Stripes and Chains Revamp
Posted 7 years agoSo today marks the first day in over two years that I'll be updating my journal. If you turn your attention to my gallery you'll notice that the entirety of Stripes and Chains past chapter 1 has been removed.
Why?
This is because I am revamping the story. Do note that this is not a retconning. Past stories have been saved to my hard drive and are still available to view and read on my Weasyl account. Weasyl will be updating differently now that I know they support PDF files. SnC is undergoing a small rewrite. The story itself will be expanded on between chapters 5 and 7. Benjamin and the rest of the cast will be receiving more character development. Past chapter 5 things will be a bit different. Pacing will be different, characters will be expanded, new side stories will be posted. Rest assured though that the themes and events to take place in later chapters will return but with a new veneer.
The purpose is because I had written that a year had passed between chapters 5 and 7. Looking back this was severely unsatisfactory and lazy on my part. We never got to witness what really happened during that year. Now you will. Chapters 2 through 5 are staying much the same as they were but they will be receiving an update in writing style. I'm not much better than I was before, but sufficiently so that I feel what was there was not up to my new personal standard. I kept rereading my work and noting how things could be better written or better detailed. Look for these chapters to return all polished and shiny in the following weeks. The next chapter is already four pages out in what I hope to be 12 to 20 pages. It will be added along with chapters 2-5 once those have been refurbished.
Also, I'm going to be making folders and categorizing every thing.
Please excuse my mess in the meantime and for those of you who have held out in the hopes of my return, thank you so much for your support!
Why?
This is because I am revamping the story. Do note that this is not a retconning. Past stories have been saved to my hard drive and are still available to view and read on my Weasyl account. Weasyl will be updating differently now that I know they support PDF files. SnC is undergoing a small rewrite. The story itself will be expanded on between chapters 5 and 7. Benjamin and the rest of the cast will be receiving more character development. Past chapter 5 things will be a bit different. Pacing will be different, characters will be expanded, new side stories will be posted. Rest assured though that the themes and events to take place in later chapters will return but with a new veneer.
The purpose is because I had written that a year had passed between chapters 5 and 7. Looking back this was severely unsatisfactory and lazy on my part. We never got to witness what really happened during that year. Now you will. Chapters 2 through 5 are staying much the same as they were but they will be receiving an update in writing style. I'm not much better than I was before, but sufficiently so that I feel what was there was not up to my new personal standard. I kept rereading my work and noting how things could be better written or better detailed. Look for these chapters to return all polished and shiny in the following weeks. The next chapter is already four pages out in what I hope to be 12 to 20 pages. It will be added along with chapters 2-5 once those have been refurbished.
Also, I'm going to be making folders and categorizing every thing.
Please excuse my mess in the meantime and for those of you who have held out in the hopes of my return, thank you so much for your support!
300 watchers get and thanks
Posted 9 years agoI can't offer any thing art or story wise as thanks, but thanks none the less for helping me breach 300 watchers on this account. Thank you so much folks.
On a side note I'd like to know what brings you here? I'm assuming most of you new folks have an interest in my lopunny, Dusk?
On a side note I'd like to know what brings you here? I'm assuming most of you new folks have an interest in my lopunny, Dusk?
I'm bored. Yes/No meme
Posted 10 years ago1. You can ONLY answer Yes or No .
