New Witches of Eden prequel novel
Posted 3 years agoIntroducing Rise: The Fall of Itel. Kalintina will tell the story of how her homeworld of Itel, home to an extremely aggressive warring racing of anthros fell from grace, were exiled to another universe, and became the Edians and Kinila. No witch in the title 'cause...Kalintina isn't a witch because they didn't exist at that time.
Trouble Makers - A new mini series
Posted 3 years agoA new 5+ part mini-series featuring the main characters from the Witches of Eden talking about the times they got in the most trouble.
I'm going to do the couples/groups together.
So, it'll be:
Part 1 - Laura/Talla
Part 2- Amanda/Angela/Xavier/Rachel
Part 3 - Lauren/Logan/Ashley/Rochelle/Alex
Part 4 - Ana/Imyr
Part 5 - Mary
Part 4 is actually finished. Just gotta do the rest.
I'm going to do the couples/groups together.
So, it'll be:
Part 1 - Laura/Talla
Part 2- Amanda/Angela/Xavier/Rachel
Part 3 - Lauren/Logan/Ashley/Rochelle/Alex
Part 4 - Ana/Imyr
Part 5 - Mary
Part 4 is actually finished. Just gotta do the rest.
Witches of Eden books:
Posted 3 years ago1. Refuge: The Dragonslayer Witch - Talla/Laura - The Naughty Dogs
2. Godhood: The False Witch: Amanda, Angela/Hawthorne: Saipia Rowe
3. A Reason for War: The Coven - Ashley/Alex/Rochelle/Logan/Lauren
4. Therefore: The Eternal Witch - Anastasia
5. Paficist: The Goddess Witch - Mary
6. Witches Fall - Gideon
(All names are subject to change. Specifically, Amanda and Angela/Hawthorne's will probably change. As will most of the Coven.)
2. Godhood: The False Witch: Amanda, Angela/Hawthorne: Saipia Rowe
3. A Reason for War: The Coven - Ashley/Alex/Rochelle/Logan/Lauren
4. Therefore: The Eternal Witch - Anastasia
5. Paficist: The Goddess Witch - Mary
6. Witches Fall - Gideon
(All names are subject to change. Specifically, Amanda and Angela/Hawthorne's will probably change. As will most of the Coven.)
More Witches of Eden changes
Posted 3 years agoFormerly Cityscape.
I'm going to have Laura's mother live. Mostly 'cause...I like it better with the current timeline. Also, name changes:
Laura's biological father: formerly Quincy, now Nilan
Laura's half-sister: formerly Nicole: now Inglys.
I'm going to have Laura's mother live. Mostly 'cause...I like it better with the current timeline. Also, name changes:
Laura's biological father: formerly Quincy, now Nilan
Laura's half-sister: formerly Nicole: now Inglys.
The Brethren is changing
Posted 3 years agoI know don't know who is in the new Brethren, at the moment. I've got 4 members, at least.
1. Laura Graives/Powerbomb/Night Wind
2. Talla Rowe/Grim Reaper
3. Kolyndra Itrosa/Kya Bangs/Ghost (Formerly Cindy)
4. A'lof Marina/Firestarter (Formerly Alex owner of the Den)
1. Laura Graives/Powerbomb/Night Wind
2. Talla Rowe/Grim Reaper
3. Kolyndra Itrosa/Kya Bangs/Ghost (Formerly Cindy)
4. A'lof Marina/Firestarter (Formerly Alex owner of the Den)
Laura's new profession
Posted 3 years agoAfter trying to write a strip club scene and deciding that it was a bit...terrible, I have decided to make Luara a wrestler. I think it fits her character a lot better. And I can give her family a bit of a legacy, as her biological father was a wrestler, she's one and I'm probably going to have Amanda bit a wrestler for a bit. Maybe even Ana will have taken up the mantel for a brief period.
On Eden, though, there are many more different divisions of wrestling. In the Edian Wrestling Organization, there are three major Divisions: Non-Magic, Magical, and Super. Rules are pretty strict. No magic is allowed in Non-Magic and Super matches. To prevent the use of magic, the ring is usually equipped with an anti-magic barrier.
