So, I brought the book to a friend. They seemed to really like it! And they've been proofreading it for me while I've been continuing work on it. I've retooled most of the chapters that have already been posted, made the flow a bit better, and actually added more character development without stunting work on it.

As of now, The book is.... 14 Chapters in!

So, I'm actually going to try and publish the book, rather than uploading it on here.

Sorry to disappoint you, whoever's still interested. But I think that when the book comes out, you'll be pleasantly surprised at how much of an improvement it's made from the first few chapters I've written.

I'll keep you all posted.