2. You are NOT ALLOWED to explain ANYTHING unless someone messages/comments you and asks.
3. It is harder than it looks, but NO explanations !!! You will want to... but don't!!!
Kissed any one of your Facebook friends? ~ NO
Been arrested? ~ No
Kissed someone you didn't like? ~ No
Slept in until 5 PM? ~ Yes
Fallen asleep at work/school? ~ Yes
Ran a red light? ~ Yes
Been suspended from school? ~ Yes
Experienced love at first sight? ~ Yes
Totaled your car in an accident? ~ No
Been fired from a job? ~ No
Fired somebody? ~ Yes
Sang karaoke? ~ Yes
Pointed a gun at someone? ~ No
Done something you told yourself you wouldn't? ~ Yes
Laughed until something you were drinking came out your nose? ~ Yes
Caught a snowflake on your tongue? ~ Yes
Kissed in the rain? ~ Yes
Had a close brush with death (your own) ~ Yes
Seen someone die? ~ Yes
Played spin-the-bottle? ~ Yes
Sang in the shower? ~ Yes
Smoked a cigar? ~ Yes
Sat on a rooftop? ~ Yes
Taken pictures of yourself naked? ~ Yes
Been pushed into a pool with all your clothes? ~ Yes
Skipped school? ~ Yes
Eaten a bug? ~ Yes
Sleepwalked? ~ Yes
Walked a moonlit beach? ~ Yes
Ridden a motorcycle? ~ Yes
Dumped someone? ~ Yes
Forgotten your anniversary? ~ Yes
Lied to avoid a ticket? ~ Yes
Ridden on a helicopter? ~ No
Shaved your head? ~ Yes
Blacked out from drinking? ~ Yes
Played a prank on someone? ~ Yes
Hit a home run? ~ No
Felt like killing someone? ~ Yes
Cross-dressed? ~ Yes
Been falling-down drunk? ~ Yes
Made your girlfriend/boyfriend cry? ~ Yes
Eaten snake? ~ Yes
Marched/Protested? ~ Yes
Had Mexican jumping beans for pets? ~ Yes
Puked on amusement ride? ~ Yes
Seriously & intentionally boycotted something? ~ Yes
Been in a band? ~ No
Knitted? ~ Yes
Been on TV? ~ Yes
Shot a gun? ~ Yes
Skinny-dipped? ~ Yes
Caused someone to need stitches? ~ Yes
Ridden a surfboard? ~ No
Drank straight from a liquor bottle? ~ Yes
Had surgery? ~ Yes
Streaked? ~ Yes
Taken by ambulance to hospital? ~ Yes
Passed out when not drinking? ~ Yes
Peed on a bush? ~ Yes
Donated Blood? ~ No
Grabbed electric fence? ~ Yes
Eaten alligator meat? ~ Yes
Eaten cheesecake? ~ Yes
Eaten kids' Halloween candy? ~ Yes
Killed an animal when not hunting? ~ Yes
Peed your pants in public? ~ Yes
Written graffiti? ~ Yes
Still love someone you shouldn't? ~ Yes
Think about the future? ~ Yes
Been in handcuffs? ~ Yes
Believe in love? ~ Yes
Sleep on a certain side of the bed? ~ Yes
2. You are NOT ALLOWED to explain ANYTHING unless someone messages/comments you and asks.
3. It is harder than it looks, but NO explanations !!! You will want to... but don't!!!
Kissed any one of your Facebook friends? ~ NO
Been arrested? ~ No
Kissed someone you didn't like? ~ No
Slept in until 5 PM? ~ Yes
Fallen asleep at work/school? ~ Yes
Ran a red light? ~ Yes
Been suspended from school? ~ Yes
Experienced love at first sight? ~ Yes
Totaled your car in an accident? ~ No
Been fired from a job? ~ No
Fired somebody? ~ Yes
Sang karaoke? ~ Yes
Pointed a gun at someone? ~ No
Done something you told yourself you wouldn't? ~ Yes
Laughed until something you were drinking came out your nose? ~ Yes
Caught a snowflake on your tongue? ~ Yes
Kissed in the rain? ~ Yes
Had a close brush with death (your own) ~ Yes
Seen someone die? ~ Yes
Played spin-the-bottle? ~ Yes
Sang in the shower? ~ Yes
Smoked a cigar? ~ Yes
Sat on a rooftop? ~ Yes
Taken pictures of yourself naked? ~ Yes
Been pushed into a pool with all your clothes? ~ Yes
Skipped school? ~ Yes
Eaten a bug? ~ Yes
Sleepwalked? ~ Yes
Walked a moonlit beach? ~ Yes
Ridden a motorcycle? ~ Yes
Dumped someone? ~ Yes
Forgotten your anniversary? ~ Yes
Lied to avoid a ticket? ~ Yes
Ridden on a helicopter? ~ No
Shaved your head? ~ Yes
Blacked out from drinking? ~ Yes
Played a prank on someone? ~ Yes
Hit a home run? ~ No
Felt like killing someone? ~ Yes
Cross-dressed? ~ Yes
Been falling-down drunk? ~ Yes
Made your girlfriend/boyfriend cry? ~ Yes
Eaten snake? ~ Yes
Marched/Protested? ~ Yes
Had Mexican jumping beans for pets? ~ Yes
Puked on amusement ride? ~ Yes
Seriously & intentionally boycotted something? ~ Yes
Been in a band? ~ No
Knitted? ~ Yes
Been on TV? ~ Yes
Shot a gun? ~ Yes
Skinny-dipped? ~ Yes
Caused someone to need stitches? ~ Yes