Super and Magical matches are usually performed away from the general public so no one is in any danger of getting injured or killed. Laura participates in the Super Division, relying only on her super strength.
Laura's dad fought in the Non-Magic Division. Amanda will fight in the Magic Division, with some restrictions placed on her power-shifting abilities. She'll probably switch to the Non-Magic division after she learns her shifting abilities were killing her.
Rochelle Graives, Ana's stepmother, will also fight in the Non-Magical division.
And Ana will participate in the Super division. And she'll effectively be the first Graives in that division in like 150 years.
On Eden, though, there are many more different divisions of wrestling. In the Edian Wrestling Organization, there are three major Divisions: Non-Magic, Magical, and Super. Rules are pretty strict. No magic is allowed in Non-Magic and Super matches. To prevent the use of magic, the ring is usually equipped with an anti-magic barrier.
Super and Magical matches are usually performed away from the general public so no one is in any danger of getting injured or killed. Laura participates in the Super Division, relying only on her super strength.
Laura's dad fought in the Non-Magic Division. Amanda will fight in the Magic Division, with some restrictions placed on her power-shifting abilities. She'll probably switch to the Non-Magic division after she learns her shifting abilities were killing her.
Rochelle Graives, Ana's stepmother, will also fight in the Non-Magical division.
And Ana will participate in the Super division. And she'll effectively be the first Graives in that division in like 150 years.
Combining Everything!
Posted 3 years agoI know the term "shared universe" is thrown around a lot these days, but...I'm doing it. Saipia from Guardian Angels is returning as Talla's evil twin sister. She might end up being the main villain in Cityscape 1: Refuge, but I haven't fully decided. Talla's other sister, Alyce has the Resonance of Magic, Talla is Anti-Magic. Saipia was sort of in the middle, but still really powerful and thought of herself as the Goddess. She left Eden to get away from the two people who could actually stop her plans, her own siblings and, there was a problem when entering Earth's atmosphere, which ultimately led to her being a full-body prosthetic cyborg. I'm also changing her fur color to blonde instead of blue because...people will just confuse her for Krystal from Starfox, which is fair.
I'm also gonna try to bring over more characters from Guardian Angels. Sort of make the 15 a thing again. I might rebuild that series...we'll see.
(Edit: Hmm....maybe Aylce's Evil Twin.)
I'm also gonna try to bring over more characters from Guardian Angels. Sort of make the 15 a thing again. I might rebuild that series...we'll see.
(Edit: Hmm....maybe Aylce's Evil Twin.)
What's in a name, really?
Posted 4 years agoSo, due to some deeper lore, it occurs to me that gender-specific names don't make any sense within the lore of Eden. So, there will be some name changes. For example, Laura and Amanda will probably have their names changed to fit more within the lore. Angela's original name will change, her chosen one won't. You might see some "female" characters with "male" names and vice versa simply because I want - in lore - that the way Edians adapted human names into their culture was to remove the gender-specificity from them.
Witches of Eden Rework
Posted 4 years agoSo, for the time I might be working primarily on Therefore, which is Ana's story as, due to finalizing the world-building for Eden, the original plot for Cityscape no longer makes sense. Also, I might have Therefore"co-written" by Ana and Anara.
I'm Back! Sort of.
Posted 4 years agoI'm gonna be working on updating my portfolio and maybe opening up to paid commissions soon. That means I will be going through and trying to update a lot of things to current canon in the various universes. It also means some things will get nixed and removed from this profile.
BTW, the Cityscape series is now the Witches of Eden series. I don't know if I'll be writing much new as I'm sort of focused on writing Therefore and other stuff at the moment. But, we'll see.
BTW, the Cityscape series is now the Witches of Eden series. I don't know if I'll be writing much new as I'm sort of focused on writing Therefore and other stuff at the moment. But, we'll see.
Cityscape Revived!
