a fluff story than fetish one.
Speaking of Twilight I also got one more planned short called Turning into a B to Get an A. It's based on a commission I got from Mitsi a few months ago and just haven't posted.
That's pretty much it. I'm still planning on uploading these to Archive of Our Own, I just haven't gotten around to it yet. I have thought of uploading them to FIMFiction but I'm still apprehensive since the site usually hates many fetish materials like inflation.
That's all for now. I'll have the next chapters out soon.
Also I'm planning on doing another small series. A year ago I was planning on a fic called Violet Vinyl. Basically it was a run of the mill factory blueberry story. I recycled some of the materials for other fics. I'm reimagining it as a short NSFW series with Vinyl, Octavia, and Neon Lights.
The gist of it is: during a tour of a candy factory Vinyl is turned into a blueberry, which, unintentionally, causes Octavia to rediscover her fetish for inflation. The few stories after are her, with Neon's help, pretty much finding ways to blow Vinyl up again, much to her dismay. But maybe eventually she'll start coming around to it.
I'm also planning on writing a follow up to Sunset's Berry Blowup, where Sunset's staying at Twilight's home, being studied by her parents, until the effects of the gum wear off. It ends up being more of a fluff story than fetish one.
Speaking of Twilight I also got one more planned short called Turning into a B to Get an A. It's based on a commission I got from Mitsi a few months ago and just haven't posted.
That's pretty much it. I'm still planning on uploading these to Archive of Our Own, I just haven't gotten around to it yet. I have thought of uploading them to FIMFiction but I'm still apprehensive since the site usually hates many fetish materials like inflation.
That's all for now. I'll have the next chapters out soon.
Quick Update
General | Posted 4 years agoI'll be posting the next chapter later. I'll also be posting a first draft over in scraps.
That's it for now.
Minor update:
I was meaning to get it up last night but I fell asleep while making the last few edits. Lol. Then this morning my web browser decided to have a meltdown. I'll have it up in a bit. I'm just out shopping right now.
That's it for now.
Minor update:
I was meaning to get it up last night but I fell asleep while making the last few edits. Lol. Then this morning my web browser decided to have a meltdown. I'll have it up in a bit. I'm just out shopping right now.
Little Update
General | Posted 4 years agoSo I know I promised the next few chapters a few months ago. And I apologize. I've just been bogged down with work some stuff at home, along with a few other projects, etc. etc.
Also I came to realize that working on the chapters leading up to the factory are BORING!! And because of that my work has been slower than planned unfortunately.
I'm hoping to get Chapter 3 out soon to break the monotony. I have everything all planned out up to the end so once we get past the BORING and on to the fun I should hopefully breeze through it.
Also I'm planning on posting this on another Fanfiction sight Archive of Our Own.
I'm also doing another fic on fimfiction right now to maybe get me up and running. I'll link it soon.
Anyways hope you had a good Stuff Yourself Till You Explode day and I'll see you all later.
Also I came to realize that working on the chapters leading up to the factory are BORING!! And because of that my work has been slower than planned unfortunately.
I'm hoping to get Chapter 3 out soon to break the monotony. I have everything all planned out up to the end so once we get past the BORING and on to the fun I should hopefully breeze through it.
Also I'm planning on posting this on another Fanfiction sight Archive of Our Own.
I'm also doing another fic on fimfiction right now to maybe get me up and running. I'll link it soon.
Anyways hope you had a good Stuff Yourself Till You Explode day and I'll see you all later.
Update
General | Posted 4 years agoOk I was originally gonna have the next chapter of my fic up last Sunday but at the last second I decided to merge what would've been Chapter 3 into Chapter 2.
I'm still hoping to have it up tomorrow if not Sunday night.
Also you're probably wondering why it's taking me forever. It's because I'm bored writing these first few chapters since we're not at the factory yet. Hopefully once the story gets there things will pick up. Anyways see y'all this weekend.
I'm still hoping to have it up tomorrow if not Sunday night.
Also you're probably wondering why it's taking me forever. It's because I'm bored writing these first few chapters since we're not at the factory yet. Hopefully once the story gets there things will pick up. Anyways see y'all this weekend.
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