Ridden a surfboard? ~ No
Drank straight from a liquor bottle? ~ Yes
Had surgery? ~ Yes
Streaked? ~ Yes
Taken by ambulance to hospital? ~ Yes
Passed out when not drinking? ~ Yes
Peed on a bush? ~ Yes
Donated Blood? ~ No
Grabbed electric fence? ~ Yes
Eaten alligator meat? ~ Yes
Eaten cheesecake? ~ Yes
Eaten kids' Halloween candy? ~ Yes
Killed an animal when not hunting? ~ Yes
Peed your pants in public? ~ Yes
Written graffiti? ~ Yes
Still love someone you shouldn't? ~ Yes
Think about the future? ~ Yes
Been in handcuffs? ~ Yes
Believe in love? ~ Yes
Sleep on a certain side of the bed? ~ Yes
next chapter not until next week
Posted 10 years agoYeah I'll try to have the next one up tomorrow but, uhhh I just discovered One Finger Death Punch...soooo
two double-oh and writing update
Posted 10 years agoI hit 200 watchers at some point I missed. Some of you have far, far more. I'm rather proud of my tripple digits. I haven't written in ages but I'm finally getting back into the swing of it, half way through a new chapter now. Keep you're eyes peeled later this week readers. Art enthusiast: sorry but I don't have any thing currently on the burner.
100 watchers
Posted 11 years agoCool, I hit the big one double-oh. I know most of you are here just for the art but that's okay. I try to tell as much of the story as I can through my commissions as much as my own writing. And I'm glad you all enjoy it enough to want to stick around.
Space Dandy
Posted 11 years agoSo I've been watching the series since the beginning. Some complaints of seen is that despite being made by a handful of some of the most celebrated authors and artists in recent Anime history, that it's not going any where. They it's wasted talent with the simple and childish way each episode plays out.
Of course, many artists and authors in anime and manga have done things like this. They'll do something serious, compose a masterpiece, and then take a break and just throw ideas that seemed silly against a wall. Excel Saga comes to mind over this, it being a parody of what was popular in anime at the time. Space Dandy seems to be doing this as well, while taking scientific theories and ideas to extreme in spoofing.
Honestly, any one who watched the opening monolog and thought this was going to be some great glorious combination of Japan's greatest minds deserves, at least partially, the disappointment they felt. Having watched every episode up to date so far, I can tell this wasn't meant to be super serious, and we can thank Toonami for hyping it like it was going to be a supernova of awesomeness. They toted the Cowboy Bebop/Soul Eater deal way too hard.
But last night's episode...man. Yeah, I get what they were doing. It was only a matter of time before they made a parody of Hayao Miyazaki. They had done almost every other major Mangaka so far, but this felt less like a parody and more like an homage. Normally we see Dandy bandying about like a complete tool, and acting arrogantly like he's the greatest thing in space, because he's Dandy. But...this time it felt different. There was some actual deep stuff in this episode and I deeply loved the end conclusion of "Every thing's all right, no matter what, because I'm Dandy."
Also, that end. Heh, pretty much tells you how the whole series ends. Its ends all right, because he's Dandy.
Of course, many artists and authors in anime and manga have done things like this. They'll do something serious, compose a masterpiece, and then take a break and just throw ideas that seemed silly against a wall. Excel Saga comes to mind over this, it being a parody of what was popular in anime at the time. Space Dandy seems to be doing this as well, while taking scientific theories and ideas to extreme in spoofing.
Honestly, any one who watched the opening monolog and thought this was going to be some great glorious combination of Japan's greatest minds deserves, at least partially, the disappointment they felt. Having watched every episode up to date so far, I can tell this wasn't meant to be super serious, and we can thank Toonami for hyping it like it was going to be a supernova of awesomeness. They toted the Cowboy Bebop/Soul Eater deal way too hard.