Posted 5 years agoI am currently working on Cityscape again! WOO! But there are a couple of big changes:
1. It is currently titled Refuge: The Dragonslayer Witch.
2. As the name suggests, the story teller is switching to Talla instead of Laura. After thinking about it, I feel like Talla makes more sense, anyway, as Laura ended up having Alzhimers. Also, this gives me a way to make all the false starts for Cityscape canon, they were all attempts by Laura to write it, but misremember details until finally giving up.
3. This also means, that the current version is the official canonical version.
4. Dropping the Cityscape Title, I am also changing the Series name to the Witches of Eden Series.
5. I am going to give a more official reason why Talla is known as the Dragonslayer Witch.
The new series outlook looks like this:
Books:
1. Refuge: The Glass Witch - Talla/Laura
2. Motherhood: The Forbidden Witch - Amanda/Angela/Hawthorne
3. Five Stones: The Winter Witch - Ashley
4. Therefore: The Immortal Witch - Anastasia
5. Paficist: The Goddess Witch - Mary
6. Witches Fall
Series:
1. Universal Truths
Universal Truths will follow Anastasia as she travels to various universes.
Also, I am working on a new Canonical Bible for the WoE series.
1. It is currently titled Refuge: The Dragonslayer Witch.
2. As the name suggests, the story teller is switching to Talla instead of Laura. After thinking about it, I feel like Talla makes more sense, anyway, as Laura ended up having Alzhimers. Also, this gives me a way to make all the false starts for Cityscape canon, they were all attempts by Laura to write it, but misremember details until finally giving up.
3. This also means, that the current version is the official canonical version.
4. Dropping the Cityscape Title, I am also changing the Series name to the Witches of Eden Series.
5. I am going to give a more official reason why Talla is known as the Dragonslayer Witch.
The new series outlook looks like this:
Books:
1. Refuge: The Glass Witch - Talla/Laura
2. Motherhood: The Forbidden Witch - Amanda/Angela/Hawthorne
3. Five Stones: The Winter Witch - Ashley
4. Therefore: The Immortal Witch - Anastasia
5. Paficist: The Goddess Witch - Mary
6. Witches Fall
Series:
1. Universal Truths
Universal Truths will follow Anastasia as she travels to various universes.
Also, I am working on a new Canonical Bible for the WoE series.
I...might....be...back
Posted 5 years agoMaybe. We'll see. I'll be watching this profile a bit more for a little bit, anyway.
Cityscape Rebirth
Posted 5 years agoAfter dwelling on it for a month, I have decided to restart Cityscape, but completely restructure the series. It also might get renamed. The books will be:
1. The Glass Witch/Cityscape - Laura Graives
2. The Black Witch/Night Water - Amanda Cole
3. The Snow Witch/Five Stones - Ashley Wryght
4. The Eternal Witch/Therefore - Anastasia Graivewryght
5. The Goddess Witch/Gods of Eden - Mary Graives
Those 5 should cover all the stuff in the 15 or so books I had planned. There might be more after that. Like I might have one following Gideon Graives as he deals with the after math of the Civil War, Decimation and Reclamation. Which would probably be the final book.
1. The Glass Witch/Cityscape - Laura Graives
2. The Black Witch/Night Water - Amanda Cole
3. The Snow Witch/Five Stones - Ashley Wryght
4. The Eternal Witch/Therefore - Anastasia Graivewryght
5. The Goddess Witch/Gods of Eden - Mary Graives
Those 5 should cover all the stuff in the 15 or so books I had planned. There might be more after that. Like I might have one following Gideon Graives as he deals with the after math of the Civil War, Decimation and Reclamation. Which would probably be the final book.
RIP Cityscape
Posted 5 years agoSo, I've been working on Cityscape for like 12 years and nothing has progressed really, so I've decided to at least put it away for now. That said, I'm not leaving the universe. My new project is called "Therefore" and will follow Ana Graives as she talks about how she got to where is got, which might even touch on the the Third War. Not sure.
Not Dead!
Posted 6 years agoI'm not dead, I just barely check this account anymore. I've been trying to focus on Cityscape, so I've not written anything short enough to post here in a while.
But...Cityscape is in the middle of a rewrite, so...and I've been kind of slacking on it. Anyway, figured I'd come mention this here.
But...Cityscape is in the middle of a rewrite, so...and I've been kind of slacking on it. Anyway, figured I'd come mention this here.
Year of Cityscape (And changes)
Posted 7 years agoSo...my plan for 2019 is to work on Cityscape a lot. Don't know how far I will get in the story. I would like to do at least a chapter a month. I'll aim for more than that, maybe like one a week, but we'll see. I also plan on getting a website up for it.
So changes: Publishing stuff chapter by chapter instead of book by book. I might try and sell chapter and books. Books especially. I might also publish chapters for feedback and then pull everything once things are ready for book form and just sell the books. If I sell stuff it'll probably be $1 per chapter and $10 per book.
Cityscape is getting an entirely new, written from scratch introduction. I started writing a short story and realized that, with some minor shifting of characters, I could easily make it into a new intro for Cityscape, and after some thought, I should be able to better introduce Laura and Talla and show off their powers and stuff. This change will give Laura an slightly different backstory but also almost completely erase Brian from the story. I've regulated him to a side character. Maybe he'll become a villain later, who knows. With this new backstory and introduction, I'll have to rewrite a significant portion of the first book. Which means Everything between pretty much Cityscape 1 and 4 will be mostly new. With 11 years to stew. So...fun!
Anyway, thought I'd post an update. The site will also have lots of free stories on it, so don't fret.
So changes: Publishing stuff chapter by chapter instead of book by book. I might try and sell chapter and books. Books especially. I might also publish chapters for feedback and then pull everything once things are ready for book form and just sell the books. If I sell stuff it'll probably be $1 per chapter and $10 per book.
Cityscape is getting an entirely new, written from scratch introduction. I started writing a short story and realized that, with some minor shifting of characters, I could easily make it into a new intro for Cityscape, and after some thought, I should be able to better introduce Laura and Talla and show off their powers and stuff. This change will give Laura an slightly different backstory but also almost completely erase Brian from the story. I've regulated him to a side character. Maybe he'll become a villain later, who knows. With this new backstory and introduction, I'll have to rewrite a significant portion of the first book. Which means Everything between pretty much Cityscape 1 and 4 will be mostly new. With 11 years to stew. So...fun!
Anyway, thought I'd post an update. The site will also have lots of free stories on it, so don't fret.
10 years of Cityscape
Posted 7 years agoLooking back, and...hey, look, I started posting about Cityscape 10 years ago. What am I going to do for the 10th Anniversary? Well, I would LIKE to at least get a website going and start actually officially posting things. I MIGHT try to get the first book officially published, but...I don't know. I am going to also try to get an official cover for at least the first book.
I know I don't post on FA much anymore. Just...life happenings. So...yeah. We'll see how the rest of the year goes.
I know I don't post on FA much anymore. Just...life happenings. So...yeah. We'll see how the rest of the year goes.
Cityscape Restructure
Posted 7 years agoAlright, so, since Citsyscape is gonna become a web series, it's going to undergo changes. Because of this new freedom, I could technically jump around in the universe, which, there will be a little bit of. Because of this, I'm gonna divide the new site into parts based on the main characters
1. The Beginning - Told from Hathsywn's POV, this is a look back at the beginning of Eden and the events that led up to start of Cityscape.
2. The Hero -Laura's stories. From her early childhood to her work with the Brethren and beyond.
3. The Scientists - Amanda and Angelia. This will be where things like Area of Affect (the post-main series adventures) and things go.
4. The Exile - Anastasia's adventures from her work on defeating the dragons, to her time in exile.
5. The Books - The main series. There might be some overlap, but we'll see.
6. The Fringe - Other in-universe stories and series. Maybe revamping Life on Mars or something else.
I hope the website will be up before the end of the year, but we'll see. I'll keep yall posted.