But last night's episode...man. Yeah, I get what they were doing. It was only a matter of time before they made a parody of Hayao Miyazaki. They had done almost every other major Mangaka so far, but this felt less like a parody and more like an homage. Normally we see Dandy bandying about like a complete tool, and acting arrogantly like he's the greatest thing in space, because he's Dandy. But...this time it felt different. There was some actual deep stuff in this episode and I deeply loved the end conclusion of "Every thing's all right, no matter what, because I'm Dandy."
Also, that end. Heh, pretty much tells you how the whole series ends. Its ends all right, because he's Dandy.
The get to know me meme thingy
Posted 11 years agoSwiped from
celestina
Name: Ssilversmith
Nickname: Ssilver, Silver, Cabbage Cat (apparently)
Location: USA
Age: 26
Height: 5'10”
Zodiac sign: Pisces
Any pets: Two dogs and a cat. April the Chessie/German Shepherd mix, Wiley the sausage/Australian blue setter mix, and Luckytoe (she has 18 toes wtf!?) the common tabby
Fun fact: I used to hate English as a subject, now I'm a hobby writer
Identity, Sexuality & Personality
Gender identity: Male
Sexual orientation: Bisexual with female pref
Romantic preference: Any gender - Poly
"Kinsey Scale" score: 2
Relationship status: Single right now, not looking. Sorry :C
Myers/Briggs type: INFJ To be honest though, that's my first instinct. The way I actually act would be closer to INTJ.
Routine
"Early Bird" or "Night Owl": Night Owl. I like staying up late. Nights are quieter.
Bath or shower: Shower
First thought in the morning: water, water, water, water D:
Last thought before falling asleep at night: Why or why did I embarrass myself 14 years ago to that person who doesn't matter to me and I'll never see again?
School/Work
Do you work or are you a student: WORK ALL THE HOURS! \o
What do you do well: MY JOBBER!
Where do you see yourself in 5 years: Pro porn! Barring that, supervisor where I am.
Habits (Do You...?)
Drink: Socially
Smoke: Only when I'm out of snus
Do drugs: My job requires that I say no.
Exercise: I...try?
Have a go-to comfort food: Taco Bell.
Have a nervous habit: Not that I've ever been made aware of.
What is your favorite…?
Physical quality (in yourself): My Goatee
In Others: Eyes. I love looking into them when I'm feeling hopelessly romantic.
Mental/emotional quality (in yourself):Humor. I can quip pretty well.
Food: You got sesame chicken? No? Then...GTFO!
Drink: Coconut water, Rockstar Sparkling, or Shasta
Animal: Doge
Artist/Band/Group: Daft Punk, Rammstein, Metallica, Rob/White Zombie, Dragonforce, Blind Guardian, Iced Earth, KMFDM, quite a few; too many to list.
Author/Poet: Christopher Moore, Dan Abnett, Douglas Adams, Eoin Colfer, J. K. Rowling
TV Show: Star Trek: TNG reruns, Doctor Who, Top Gear, How It's Made, Through the Wormhole
Actor/Actress: Robert Downey Jr., Harrison Ford, Morgan Freeman, Dwayne Johnson, AAARNOLD D:<, too many to list.
celestinaName: Ssilversmith
Nickname: Ssilver, Silver, Cabbage Cat (apparently)
Location: USA
Age: 26
Height: 5'10”
Zodiac sign: Pisces
Any pets: Two dogs and a cat. April the Chessie/German Shepherd mix, Wiley the sausage/Australian blue setter mix, and Luckytoe (she has 18 toes wtf!?) the common tabby
Fun fact: I used to hate English as a subject, now I'm a hobby writer
Identity, Sexuality & Personality
Gender identity: Male
Sexual orientation: Bisexual with female pref
Romantic preference: Any gender - Poly
"Kinsey Scale" score: 2
Relationship status: Single right now, not looking. Sorry :C
Myers/Briggs type: INFJ To be honest though, that's my first instinct. The way I actually act would be closer to INTJ.
Routine
"Early Bird" or "Night Owl": Night Owl. I like staying up late. Nights are quieter.
Bath or shower: Shower
First thought in the morning: water, water, water, water D:
Last thought before falling asleep at night: Why or why did I embarrass myself 14 years ago to that person who doesn't matter to me and I'll never see again?
School/Work
Do you work or are you a student: WORK ALL THE HOURS! \o
What do you do well: MY JOBBER!