1. The Beginning - Told from Hathsywn's POV, this is a look back at the beginning of Eden and the events that led up to start of Cityscape.
2. The Hero -Laura's stories. From her early childhood to her work with the Brethren and beyond.
3. The Scientists - Amanda and Angelia. This will be where things like Area of Affect (the post-main series adventures) and things go.
4. The Exile - Anastasia's adventures from her work on defeating the dragons, to her time in exile.
5. The Books - The main series. There might be some overlap, but we'll see.
6. The Fringe - Other in-universe stories and series. Maybe revamping Life on Mars or something else.
I hope the website will be up before the end of the year, but we'll see. I'll keep yall posted.
Area of Affect Preview
Posted 8 years agoWhat do you do if you're magical immortal beings that have been around for millennia and you have access to interdeminsional doors? What else? You go back in time and hunt down some of the nastiest supernatural creatures and super villains ever.
Amanda and Angela are returning to action. They're nearly 10,000 years old but can still kick some serious ass. Angela is Black and Amanda is White, together, they are the duo known as Gray Area.
Amanda and Angela are returning to action. They're nearly 10,000 years old but can still kick some serious ass. Angela is Black and Amanda is White, together, they are the duo known as Gray Area.
The Goddess Witch
Posted 8 years agoAmanda Elizabeth Graives II. AKA Amanda Cole; AKA Amanda Wryght.
She has also gone by several titles: Night Water, Hydrophobia, Ultima, The Dark Witch and then ultimately The Goddess Witch.
It is believed that she is the most powerful being in the universe. Normally, as people age, they get weaker, but it seems, as Amanda has aged, she has gotten significantly powerful. Something that intensified during the Devastation, when the humans bombed Eden, causing a massive shift in magical energy. It was once believed that she needed a Time Lock spell to keep her molecules together, after Devastation, she stopped updating it and it was discovered that her body had completely repaired the molecular damage it had sustained with careless power shifting when she was younger. Not only that, but she could know use more powers and change powers without and consequence. Only Amanda and her wife, Angelia know why this happened, but many suspect the shift in magical energy had something to do with it. Others call her the Vampire Witch and speculate that her body is somehow consuming the access magical energy in the atmosphere, infinitely prolonging her life and super charging her powers.
But, Amanda has been massively powerful since birth. She says she has always known about her water Resonance since she was born. This natural ability prevents water from touching Amanda, allowing her to not only walk on water, but completely control it, as well. (Yes, she knows how to blood bend, but even better than anything in the Avatar Universe.)
It is believed that she is now the one true Immortal.
She has also gone by several titles: Night Water, Hydrophobia, Ultima, The Dark Witch and then ultimately The Goddess Witch.
It is believed that she is the most powerful being in the universe. Normally, as people age, they get weaker, but it seems, as Amanda has aged, she has gotten significantly powerful. Something that intensified during the Devastation, when the humans bombed Eden, causing a massive shift in magical energy. It was once believed that she needed a Time Lock spell to keep her molecules together, after Devastation, she stopped updating it and it was discovered that her body had completely repaired the molecular damage it had sustained with careless power shifting when she was younger. Not only that, but she could know use more powers and change powers without and consequence. Only Amanda and her wife, Angelia know why this happened, but many suspect the shift in magical energy had something to do with it. Others call her the Vampire Witch and speculate that her body is somehow consuming the access magical energy in the atmosphere, infinitely prolonging her life and super charging her powers.
But, Amanda has been massively powerful since birth. She says she has always known about her water Resonance since she was born. This natural ability prevents water from touching Amanda, allowing her to not only walk on water, but completely control it, as well. (Yes, she knows how to blood bend, but even better than anything in the Avatar Universe.)
It is believed that she is now the one true Immortal.
Cityscape X Rebranding. More Episodes coming
Posted 8 years agoSo, instead of calling the universe jumping mini-series stuff "Cityscape X" it will now be called "Outer Universe" And there's more in coming. Episode 3 will be a trip to the Avatar Universe and Episode 4 will be a fun trip to the Star Wars Universe.
I wanna also write a new short story with Amanda and them.
Also learned that Amanda loves driving. Something she picked up from her Laura. #weirddreams
I wanna also write a new short story with Amanda and them.
Also learned that Amanda loves driving. Something she picked up from her Laura. #weirddreams
Moving forward
Posted 9 years agoI feel like writing a book just isn't working. It's been like 8 years I've been working on this one really length project and I've tried giving the first part to proofreaders, but that turned out to be more fruitless than an apple tree in winter, so...I might just start publishing by Chapter. I don't know. I would LOVE to make money off of my writing, but that might just come in other forms.
I also feel like building a site dedicated to writing and this massive universe that I've been making for...well, now that I've decided to merge my two major universes 'cause...I can and I really didn't want to completely abandon my original one, since Kindergarten, it might allow for a bit more freedom. Like, I have some stories in universe that I should tell, but I'm not entirely sure they'd fit a book, more that they're shorter, but still important.
I don't know. What do you guys think?
I also feel like building a site dedicated to writing and this massive universe that I've been making for...well, now that I've decided to merge my two major universes 'cause...I can and I really didn't want to completely abandon my original one, since Kindergarten, it might allow for a bit more freedom. Like, I have some stories in universe that I should tell, but I'm not entirely sure they'd fit a book, more that they're shorter, but still important.
I don't know. What do you guys think?
Big Updates coming
Posted 9 years agoWell, my income has increased, so I am gonna try and get some commissions coming soon and I might even be working on a CYOA game based on "Strange Land" which I will be turning into mini series.
Also, I will be building a website again. YAY! With a domain eventually, but we shall wait and see what becomes of that.
I'm also moving so...hopefully I'll get back into a better writing scheme after that. We'll see.
But here's a new Strange Land Series preview coming:
The ship I road in on, the Consequent....it uses a Folding Time Drive....Normally, the radiation scrubbers can contain a breach pretty well with maybe some minor time distortions. But, this one has been severely damaged.
This planet was to by my exile. Now, it might very well be my grave, but I know I am the only one who can prevent it from being erased from history. I just hope the locals have what I need.
Also, I will be building a website again. YAY! With a domain eventually, but we shall wait and see what becomes of that.
I'm also moving so...hopefully I'll get back into a better writing scheme after that. We'll see.
But here's a new Strange Land Series preview coming:
The ship I road in on, the Consequent....it uses a Folding Time Drive....Normally, the radiation scrubbers can contain a breach pretty well with maybe some minor time distortions. But, this one has been severely damaged.
This planet was to by my exile. Now, it might very well be my grave, but I know I am the only one who can prevent it from being erased from history. I just hope the locals have what I need.
Guardian Angels reimagined idea
Posted 9 years agoSo, believe it or not, this idea came from an Anubis skin in Smite, but, I think it might be cool if the 15 weren't just long-lived human-hybrids. But old gods like Anubis and Fenrir. Could be a fun idea to play with.
"Park Service" Series preview
Posted 9 years ago1200 years from now, the Earth is a bit different. All humans save a few tribes have left. Now, it's a protected park. But, it is still full of resources and those resources are very attractive. So, the Universal Alliance, formerly known as the Great Alliance, has instituted it's highest form of security. The Park Service.
My name is Adele. Adele Graives. I am one of the last purebred Edenites in existence and I am the head of this little team of Park Service Officers.
Oh, but if you think our job is boring, you try protecting and entire planet from thieves and vandals.
Two Universes will officially become one. The Park Service Universe (AKA The Great Eden Universe) is born.
My name is Adele. Adele Graives. I am one of the last purebred Edenites in existence and I am the head of this little team of Park Service Officers.
Oh, but if you think our job is boring, you try protecting and entire planet from thieves and vandals.
Two Universes will officially become one. The Park Service Universe (AKA The Great Eden Universe) is born.
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