Where do you see yourself in 5 years: Pro porn! Barring that, supervisor where I am.
Habits (Do You...?)
Drink: Socially
Smoke: Only when I'm out of snus
Do drugs: My job requires that I say no.
Exercise: I...try?
Have a go-to comfort food: Taco Bell.
Have a nervous habit: Not that I've ever been made aware of.
What is your favorite…?
Physical quality (in yourself): My Goatee
In Others: Eyes. I love looking into them when I'm feeling hopelessly romantic.
Mental/emotional quality (in yourself):Humor. I can quip pretty well.
Food: You got sesame chicken? No? Then...GTFO!
Drink: Coconut water, Rockstar Sparkling, or Shasta
Animal: Doge
Artist/Band/Group: Daft Punk, Rammstein, Metallica, Rob/White Zombie, Dragonforce, Blind Guardian, Iced Earth, KMFDM, quite a few; too many to list.
Author/Poet: Christopher Moore, Dan Abnett, Douglas Adams, Eoin Colfer, J. K. Rowling
TV Show: Star Trek: TNG reruns, Doctor Who, Top Gear, How It's Made, Through the Wormhole
Actor/Actress: Robert Downey Jr., Harrison Ford, Morgan Freeman, Dwayne Johnson, AAARNOLD D:<, too many to list.
Greetings new watchers
Posted 11 years agoInstead of leaving a message in your shout boxes individually as I normally, I'm going to give you a mass shout out here in my journals. I'm lazy, shush.
I got 10 new watchers in less than 24 hours. An awesome thing. I wanna thank every one so far though. Whether you're here for the story or the commissioned art is irrelevant to me, you like my characters and you like my themes. Good enough.
I got 10 new watchers in less than 24 hours. An awesome thing. I wanna thank every one so far though. Whether you're here for the story or the commissioned art is irrelevant to me, you like my characters and you like my themes. Good enough.
Taking the month of May off.
Posted 11 years agoThree reasons
1: I wrote twelve chapters in the span of a single month. Phew that's a lot for me. The most I've ever done. Ever
2: I need to go back and proof read them all. Fix them up, TINY over haul to the story
3: I...found some one who is interested in taking my collar. I want to get to know them <3
1: I wrote twelve chapters in the span of a single month. Phew that's a lot for me. The most I've ever done. Ever
2: I need to go back and proof read them all. Fix them up, TINY over haul to the story
3: I...found some one who is interested in taking my collar. I want to get to know them <3
Validation.
Posted 11 years agoIn reference to this post.
Many of us who write fanfiction do so because the setting presented is irresistible. The world is established but with enough pockets left open for other imaginative minds to take advantage of and present something new. Some times its just what we would like to see, but mostly its ideas and events that accentuate whats already happened or is happening. One of the greatest honors a fanfiction writer can ever dream of is the praise from the author of the original setting. It gives a sense of completeness, acceptance, and incomparable joy.
To have Dragontalon not only approve of the leading lady in my story but to also show that he's read and even likes what has been written is one of the greatest moments I've experienced here on FA, and it inspires me to write even more. This was going to be a journal entry about the sudden funk I've been feeling and the worry of it causing a writers block. Dragontalon? You've shattered that block. Thank you so much. For approving of my characters, for finding my story enjoyable, and for giving me another lift your story provided in the beginning.
Many of us who write fanfiction do so because the setting presented is irresistible. The world is established but with enough pockets left open for other imaginative minds to take advantage of and present something new. Some times its just what we would like to see, but mostly its ideas and events that accentuate whats already happened or is happening. One of the greatest honors a fanfiction writer can ever dream of is the praise from the author of the original setting. It gives a sense of completeness, acceptance, and incomparable joy.
To have Dragontalon not only approve of the leading lady in my story but to also show that he's read and even likes what has been written is one of the greatest moments I've experienced here on FA, and it inspires me to write even more. This was going to be a journal entry about the sudden funk I've been feeling and the worry of it causing a writers block. Dragontalon? You've shattered that block. Thank you so much. For approving of my characters, for finding my story enjoyable, and for giving me another lift your story provided in the beginning.
#1 rules I've learned for creative writing.
Posted 11 years agoDon't ask why, instead ask why not.
Happy birthday to me.
Posted 11 years agoI turned 27 today, and life cant get any more depressing
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